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Spike finally manages to get a date with Rarity. It may has been years, but he did it. After the date Spike takes Rarity home. Rarity tells spike that she doesn't feel anything for Spike.
Now Spike stumbled along Ponyville with a few his friends, he rants about nothing..literally nothing.
(Teen, abuse of alcohol.)
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Huh...interesting. I definitely felt something...but not a lot. I feel bad for spike, I know what it's like to be have your
broken. Once I went down stairs to make some toast...I was out of nutella
I like it :)
Poor Spike
In what song is this based? Or is it not based in a song?
I saw the reference to your latest fic, wow, Shining really got famous, you know what, you should make another one, maybe make a collection of one-shots based in songs, 'cause your one-shots are really cool man :D
4317340 oh no! Please tell me your story has a happy ending! Thanks for following me around.
4317381 nothing by The Script, Imma do one more by script before moving on. Thanks for being there like always.
4317392 You're welcome :)
You should do Secrets by OneRepublic before moving on, pretty please with a cherry on top
4317392 If you really want to know how my story ends...
I went to my wallet to get some cash and found out I lost it. Even to this day I can't find it. It's a shame...I had £40 in there. Anyway, after turning my bedroom upside down, I managed to find some money laying around, went to a shop, got nutella and sat on my bed to watch some TV...I've lost the TV controller and am currently looking for it. So, at least I've got nutella. Can't find my money or TV controller, but oh well.
...actually I'm kinda mad about the money and controller thing. I'll let you know if I find them. This is how the story ends for now...
4317428 mixed ending, nutella is great, but loosing money and the remote sucks.
4317422 I meant move on as in from that artist/band.
4317392
Most of the time things like this don't have happy endings. One reason or another a crush usually does exactly what its name implies and crushes the one who has it. I like Spike, I like Rarity, but there's a part of me that sees it as a girl who wants to have him as a friend, but not dating material. I would say something about being friendzoned, but I won't go there. Spike is pinning for someone who most likely will never feel about him what he feels for her. That's one reason I love to write him with Scoots. They're closer to the same age, and their personalities seem like they would mesh really well.
As for the story itself being the guy who tries to keep his drunken friends from pulling this kind of thing let me say that It's not that far off. I liked it. I liked how well it was done.
Good job.
LF
4317466 thanks, unlike some others *gesturing to the downvotes*
4317465 Oh, got it, can you still do it anyway?
4317545 yup
4317725 Yay!
And what song is this one-shot based in?
Sometimes, that's the way life goes. He'll find someone else.
I'm not doing that third song by The Script after all. I'll get started on a latter request, any other requests?
Can someone tell me in what song is this based in?
4322786 this (4th try)
www.youtube.com/watch?v=KMihKmoYfe8
Took me four tries!
4322834 lol, thanks :)
Awww...poor Spike! Rarity should have at least said "I love you as a brother" or something man! :/