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Dynasty-Kaine


So am I famous yet? No? Perfect! I will write my stories for you, and there will be much rejoicing...over cake! =D

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This story is a sequel to Our Pasts That Haunt Us


It has been a month since the last events of this story where Applejack died tragically, Pinkie Pie became entirely unstable, and Spitfire returned on a journey of self healing. It is here that Rainbow Dash finds one gem of hope in her world, dropped down to her from somewhere in the infinite universe. In this last month Dash and Spitfire have been talking almost nightly, as the Wonderbolt captain tried to repent for all of the wrong doings she did to others.
Dash still suffers a pain in her heart, and Spitfire wants to heal it but must first heal herself. That aside all of the pain from the last story inevitably made Pinkie Pie a victim of a dark vengeful heart, and much to the residents of Ponyville's displeasure, she also became psychotic in her tendencies. What will it take to bring the old pink party mare back to reality, Rainbow will have to find the answer to this question in her heart as well.
THIS FIC IS WRITTEN IN ANTHRO FORMAT! (If you are absolutely disenchanted with the idea of reading anthro don't read, but I really think you can get past it and imagine them as normal ponies. Stories are all in the imagination after all!)

Also Artwork is obviously not mine, nor does it represent the ANTHRO tag in my story. Yet it was the best possible match. Credit to the actual author and NOT me.

Has also been featured in Pedro Hander's Featured Muffins(July 18th, 2014)!

Chapters (39)
Comments ( 341 )

YES YES YES YES YES I LOVE YOU... I mean uuuhh :heart:

4438372 Lol it's all good! :heart:
Btw you forgot to say first...you are first to comment on the story. Way to go! :rainbowlaugh: :moustache:

4438392 See I don't care about that kind of thing but what I find hard to Believe is that others have not commented on your amazing work!:pinkiehappy:

4438399 But for all the awesome, someone will find a structural error in how I write...as I've learned. Would be nice to see it all of a sudden get 300 views and like 50 likes...but I don't think it can happen. Even if everyone that read it tried to get it attention by advertising it! :rainbowlaugh:
And yet I am thankful to each and every one of you loyal readers of this story!:twilightsmile: You let me know my efforts to write, are not in vain.

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
To Each And Every One Of You!:twilightsmile:

4438424 Love your Luna profile picture:heart:

4438587 Lol yeah I felt it was time for a switch! :derpytongue2:

9 likes 2 dislikes...I really hope this doesn't end up the same as Our Pasts...it's at a 2:1 ratio of likes to dislikes...(52:26) :applejackunsure:

Aha! I leave for a few days to get mildly more important life stuff out of the way, and about ten different authors decide it'll be funny to get me to catch up on my reading by updating EVERYTHING.
Then I completely forget about them because I find this. Then I read this. Then I leave this comment. Yay! Sequel! I believe we may be onto another winner here, the intro definetly looks promising.
And for the record, don't worry bout that like bar, its not really a valid way to tell if people like it. Comments like Derp, those who bother to tell you, and myself about how we think you're awsome are what matter.

Wow. Deep. This is what happens when I leave the computer alone for a week... Anyways, keep up the great work, as always!

4444294 Wow :rainbowderp: that was just...thorough :twilightsmile: Glad you were so enthused by the release of the sequel, and I am quite happy you think the story is a winner! :pinkiehappy: Still wish it could make popular box, but ah well can't have what we want all the time! :derpytongue2:

The Likes/Dislikes are still a nice gauge since I don't often get comments like the ones I do from you, Derp, and Contodaslasganas (Wonder where Conto is though...:derpytongue2:) Although when you do comment it is QUITE the Morale booster I must say! :twilightsmile:

Wonder where Conto is though.

Right here! :twilightsmile:
Finally, I read the two chapters! Screw the workers at Starbucks and their constant glares, I'm using their wi-fi for important things!
Anyways, loved it so far, and it's good to see that you included Pinkie and "Jackie" (As I read the chapters, I was thinking, "Wait, Dash, what about App—" and then you included it in. :twilightsmile:).

Now, as is customary...

NEED MOAR! :flutterrage:

4482279 Hehe as the blog you posted on says...Monday gets you chapter 3! And I'm just about to finish writing 4 right now! :twilightsmile: Glad you are still quite alive!

