• Member Since 13th Oct, 2011
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Zyggy


Just a writer who hates their writing style but does it anyways.

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Yes, I know I'm making three other stories, but there is a distinct lack of Bioshock crossover.
Yes I gave Jack a voice.
Yes I changed the ending.
and yes I need a picture for this!
(Would Jack and Atlas count as OC? they belong to the makers of Bioshock.)

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Comments ( 9 )
#1 · Oct 25th, 2011 · · ·

Wtf did i just read.

Too self-aware. It reads more like it was written by someone who played BioShock than the actual protagonist, especially the endgame loadout summary in the beginning.

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And?
Maybe it is?

#4 · Oct 25th, 2011 · · ·

Meh, it's ok, there are some things that I would certainly change though.

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Same.
My writing always needs changes.

I can't work with the atmosphere of Rapture it seems.
So, cancelled.
If only.

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It's my own opinion, not theirs.

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