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TheExhaustedBrony


I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.

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When a fire engulfs the Everfree forest, Fluttershy goes inside to save her woodland friends. She wakes up in Ponyville Hospital and learned how many lives she saved that day. Now she's stricken with guilt for not saving enough.

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Very short and very well done. You conveyed a lot of emotion in just over a thousand words.
I can definitely see Fluttershy doing something like this.

Beautiful. I am touched by it.

This was nice, but I think it could have benefited from being longer.
Maybe show Fluttershy rescuing a few of the animals Twilight mentioned, and I would have definitely would have liked to what was going through her mind.
What was she thinking when she pulled those animals to safety.
But otherwise, this was pretty well done.
:twilightsmile:

Elements of generosity AND kindness everypony! Putting her life on the line... That's both selflessly generous and unbelievably kind!

This was totally awesome. That is exactly how I would imagine Fluttershy would be when it comes to saving her animals.

Brilliant story.

Seven rabbits, four ducks, two beavers, twelve mice, a fawn, and a bear cub are alive thanks to you."

:rainbowderp: Great whickering stallions! Fluttershy, I think you've been practicing with Bulk Biceps, there, huh?

Flutters is the REAL MVP

This reminded me a lot of the ending scenes of The Schindler's List. Very nice!

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