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Elitist Scum 517119

Joined December 2011
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    Elitist Scum's Stories (5)

    • Do you need to ask?
      What happens after Big Mac and Cheerilee walk off into the sunset after the H and H day episode?

      2,166 words · 2,121 views · 80 likes · 0 dislikes
    • A Tale of Two Dictionaries (and a Chicken)
      Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle and Applebloom talk
      1,029 words · 938 views · 51 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Shadow of the Bat
      Batman/pony crossover of awesomeness.
      5,554 words · 280 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Life
      Season's change, and so do the lives of ponies.
      3,090 words · 323 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Trotham Knight
      3,223 words · 449 views · 4 likes · 3 dislikes
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    After years of prosperity ushered in by Apple Enterprises, Ponyville is no longer the quaint little village it once was. Now a booming industrial and shipping center, Ponyville has built itself up, but the shadow it casts has grown too, and no one knows that better than the young Apple Cider.  

    Special thanks to Spyro Conspiracy Theorist for the wonderful custom art.

    http://spyroconspirator.deviantart.com/

    The picture source is just a link to the artist's DA page, so if you want a full size copy of this picture, just message me.

    First Published
    28th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    6th May 2012

    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 55w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Well this here is an old concept battered and brutalized by the folks of this site.

    Though in your case I can make an exception. A few grammar and word problems here and there but not enough to detract from the actual story and most likely missed by the average reader. What I mean to say is, good job. Good job.

    *edit*: Some fitting music,  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXKrsJZWqK0

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 55w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>512834 That's my motivation for making a somewhat good one. After seeing to many like this butchered, (Me being guilty of one of those) I set about trying to make a good one that would flow well and still be new enough to not be a copy paste, but still loyal to batman

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hmmm...

    It seems quite interesting, and it appears that the author is not an incompetent fool.

    Tracking.

    It looks pretty good so far Big O.

    Caû

    ~ Avatar Noah (The Renegade Cowboy)

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter. I like where this story is going.:twilightsmile:

    ~Avatar Noah (The Renegade Cowboy)

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Bueno

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