"I only saw my mother for a few seconds after I woke up, when my first breath entered my lungs. My eyes took in the soft light, and there I saw her, staring into my eyes. Her first words to me...The only words she spoke were 'I'm sorry...'. She vanished behind the crimson lights as everything fell around me.
I need to find her....I need to know...why is she sorry?"
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A nice start.
Hoping this continues, and don't end up in quite as dark territory as say, Frankenstein.
4338775 Sorry I haven't updated this one in a while, Equestrian Throwdown had been eating my time, among other matters in life. I am currently working on chapter 2.
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Glad to hear it.
Damn...
Hope next chapter doesn't take quite as long, but this one was just excellent (if short).
I'll be totally honest, i intended for it to be longer, but my harddrive spazzed out and I had to do it from scratch. I feel it was for the better anyway, as it ended a similar way as the first, and shoehorning in the next character in the second chapter was more than it was worth.
The upcoming character will thus have more attention spent on it during the debut in this fic.
Although there is not much to go on here I love the concept and it was well written.
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Thank you :)
Sorry about the delay on chapters, I'll be working on it asap; just hit a rough spot is all.