Why is the sequel to SHHA getting hated on? The writing quality appears to be very similar to SHHA which is a good thing. Anyway happy to see the sequel up.

While the writing quality is good, I have to say that 2nd perspective stories have always sounded infinitely awkward to me personally. That said, I can appreciate the work for what it is, and I applaud you for that.

>>402214402214

What? No.

This is the sequel to another story of mine.

Trolling? Why?

>>402764402764

Just because you're you.

I cannot trust you.

>>402413402413

I wondered the same thing, but then again, most of the people who favorited this sequel have not read the original.

>>402775402775

The only possible reason for the thumbs down that i can think of is that this story was too sweet and d'awwwww inducing and it have them all diabeetus. I loved it, can't wait for more  

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Sequel???

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Ooh, sequel!

*reads story then reads title* I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE

SEQUEL WOOOHOO

YESS, I FUCKIN' LOVE YOU!

Thank you very much for writing this sequel for a story I very much enjoyed!!!

>>405011405011

>>410905410905

Honestly, If you remember my bitchy comments I was disappointed at how fast the prequel for this story went from 2ndPersonXFluttershy being friends to being married. I mean I really hoped that there would be more events and chapters leading up to the "Big Event" but I am happy that you are writing a sequel.

It will satisfy my need for Fluttershy fics!

>>410925410925

I understand that Jonsey and I REALLY dropped the ball when we did that, but here's our reason why:

If we went ANY further from chapter 8 (as in *we add filler*), the story would only have become bland and underdone. It may not have looked that way, but trust me, we KNOW what that sort of storyline feel is

To make up for it, we decided to create the sequel

WOOOOOO SEQUEL

Liked, tracked, MOAR

This story is awesome!!! Keep up the good work!!

>>410925410925 I was thinking th exact same thing, there wasn't an awful lot of development in the first, not enough for some people to guarantee a sequel.

>>417249417249

Again, if I was to take it further, it would only become stale and bland. We had to end it off at the right moment with enough "daaaaawness" built up to get people asking for more.

Besides, me and Jonsey ran out of ideas at chapter eight anyway. What were we supposed to do?

>>417263417263 Well maybe take a tick or two to think of something? Until You Met Her stayed eventful and interesting just fine and is just as competently written.

Get that idea churn rolling right quick!

>>417280417280

Until You Met Her happened waaaay earlier than this story did, not to mention that author was already somewhat "famous" for other shipfics.

We were just a tad bit afraid that taking it further would only destroy the story.

Now, back to writing!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Twilight, the grown-ups were talking about serious business and you interrupted them.

Still, I enjoyed reading the prequel to this and I am must say i'm going to enjoy this too. Although the whole 'discussion' thing about what Fluttershy might want feels like it has come out of nowhere but these feelings she has probably built up in the months previous to the start of this story.

Anyway thank you again for what is going to be another great story.

Oh Angel... Even for ruining that moment I can't stay mad at you.

Glad to see this new chapter, looking forward to more.

Another great chapter.  I eagerly await the next chapter.

Is Fluttershy referring to Sex being the weird part?

If she is I know this is a story for everyone but honestly there isn't much 'weird' about it...

>>438167438167

It would be weird for *her*

(Described as a very nice, innocent pegasus)

>>438172438172

Well she is considering kids, so she obviously understands at this point in time.

But you do have a point.

Anyway great chapter, can't wait for moar.

I shall fav it but I shall read the first and then this

Very nice!

now i wonder what angel was gonna do hmmm

Kinda on the fence about it, but I'll keep up with it as you write it. Has potential to be pretty D'AAAWWWW-worthy

>>442658442658

Well, it is the sequel to the already 'daaaaaaaw' filled story of mine. Not to mention that the writing style is the same

Awesome!!

Heheheheheheheheheheheheh I like this 2nd person perspective and I liked the prequel. Keep it up bro!

I read the original, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter...whenever that may be.

>>492318492318

It's just a little bit of sidetracking in the way. The first half of the next is already done but I'm working on the second half

Okie dokie, Loki!

>>492374492374 you stole the line i was going to use

>>502276502276

I'm psychic like that.

Curse long hours!

Huh, I assume this will be explained later but I really don't get AJ's worry about this. Ponies get married, they have foals, it's life. Not really sure what's bothering her about it.

Nice chapter partner...

Altough im confused what the 'Big Secret' is altough i have an idea it has to to with 'my upcoming foal'.

>>530101530101

I have to agree, they seem to think that having foals is an embarrassing subject.

>>530180530180

Seems confusing right?

It's all coming in, don't worry

>>530518530518

"You" gave her herpes right? Right?!

Fuck.

>>530896530896

Correction. YOU gave her herpes! MUAHAHAHAHA!

No but really, that's not what happens later on. This is a 2nd person story after all

Was the secret about Fluttershy wanting a kid? Cause Twilight and Applejack seemed really sketched out at the idea, almost repulsed at it.

i don't think a party is the best thing for this situation.

>>531264531264

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This?

Can't wait for more <3 Fluttershy.

>>531341531341

Shhhhh! Gotta wait!

Hmm... I wonder if they're concerned about Fluttershy being perhaps a bit weak to give birth maybe they worry about Fluttershy's health? I saw something like this years ago with some US Drama thing, they were worryed that this woman could die from complications surrounding pregnancy or giving birth.

