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Regidar


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Lyra Heartstrings knows that today will be the day everything changes. It's what they told her, and why would they lie to her?

Little does she know that she's not the only one who has been anticipating this day.


[takes place before the season 4 finale]

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 54 )

Should I fap to this?

:rainbowkiss:I'm liking this already.

The Marker returns! I look forward to seeing necromorphs invade Ponyville.

aCB

The human skull I cuddle in bed every night often tells me that today is the day, as well. It usually quiets down after I make out with it a bit though. :pinkiecrazy:

This looks promising.

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Soon, young padawan!

Interesting. Let's see where it goes.

DWK

>Regidar story
>ambiguous first chapter
This is either going to be intensely feelsy or completely ridiculous. I am prepared for either. :raritywink:

I have a bad feeling about the voices in her head and the rock. I hope that the rock is not full of MidiChlorians.

Tentative favourite. I'll have too see chapter two before I decide if I'm sticking with it.

If anyone happens to read this, Regidar is a better writer than you.

So far, so good. Looking forward to the next chapter already.

4326627
I am prepared to submit myself to the writing god.

Your cryptozoology thing get me frightened

should be "gets"

Lyra found, as she walked out into center.

I'm guessing there should be a "the" or "its" in there.

that most ponies got when hitting a rock

I feel this is a reference to Maud Pie? Perhaps this is a tiny version of Ponyville situated on the floor of her residence and the large boulder is in fact a piece of her shit that missed the oatmeal. :pinkiecrazy:

Welp, color me intrigued. :pinkiehappy:

The voices in her head had promised that today was the day everything would fall into place.

I'm so happy, 'cause today I found my friends. In my head...

This rock is either some kind of Colour out of Space, or it's just Tom who decided to visit Rarity...

4326327 woah, good job turning this really dark really fast

I like the image of Lyra.

Faving so I'll actually read it later, since I never seem to touch my Read Later list. <.<

today's the day, today's the day

I read that as this...

That time when Lyra was really the Master. :trollestia:

Buuuuuuut... this is going to be slice of life? I'm confused.

>>>lavender pony>>>

OH NOES!! LAVENDER UNICORN SYNDROME!! :fluttershbad:

I couldn't resist. :trollestia:

Cool, are you gonna continue this, because I want to know what's up with the rock. :rainbowderp:

Arrrgh. A mere 1561 words and you stop right in the middle of a scene without reaching a plot point?

And you were doing so well. :fluttershysad:

:flutterrage:As the bard of Avon said " CRY HAVOC AND UNLEASH THE DOGS OF WAR!!!!!!!! " :flutterrage:

4332116 you should have know better than to expect good things from me

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Ah, Regidar. We meet again.

It's funny, I never seem to check who the author is before I post my comments.

I'm reminded of this song

Good story though :yay:

Go on....

Lyra Heartstrings awoke, her horn crackling faintly with the arcane energies that unicorns typically used when employing their magic. Smiling as the familiar tingling sensation filled her up, she slowly rolled out of the warm folds of her bed. This was going to be a special day; she had been promised that.

Her hooves touched the ground, feeling the cold wooden tiles pressing against them. Lyra groggily walked to the bathroom and took a hard look at herself in the mirror. Her mane was unkempt,

Up until then, I was expecting this to be a ponified version of the shaving story you blogged a few months ago.

*Reads first chapter*
"huh? What the hell just happened?"
*Looks at tags*
Just slice of life. No random, no comedy, no sad, no dark. Just slice of life
*More confusion ensues
Looks at progress*
Incomplete
"ohhhhhh! Okay. Nothing to see here"
Please, do go on.

Alright, i'm waiting, I thought today was the day.

Like Lyra, I am intrigued, hopeful, and mildly annoyed. Looking forward to more.

I wonder if this will update. Hmm, That will be the day, eh? :trixieshiftright:

4547580 I'm actually writing an update as I type this

No Idea what the fuck you are going for, but it has Lyra so I will fav to see where this goes.

4328034 BWAHAHAHA:trollestia:

Ahhh!!!DA DREADED LAVENDA SYNDROME!!!!!!

Uhm... I'm gonna guess this one's dead.

6075152 assumptions make an ass out of you and me

6075576 Been over a year with just one tiny chapter... at the very least it's in a chronic vegetative state. :trollestia:

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or just never written in general lmao

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