Discord, My Son

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Based off of the picture and info that Seanica, a famous DeviantArtist, has provided, this is a headcanon to how Fausticorn's (Lauren Faust as an Alicorn, but you knew that already, ^_^) love for Discord is described through her eyes and heart, and how she resents having to keep him punished.

All credit goes to Seacina for a great headcanon topic.

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dj-pone3fan

dj-pone3fan #1 · Oct 21st, 2014 · · ·

http://upimage.us/server/php/files/its-so-beautiful.jpg

EmberBlues

EmberBlues #2 · Oct 21st, 2014 · · ·

5167390 I know right? It's not easy making an emotional fanfiction.

Cloperella

Cloperella #3 · Nov 6th, 2014 · · ·

>he still had ones who had faith in him.
those who had faith in him

>the Twin Sisters of Canterlot
not sure why twins is capitalized. And I'm pretty sure Celestia and Luna aren't twins: Celestia is older than Luna, I believe. Yup, just checked the wiki it says "younger sister".

>Discord's mother wanted it to be keep that way,
kept that way

>Her name only known to very few beings-
>That is the wish of Lauren Faust.
You just took out the intrigue of the character by doing this

>She puts her hoof on the the stone carvings, as emotions of relentless guilt flowed through her. Tears started to show, but Lauren wiped them away, knowing that it won't do her any good to cry. However, they kept coming. All she could do was cry silently in her own guilt, no matter how hard she tried to fight it.
>puts= present tense
>wiped them away= past tense
past or present tense: pick one

>This happened even when he was younger. Punishment was his playtime, especially when he was given a task as punishment.
This is a good example of the major weakness of this story: the exposition is telling us that things are sad, bad and all sorts of unfortunate, but it's not really giving us any context of what's happened in the past, besides what we already know from the show itself. The new stuff being presented, about their mother, is really vague and non-descriptive.

>"She told me all about it. T'was a close call, but it's all good now."
Why not just have her say "It's all good in the hood my homedawg"

>He looked up towards Discord's face only to find that he-the God of Chaos himself-was crying.
1) Should be "She" unless there's another male besides Discord here
2) Readers should be smart enough to understand the rain dripping from Discord's face is symbolic of tears; if you have to explain the symbol, it's not an effective symbol

>You showed how you hoped and desired for Discord to forgive you for what he has done.
>forgive you for what he has done
>I forgive you for me going rogue and power hungry