Please don't make Fluttershy suffer.

Oh and thank you for continuing to write this story.

>>533305533305

As Fluttershy would say: Hush please

Thanks for reading

I think they're just worried that a new foal in their lives is going to change their friendship.

I really wonder what it must feel like to have a Pegasus' wing wrapped around you, especially Fluttershy's!

He's one lucky bastard

>>572743572743

Correction: YOU are one lucky bastard.

This is Second Person romance. That's how my other story became so succesful. I bombarded the readers with 8 solid chapters of daaaaaw then ended it off with the right note of two chapters with promise of a sequel.

>>573329573329and thats why we love you

>>611174611174

And that's why the next chapter is going to be a little late...among other things

>>611811611811NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! :darth_vader:

"Congratulations, you're getting a foal"-party is coming up I guess

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-Glassed

Now...*pant, pant*

On to...*wheeze*...the next chapter of The Next to the Last Unicorn...

*faints*

Oh, I so much hope that it'll be a happy ending, reading this just makes me more exited for the next one

What an unexpected turn of events. I hope it doesn't turn out to be what I think it will be, 'cause I'll really really really really really really really dislike it

update! I'm a little confused. why was Mac looking for a photo, and what's this "history" Redheart was talking about?

>>806499806499

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Good to see you're back on this Hive

Well, that was an amazing chapter.

>>806499806499

wut

>>809030809030

It's a pretty big series of events. It's crazy what I have set up for the next few chapters

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>>809048809048

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>>809334809334

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>>809372809372

I never left it

>>809494809494

Thanks!

This best not be what I THINK it gonna be I seen it before and it don't look and CERTAINLY don't sound right, but I shall wait and see with the little patience I never have.

Sigh... Fluttermac past... this is going to sound like a description for a story called Windfall I think (haven't read it though).

I dislike Fluttermac so much...it couldn't work there would be so much awkwardness if they tryed to talk to one another. Just like SoarinDash where Soarin is nothing more than an airhead with his current personality in the show.

I will continue reading the story though because you are a good writer.  

>>810649810649

Well, as long as there is a happy end. Otherwise...

>>813614813614

Trust me when I say that I hate Fluttermac more than you do. Like, way more. It will appear only briefly, really.

But the story will still have a happy ending...several tens of more chapters from now.

>>813024813024

A slight hint of Fluttermac but in a horrible, disturbing way. Truly, I feel guilty for having thought of it, but with what I have planned, it works.

>>813960813960

Yes, there's gonna be a happy ending...right after the "history"

>>814032814032 I feel like this horrible, disturbing thing will make me sad for fluttershy and want to murder Big Mac but....as long as fluttershy....doesn't....CRY....then Big Mac will be fine, maybe

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Mld ending and cliff hangers can end in a simple way drawing huge middle fingers and saying fucku readers :D great job anyways

>>818568818568

I would never do such a thing!

"The only way to describe the feeling of the question was like having your brain smashed down by a slice of sweet, yet sour lemon partridge wrapped around a large golden brick"

Hitchhikers quote and Dawww... I love this fic

>>821837821837

Not exactly the right quote, but hey, something had to fit

>>814027814027

I don't think anyone can hate FlutterMac more than I do...

>>816479816479

I also totally call either Flutterrape or something else, maybe a bit less horrible that has done.

>>838850838850

Nnnnnope! No rape! But that's the only minor spoiler I'm giving out.

Besides, it's not going to happen for a long time from now.

You ruin everything, Trolestia...

So Hivemind, just out of curiosity, what's the timeline of this story? Is there a certain length of time that it takes place after season 2? Ages of the characters? It just helps me get a better picture of everypony.

>>859877859877

Just like 95% of other stories on the site, I either:

A.) Don't know

or

B.) Do know but coming up with one now would only disfocus myself (yes I made that word up)

>>859891859891

So... less than fifty, older than twenty?

>>859899859899

Ages of the characters are just about a year older or so since the previous story. Timeline? Can't answer that as per my earlier reason.

>>859908859908

That's fine, I can use my imagination to piece together the timeline. How old were the characters in Setting Her Heart Aflutter?

>>859923859923

Subtract about a year and a half

My most sincere of apologies for going with the "long wait, short chapter" thing here. Writing has been increasingly difficult lately, and trying to put thought to word document is harder than it looks.

Big Mac wants Fluttershy or somepony but did something bad.

Twilight want a relationship.

Guess who get together?

Just a theory.

inb4 TwiMac

Wow, I totally forgot I had this favorited. Can you say "overdue for an update"?

But it's k, because we got a WONDERFUL update. Glad to see this fic isn't dead!

Keep on writin'!

GRRAAAAAHH suspense is KILLING MEEEEE I love it in all its great storytelling but hate it in it's marvelous storytelling....can't wait to hear that history. Watch out Big Mac, there's poison in this apple...

I request anotha!

My apologies to all of you for making you wait for so long. My time is being occupied by your typical IRL problems, as well as the next chapter of Diary of a Foalsitter which I have yet to finish, but once it is, I will get back to working on this story,

-Hivemind

I wub this!

Really good story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next