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Zephyr
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Okay, so you're right, the writing does feel rather rushed overall, but by fan-fiction standards it's hardly terrible.
The fact that he knows exactly what he's getting into is a nice touch. A lot of people do read about events on the wiki before encountering them themselves, so this could create a more relatable gaming experience for them.
I look forward to seeing where you take this. And yeah, I feel this is good enough to warrant me promoting it, I'll throw up a blog post now.
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The second chapter will be less rushed.
Turning an actual game experience into a story is much easier than creating an intro out of pre-made stuff.
Anyways, thank you for the promotion, the next chapter will be out later today!
-Zeph
Soarin picked woman as starter gender with curvy body and big breasts perk huh?
lol he is a pervert and i wonder what he wil react or should i say ''she'' will react when Saorin takes a break from CoC or CoM in this case and discovers what changes have happened.
Spitfire is sure in for a suprise when she meets Soarin again
i wonder how huge the breasts will be and what other add ons he/she will get.
maybe consume a couple of Fox Berries or enchanted version of it to gain extra breast rows or Incubus Drafts to become a herm, or maybe Snake Oils to become a naga or a combo of all the above i said.
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Oh don't worry, 'he' knows everything of the game, he read the wiki!
And I can't really tell what will happen, the story is a literal storification of my gameplay, I write it as I play, hah!
So get read, soon I will post the next chapter, only the matter of hours!
-Zeph
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true tho what he doesnt know is he will also change outside the game based what he do in-game hehehe
just see how Rainbow Dash reacted when she took a break from her gaming session in the other story lol
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Ah-ah-ah, he knows~!
Read the first chapter again, more carefully!
I also hinted that he knows how to 'flush out' the changes out of his body, thanks to a perk of his pro gaming gear.
Soarin' here is the guy who seems to be lazy and maybe even dumb... and that is his cloak, hiding his actual, overzealous self! What do you think, how did he become a Wonderbolt?
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ah ok i was hoping he didnt know about the "changes" that would happen outside the game lol
oh well lets see what kind of perverted situations he will get into but since its based from your gaming experience..... you naughty pony
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The most surprising things happen when you THINK that you are prepared.
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Eeyup since you cant be prepared for everything.
well anyway cant wait to see what the next chapter will bring
4346976 canine peppers do that too
Hey Zeph, will you please credit me with prereading somewhere?
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Yeah, sorry about forgetting it.
Heh. So CoC stories are becoming a thing now?
I'm on board!
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Hopefully!
Oh by the way, grab your chair because I'm close to finish the second chapter!
Well well, certainly a busy start.
Not that I'm complaining at all though. One can only go through the same starting events so many times before one gets bored of them.
Should be interesting to see where you go from here though, particularly since you're heading back to reality now.
But even in game, at this pace your character will start to forge a personality of their own in a couple more chapters, no doubt. Fun times
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I plan to make a chapter equal to one ingame day, this way I can go on forever.
About the going back to reality: since Soarin' exactly knows that he looks like the way he is in the game, he will use the opportunity to... test... things...
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I very much look forward to these "things."
Good job, I like the fact Soarin actually looked up the game before playing, nice touch. He seems to know what he is doing, so this should make the story more consistent. Maybe finding the harpies wouldn't be a bad idea?
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Oh don't worry, I have my plan.
But to do anything without getting raped, Soarin' must level up first, to level 6 at least. So we face grinding now....
4347959 Yeah, I guess. Hard part is making the grinding interesting for the readers, but I'm sure incorporating losses and alternating enemies should do it
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Point is I'm actually playing the game!
In fact, I began to play and write just now, so chapter 3 is in the making!
4348164 Ah cool, I haven't played it for months, probably will soon
Anthro and Human? Will definitely read it later. For now, amongst my favorites it goes, so I will definitely see it...
Szép napot!
~Ádám
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You should know the game this is based on, don't start reading before you check the game.
Jó szórakozást.
-Zeph
4348579 Will be done... hopefully soon. I'm crawling from exhaustion, thanks to school...
Köszönöm!