Everyone I know I'm late on chapter 3 and I apologize for that, been kind of sucked into writing up chapters following it...not to mention a ton of other things! Will most likely post it tomorrow.....after my driving test :pinkiecrazy:

Why can't I hold all these conflicting emotions?!? :applecry:
What do you seriously want me to feel? Hatred to how she used Soarin? Or pity for the actual soul-crushing desperation to be forgiven?
And one more thing, Nydus. He's a stallion that truely feels well fleshed out even with the short introduction. And you almost caught me off guard when I forgot this was anthro.
Another great chapter, keep 'em comin'!
Also apologies for the bluntness of the first half of this comment. Dark Souls II eats at your emotions.:pinkiecrazy:
Well, back to praising the sun! Ravelords away!

4516998 Had a hard time with the Soarin and Spitfire part? you will enjoy the next Spitfire PoV chapter then :derpytongue2:
And did you seriously think I did well at creating Nydus? :pinkiegasp: Really really? :twilightblush: Naw surely you jest!:twilightsheepish:
Blunt? Nah it was all good Voxel, didn't seem too blunt a response at all! :twilightsmile:

Now this Pinkamena I like...
Not too psychotic, even with the violence, but with just that touch of evil villian that makes it work.
But either way this story ends I look forward to and hope to see more of our favourite psycho-mare! :pinkiecrazy:
Great work as always!

4547419 :twilightsheepish: Well she is gonna slowly come back to her reality...in this instance we just find her with a second personality that needs to be put in check...it will pass...so apologies now on that bit! :twilightsheepish:

Aww... :ajsleepy:
oh well, it was fun while it lasted:pinkiehappy:

I bow before you mighty writer. You have again wow'ed me with another great story. I am sorry for putting off reading this for so long, but I was deep in a big chapter story and was waiting for a few more chapters to be added to this story before I picked it up. Please keep up the work and I am sure you will make it to the box on the front page. Sorry for any mistakes, it's 2:30 a.m. Now back to reading this amazing story.:twilightsmile:

4558937 Thank you for your tired words of appreciation! :twilightsmile: Really means a lot to me, and I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well! :twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

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Finished this chapter around 3 and the morning. Would have keep reading, but there is no more chapters to read right now. So that leaves me to say, I WANT MORE! :flutterrage: You have truly left me wanting more and feeling very sad to see that I now have to wait to read more. You are a very skilled writer. I know you will get more followers, stories views, and even have a story in that box on the front page. You will get there cause you are a great writer. I only got in that box cause of dumb luck. Now I should get back to working on my own writing for a bit.

4562370 :pinkiesad2: Makes me smile to hear people say things like this...:twilightsmile: I am glad you enjoy my story so much. I will keep consistent posts every Friday...although...I really need to start chapter 7 already :twilightsheepish: Get it written out or something ya know? :twilightsheepish:

Yay, I'm first to comment on this chapter. :yay: This was a good chapter. I really love how things aren't easy for Spitfire. It just makes things feel a little real. Please keep up the great work. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I need more. :raritycry: Please.

4594325 Yay, I'm still getting comments! :yay: Aww I'm glad you enjoyed the way I depicted things! :twilightsmile: Just wish I could draw more positive attention my story's way! :derpytongue2:

4594570
I'm going to try and spared the word about these two stories cause I think they are awesome and should be seen by more people.:twilightsmile:

Really great chapter so far. I really want to read more. I did notice one thing.

The rainbow maned mare had to sit and think about things as she continued to sip her tea.

If you read a few place before this when Twilight told Rainbow about the Wonderbolts. You wrote that Rainbow knocked over the remaining tea. Just something small I thought I should bring up. And again first to comment. :rainbowkiss: Two points for me. :eeyup:

4610439 Welp changes made, thank you for the catch Redbook! :twilightsmile:

Awesome story keep up the good work
:rainbowdetermined2:

4611395 Thank you so much for the kind comment, like, and favorite of my story! :twilightsmile: It really means a lot to me at this point in time! :pinkiesad2:

Hmm.. I've got a niggling feeling that Spitfire's day was much, MUCH worse. And I've just got to say it: enjoying the gradual emergance of PinkieMac here:pinkiehappy::eeyup: even though we all saw it a mile off.

Do I really need to say my regular closing line? Ah what the heck, i'll say it anyway!
Keep up the awsome work! As always!

