Somewhere in Equestria there was a small remote mountian town, the ponies living there were one day plagued by a nomadic beast. Who decided to settled down nearby and from then on make the townponies' lives miserable in any way it could. That is til a time came that a local orphan changed the creature by her mere yet, simple touches of friendship
[AN] edited the summary for slightly better understanding and decided to switch the Sad tag for Comedy instead; hopefully both of these changes were good choices
Chapters (2)
I like it so far, if you ever need someone to do some quick editing for you, don't hesitate to ask.
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n' for t heads up on givin any future help 
thx for likin my story so far
I honestly didn't not know you write as well. I'll put this on my read later for later on, and see about returning the support you give me
Well, i got round to reading it. And wow...
The story was really good, and the idea well executed. The only problem was a few grammar mistakes. Other than that, it was a fantastic read, and a definite like and favourite. Keep at this, you have talent here.
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n' i'll try my best to keep it interestin 
. Also can u maybe point out those grammar mistakes before i try to find them myself 
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Well thx for enjoyin my fic
4420242 I'm not perfect with grammar but I did only notice one or two
Luna is a name, so the L should be a capital letter
Same problem. Celestia is a name, so the C should be a capital.
That's all I noticed really
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. Anyways, considered them fix 
Wow, if those two r it then i'm doin even a better job then i thought
4420670 Yeah, from what I can see, you did really well. Good luck for future parts
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Thx n' again I'll try my best
It's good. Keep up the good work.
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Thx shadow n' i will