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    The year is 2569, and Humanity and Ponykind are at war with an alien alliance thought dead known as the Covenant. The Covenant have invaded Earth once again, this time ready to finish the job. This is a story about the defense of Earth, and it's people.

    A Haylo: A New World and a Haylo 2 Spin-off (You MUST read those two stories in order to grasp what's happening)  

    First Published
    6th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    6th Apr 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I have a question:

    Should I continue writing this, Haylo: ODST, or both?

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    IMO, needs more ponies and prologue. The story is kinda confusing, we dont know if the main character is a pony or human.

    It's more related in halo rather than MLP.

    well still, thats my thoughts.

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    #3 · Chapter 1 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>414702 This is a Spin-Off for the story Haylo: A New World and Haylo 2. I recommend that you read those first before you read this. If you have, then I'll try to make it less confusing.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 62w, 4d ago · · ·
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    maybe you should add rainbow dash to this story

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>414974 If you read the stories that the writer recommended you read first, you would know that Rainbow is technically dead.

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>1078070 What do you think about this abomination of a story?

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