4615649 lol:twilightsmile: Yeah it was prolly much much worse...and we all may yet find out in the bonus chapter I may throw in with chapter 8's release...i just got the idea like 5 seconds ago! :derpytongue2: And I know it was rather apparent Pinkie:pinkiesmile: X Mac:eeyup: shipping but ah well it had to happen! If you liked the hinting in that chapter at it though, then you are gonna love chapter 7 to death! :pinkiecrazy:
Voxel, I'm glad you did your closing, as of late I've been feeling uninspired and stuck trying to finish last bit of chapter 8. I really do need to hear from any and every fan of this story...even the ones that are still, "Meeeehhh" about it.:twilightsheepish:
I am glad that I have such kind fans from this story, lest I would have given up writing a long time ago! :pinkiesad2:

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Glad I can be of assistance, due to me currently typing this at 3am and on a tablet, I might leave a slighty longer reply on your blog post at a later date. VoxelTron out! :moustache:

It seems that I'm making a habit of being the first to comment. Very good chapter. Yay for happy time. I'm really happy to see Pinkie getting better and to see Big Mac tell Pinkie how he feels about her. :pinkiehappy: Now I must wait for the next chapter. :fluttercry:

4646524 Wow hasn't even been out that long and you got it! :derpytongue2: Yeah it's a day late, but I had a busy day yesterday. Next chapter, next Friday. I need that week to write chapter 9 which...progress has been rather slow on :twilightsheepish: Now that I have a job may be a little longer too...MAYBE. Figures I get to this point in story and my muse, among other things, hinders my writing! :derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:

4646552
I have been there. I have free time now while I try and find a job. But my muse has jump ship. Right now she has me working on a human version of Rarity and Spike. Keep up the good work and I wish you luck on your new job. :twilightsmile:

4646638 Thank you, and I wish you luck on your journey as well! :twilightsmile:

4646740
I'm going to need all the luck I can get. College is not cheap. :pinkiesad2: I hope everyone is going to like my one-shot I'm working on. :twilightsmile:

Awww :twilightsmile: That's so cute. I'll be honest, I'm not a PinkieMac sort of guy, but the way you've coupled these two is beautiful. I hate Gilda SO much for breaking poor Pinkie like that :flutterrage: I want the old, happy-go-lucky, fourth-wall-breaking mare of madness and insanity back. I hope Spitfire and Rainbow Dash aren't suffering too much with their own tasks. It must be difficult for Dashie, going back to the grave of her unofficial wife :raritydespair: Loving this story. Kinda don't want it to end, but it'll be a heart warming (or heart wrenching?) ride all the same :eeyup:

:rainbowkiss: That is all I need to say...
Keep up the absolutely heart-warming work. :pinkiesmile:
Now we wait for the traumatic travels of Spitfire.... :trixieshiftright:

4646754 College not cheap? I know that story all too well! :rainbowlaugh: And I hope they enjoy it as well!:twilightsmile:
4647426 Don't want it to end but it will eventually...yet I get the feeling it will be longer than its predecessor :derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy: Glad you enjoyed the Pinkie X Mac coupling I tried out by the way! :twilightsmile:
4650991 Glad you enjoyed, and yes now back to the traumatic life and times of Spitfire! :rainbowderp: Oh wait did I just give away next chapter? Oops! :derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh::trollestia:

4652379
I am enjoying it. I got to meet a few other fans of the show at my college. Well, now back to counting the days till the next chapter of this story. I need more :pinkiecrazy:

4652406 Yeah well as I've said chapter 9 is on a really hard working process right now so once 8 is done(aka posted)...I may be in trouble if I don't crank that soon! :rainbowderp: :twilightsheepish: As for college well...I'm not as open in public about my bronydom :derpytongue2::twilightblush: But then again I'm more focused on my classes than anything else! :twistnerd:

4652510
No rush, the story is good and I don't want a bad chapter cause you felt rush. As for me being open. Once I got out of high school and found MLP, I just gave up caring what others think and so I wear the shirts and my laptop is has stickers. :twilightsmile:

4652545 Thank you for the consented wait in case of delay. :twilightsmile: That's cool that you can be like that, my personality doesn't always manage that so...smoothly! :twilightblush:

4652632
I never said it was smooth. But I just figure that college is the best chance to be me. I don't see no reason to hide what I like. I like the show and if anyone has a problem with it, they are out luck and I'm not changing who I am for others. Life is just to dang short to let other change you. But enough about my dumb ideas on things. Keep up the great work. :pinkiehappy:

4652661 :derpytongue2: lol alright then! I will try my best Redbook, you take care now! :twilightsmile:

4652723
I will and you do the same. I enjoyed our little chat. Message me if you ever want to talk. :twilightsmile:

Wow, things will not be easy for her.

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