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This story is a sequel to "Another Cup of Tea, Madam?"
"GROW UP!"
Sweetie Belle was happy being the joyful young filly that she was, but things soon get turned upside down when two words from a friend changes who she thought she was.
Now, Sweetie Belle must find out who she truly is behind the smile, or be lost forever...
This is a What if story? So this one isn't canon with the original.
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awww that was so cute :3
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw....How can I NOT favorite this? The ending was super sweet!
Really nice. Quite the opposite of the last story you posted.
4360795
Yep.
This is wonderful, although I could see a few small errors it still warmed my
.
A very sweet ending!
4360814
Your horse words are quite good, sir.
4360878
it means a lot coming from a talent author like you.
Thank you.
Aww thumbs up and fave oh and I'm adding this to my group
4360934
Cool, what's the name?
4360947 California Bronies
Cali bros
in the description, you spelled canon wrong.
4361000
thanks for pointing that out.
Whoops
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/6/62/Timmy_pointing_out_fish_in_Port_Bradshaw.jpg
4361033 Wot?
This is pretty interesting and then the ending is kind of anticlimactic. It is cute but their friendship sounds more broken than a sister's comforting words can fix.
I...actually cried a little bit. This was my whole childhood: me wanting to change to fit in and my mom always telling me to be who I was.
awww that was cute
you should make Celestia make Scootaloo play tea party LOL that would be soooo funny!!!!! and apple bloom too 1 
4364221 agreed that would be awesome..
Mines?! MINES?!
4364733 What?
4364752 No 'S' in 'mine'
4364757 Oh thanks for pointing that out.
i.imgur.com/WYs8FFk.png
This is what reminds me of my childhood and now every time I act childsy they say 'Grow up' this made me cry..
4366145 Glad you like it and thanks for the watch
4366151 no prob :3
Thank god
Oh yeah, That's better.
Scoots was right to apologize. I'm glad that you write an epilogue, although I did enjoy he other ending nonetheless.
4369142
Yeah I felt that I couldn't just end the story with them not being friends.
Can I edit Manes? =)
4385669 Like for the second chapter!
Why didn't I read this before? This was so nice.
(Okay, not as well written as Another Cup, but still nice.)
Oh look, uneditted chapter, full of grammar errors.
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(if you care, I can give you the list of the stuff I found.)
4387800 Sure
4387800
I never said I was good at writing. Way to bring a fellow writer down.
4387834 What? You misunderstood. An unedited chapter is always full of grammatical errors.
(Even if you are the best writer in the world)
4387837
Oh.
4387814
knock
attention
maned
comma before "staring" (non-restrictive participial phrase)
Delete one space before "was"
add a "just" before "because".
Delete one space after the period.
delete "thing"
This sentence sounds odd. Maybe break it after "up", delete "because" and start new sentence with "That's"
I'm unsure about this, but is that "on" correct, or just a leftover that should be deleted?
replace period with comma. (said-tag)
Like I said, grammar doesn't tell how good or bad writer you are, so don't feel bad because of this long list. You are a good writer! (There is a reason why I linked in that Grammar Nazi "Who actually cares?" picture
)
I wonder what issues Scoots would be dealing with at home?
(Aside from the apparent absence of her parents) And that hug at the end, THAT'S the reason I love Sweetie Belle. (She's like the little sister I never had 
) Very nicely done. 
4789808 Glad you like it.
eh, so what next then? I though that first chapter of this whole thing was great. I didn't think you need a sequel or additional chapters. with that said, what next?
4831219 It's a "What if" story. It says right there in the description.
Okay, but my question of, what next, still stands.
4831244 Nothing. There is no more chapters for this. Hence the completed tag, no sequels. Maybe in the future, but not for this.
Dang, I'm so horrible for thinking this:
Aka
"Stop looking at porn, Sweetie."
5149685
Awesome!
Over the top, right?