~Ádám
... You know, you don't need Giacomo for the factory. You can just beat up that incubus for XP.
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As always, I have a plan.
Don't worry, every piece will fall into its place, just wait.
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Gimme a few more lines and I'll be able to make a full TF2 sketch
On a less silly note, very hot chapter. Real-life sexytimes are extra fun.
I wonder how Fleetfoot's game will progress from here. Think we'll be seeing a spin-off story any time soon?
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I knew someone will notice those little references to TF2.
And who knows? Maybe I will write that as well!
Though I'm not sure.
We will see!
4351788 No seriously. It's not showing knowledge, but selective ignorance.
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Ignorance? I hope this wasn't an insult.
I planned to meet Giacomo, buy that hentai magazine from him, once in the factory give itto the incubus engineer to avoid a possible fight, saving myself!
Yeah, ignorance.
*slow clapping*
4356531 It is what you make of it. Or, it'll be a waste of money and XP, therefore weakening you slightly in the long run. *slow clap*
no
praise the loopholes!!!
I look down at the sniffling goblin and take her gems, along with a flagon of Goblin Ale. Since I’m not planning to become a goblin, I throw it away: the flagon hits a rock and breaks.
The goblin visibly cringes as the glass explodes into hundreds of pieces.
NOOOOO!! not the ale
you could have given it back
.......oh well who wants to be small anyway when you can be a 9 foot, 5 inch tall naga herm with blue scales three rows with C sized boobs & 0.2-inch nipples (will be bigger) and three 8 inch long & 1.6 thick lizan dicks along with balls thats 3 inch long in diameter and a 0.2-inch clitlol (one of my characters)
oh btw im not far in the game story wise due to gathering items for sid transformation.
oh if anyone want to try type in Sera for a special character thats not mine but which i used
oh also what Sera gives is a 9 feet, 5 inch tall human with white hair, olive skin, three rows of boobs, three dicks but no clit.
also you start with a katana and leather armor and two perks which is history: scholar and Messy Orgasms
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Dude, you have seen some shit...
And you have an awful lot of fun with this game. :)
-Zeph
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hehe
Tentacle bushes. It's ALWAYS tentacle bushes
At least you got some payback on that tree root
[F5]
Ahh, good old save-scumming. Negating any and all threats isnce- dammit, [F9]
Ahh, good old save-scumming. Negating any and all threats since whenever video games were invented.
Interesting that (s)he didn't undo going into heat. I am very interested into seeing how far (s)he's willing to go if (s)he wants to end her heat a little bit early.
Or maybe that decision will be made for her
Not that I think the game actually takes this into consideration, but DD isn't a fixed size. It varies with band size, i.e. the chest measurement just below the breasts, i.e. basically the person's body thickness.
So for example, I think like a 38B and a 36DD would be the same size breasts, but just on a skinnier person.
(Don't quote me as an expert on this though)
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Your logic is flawless, my friend!
About the heat-problem: it can be dealt with, you only have to be cautious.
Well, until the weekend.
-Zeph
Read the orginal and this side story in one go... I MUST try this game out!
I'll be back for more later...
Have a wonderful night!
~Adam
Need spoon, as spoon is best weapon in game. In Latvia, all we have is spoon, no, we not even have spoon now, or potato. Many year ago, we have much spoon and potato, but not now, such is life.
>[quote[Every person is born with a gift. What’s yours?
-Small error there.
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Darn. Once I can get back to writing, which will happen in about a week, I will fix up everything.
-Zeph
oh my 32 calls
If the calls is from his date then Soarin is screwed
@BurningLance Or rather, he won't be screwing. :)
Woo, nice to see this story back up and running
I know it must've been rough to lose your saves like that. Good job recovering so smoothly.
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You may never know. Till the next chapter, of course.
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Thank you, took me at least 3 seconds to figure it out, was a difficult thing to do.
Considering how I create fully blown ideas under a single second.
Welp, now I only need to get the details for the next... ah, here we go!
-Zeph
this one needs the save editor
well now soarin good luck with your girlfriend or coltfriend if she is a he again
also soarin buddy give urta some lovin she needs it bad man like real bad.