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Valtyra


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Hmm, an interesting clop for clop's sake, I suppose. No intro or explanation, just cut straight to the action. I'll give it a thumbs up.

I approve :twilightsmile::heart: Have a like!

Gak, fucking TwiLuna bullshit pairing. Fuck off.

4367391 oh you. Art thou mad?

4367425 Good to know :)

4367434 still worst pairing

TWILESTIA OTP! :D

4367436 Implying I'm not going to have that as a final sequel...

The spelling mistakes are kind of jarring at times, which is never good when it comes to this sort of material. But thumbs up for hoofing! Or, well, hooves up.

4370152

What spelling mistakes did you find?

4371555

"P-Please, use me," Twilight asked, wanting her body to be used for her queens personal urges.

*queen's

Channelling her magic, Luna summoned a large...

Spelt with one "l"

Luna fell forwards and moaned loudly into Twilight's chest as she pushed the you ever deeper into herself.

Not sure what's happening here.:derpyderp1: This one was the one that broke immersion for me.

That's about all I could find.

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Changed : D Thank you.

I feel like I walked in on someone else's fetish. Is smelly feet really arousing, or am I missing something here?
Not trying to be insulting, I'm honestly curious.

4405627 It's not mine either lol, so I wouldn't know what's good about it.

But good question!

4405728 Uhm, thanks. However, that just poses a new question: Why did you write that then?
Because that bit feels like it is supposed to appeal to someone, and if it's not you, then why is it there?

4405824 Why not... I didn't need any underlying motive lol.

I just wanted to not write the same stuff all the time.

Although I do go back to it in later stuff xD

4405844 I guess that's as good a reasons as you need.
For what it's worth, while it kinda disturbed me, it felt pretty authentic. So good job?

4405854 wow, that's appreciated :)

4405859 It is? I'm glad and all, but what part is 'wow' worthy?
Unless you're being sarcastic, but I'll take the smiley as a sign of sincerity.

4405878 I'm completely serious lol.

I just don't have my stuff referred to as realistic much.

4406271 That makes sense.
I have no idea if it's realistic, but it at least reads like someone with that kind of fetish would get turned on.

Dayum!!!!:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:
That was some seriouslu kinky stuff right there!:raritystarry::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4659894 :rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
I stand corrected; the kinkiness has been doubled (if not tripled)!

This site needs more hoofing.

*stops recording the whole thing* (singsong) Blackmail!

hoofing(fisting)

Well then
:trixieshiftright:

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