I am a Scottish Student who loves Ponies among other weird and wonderful things.
An unlikely group of friends are called upon to go on a pilgrimage to rediscover something that had been lost to Equestria.
Under the orders of Luna, student Sugar Dove leads her group on a journey that is bound to be full of fun and adventure.
Lets just hope they can all keep it together.
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Hello! I'm a member of the Supporting Oringinal Characters group and I saw your comment on their page. I'd like to make some friends too.
So- I think your story has great potential. The concept is a good one and I like how you've introduced more technology into Equestria, which would make sense hundreds of years after the show takes place. I also think you have some good characters, I can tell you've spent a lot of time developing them.
Your grammar could use a little work though. If you think you might want someone to proof-read, I'm here to help. Check out Ezn's guide too, its awesome.
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Hello, (sorry I've been offline a while, I'm back at university and the demand often takes me away from the joy of personal writing)
Its nice to speak to somebody about writing and I'd love to make more friends here.
I have been thinking about getting proof readers for a while. I've also had some grammar lessons over the past couple of years so hopefully improving a little in that department. (like a teensy bit!)
I can not wiet for more
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love your story so much
I love how you put the characters together.
how It made me feel when they tell the bit of the first owner's and how they acted.
I also made me wonder what happed to the main six?
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I have a plan for the mane six, I am working on the next chapter but university comes first and it may not be till christmas when the next chapter is released.