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Bright Keys


Getting over 6 years of writer's block.

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A unicorn scientist named Volt Spark has finally brought his proudest creation to life: a robotic pegasus named Alpha. In order to give him his own sense of right and wrong, Volt Spark has left the robot with only very basic knowledge. After he gains a little more knowledge, Volt Spark sends Alpha out by himself, where he stumbles upon a town called Ponyville...


... Flitter's in here too, but I can't tag just her...
written between me and Rowan Hooves, who also happens to be the artist behind my profile picture. Here's her Deviantart: http://rowan-falls.deviantart.com/

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 16 )

What does alpha look like? You never went into detail about that

4376076 he's white, with a blue mane and tail that has white in it. I'm actually looking for an excuse to mention his coloring, since I forgot to earlier.

This story has broken 100 views?! Is there something I should be doing? Umm... how about a thank you first! I never expected this story to do this well, and I'm glad that it is! This story is a blast to write, and... that's all I can think of off the top of my head! So, thanks again!


One final thing. If you like this story, I would love to see your feedback, so leave a comment if you wish!

Yus! A story about roboponies!
I like it!
~Melly~

6078340 Glad you like it! I have another, if you're in the mood for some action (except not really.)

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You're welcome. I'll be sure to check it out.
Do you need any help writing this one, since you don't have any more co-authors? I don't want to see this story fizzle out. I would be glad to assist you. If you really, really want to read my writing, you can find me at Penana. Here's a link
I can be a pre-reader, proof-reader, idea-contributor, our whatever you need.
~Melly~

I could actually use an idea contributor. I have a plan for the next chapter, but it'll be by ear from there. As for getting chapters out... I just need to write. I don't think it's time to look for a new co-author, considering how little time I've had writing solo. I'll keep your offer in mind though.

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:
You kinda forgot to make it a reply to me. I didn't see this til today. I was wondering if you had replied or not. I'm so glad I remembered that I forgot to follow this story.
Just pm me when you're ready.
~Melly~

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