hmm interesting

tracking.

also, FIRST!!!

ponies sure love to overreact

>>416117416117 I know, like good god, lol.

And here I thought they were supposed to sort there differences before fighting.

Proc pissed me off time for him to go.

>>448838448838 Cras' pisses everyone off, but he'll go eventually... just wait...

If not I'll just ask Pinkie to deal with him. He doesn't like her for some reason...

>>449637449637He dosnt like pinkie?!?!?!?!.........Pinkie will tear him a new one by sending him to the sun.

>>449643449643 She would do that wouldn't she...

But she is needed in the story at the moment, so maybe later...

>>449648449648Pinkie does what ever she want when she wants...and NOPONY ISNT FRIENDS WITH PINKIE

>>449651449651 ...

I'm scared... Cras' said that he didn't want the party...

>>449680449680Sweet celestia......he is screwed.....go get him a coffin, he will need it.

This reminds me of something, I'm just not sure what it is.

good story, i look forward to more of this.

FIRST!!!

and rainbow dash promptly knocked him out again. XD did i get it?

also FIRST!!!

lol

also FIRST!!! C

Poor Physics...

>>475040475040 He does get a hard time from me doesn't he?

>>487946487946 yes, yes he does.

>>487946487946Moar.As in later today moar.

>>487991487991 I'll try, but I think Proc' might return from his... 'vacation'... some time soon, sooooo, yeah

PS. Did you figure out who the who's ancestor The Pony Statue is yet?

>>487993487993.......I swear to celestia if its a sunny town refrence...

>>488001488001 NO!

Okay, big hint...

Think of one of the most scarring fics ever... and then try and relate that to the Pony Statue...

>>488004488004.....hmmmm.....Ok im going gto give a few guesses,Rainbow Factory,Cupcakes(please no),Sweet apple massacure,and if none of those i got nothing!

One of them...

I think that you know which one...

> obvious reference of Spy from TF2.

>>488042488042 OHHHH! That reminds me! I need to ad one finishing touch to my comment at the end...

CCCUUUUPPPCCCAAAAKKKEEEESSSSS

Revenge is a biatch 2 months in prison pay back time.... except for luna EVERYBODY LOVES LUNA!!!!

I see what you did there, sneaky bugger

I won't be surprised if there are more puns in these next chapter

also i'm enjoying this story thus far! I like the creative protagonist and his back-story

Okay, I need someone somwhere to paint a picture of Fate, Irony, Physics, Surprise, and Order playing poker together.

>>504155504155 Can't wait for that! Could make it the new cover art...

great chapter man when will they realize he's just defending himself

>>517389517389 Hopefully never, this is waaaaay more fun...

MOOOOOOORE GOD DAMIT!

1.Awesome chapter

2.When is Light going to get a break

3. first

Wow Princesses, Congratulations on pissing off what is probably the most powerful being in your world

Image: http://media.giantbomb.com/uploads/2/23264/1746131-you_dun_goofed_inception_super.jpg

Wow......Thats brutal celestia.....too brutal.....i expect lights return....but i also want the fighting to stop..its geting dull now.

>>580869580869Don't worry, it's all planned out...

*insert evil laugh here*

But seriously, the story will be changing...

-Jorofrarie

more updates are required

>>580869580869 I have a feeling that was the last of the fighting between them

MOAR!!!

This has been my personal favorite among all of the chapters for this story. A good break from the Light vs. Ponies with MOAR back-story!

When I read this, my mind was overfilled with awesome!

KEEP IT UP, COMRADE!

Celestia is going to have SOOOOOOOO much ass kissing to do

hehe wuv it

right then Celestia and Rainbow Dash burst in to find...

Image: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-qV0DkiHRmvs/ToCZCNGqXaI/AAAAAAAAAAs/5skALzA-CU4/s400/thats-right-im-back-bitches.jpg

>>488040488040Thankfuly i never read any of those fics!(Exept Cupcakes.....oh god the nightmares...)

>>652535652535 What fics are we talking about exactly?

And I have to agree with you on cupcakes...

I never can listen to anything Pinkie says the same way...

-Jorofrarie

MOOOOAR!

There is only one way to keep me from killing you Joro,and thats with another chapter in a three hour time period.....starting now

GOD DAMMMINT I AM SO PISSED RIGHT NOW!!!! can't control the CAPS LOCK. I don't think I every been so mad and the damn ponies before. Here he was minding his own business and they all try to violently murder him WTF man come on. End this torture already pls. You killing me man. This is the worst case of misunderstanding I've EVER SEEN!!!

Side note: I completely skipped all Italicized paragraphs and being completely Irreverent and space taking.  Also the Bold talking is even less needed so haven't read more then a sentence of it. Just pls focus on prevalent stuff.

>>663452663452 You do realise that the italic sections are actually important to understanding Light's actions in the story, right?

Good, for a moment there I thought that you were just skipping things because you were lazy...

You must have had a good reason, Pinky loves those sections the most and might not understand if you skipped them on purpose...

-Jorofrarie

"Does that mean the Games over?"

"mean the Games over"

"The Game"

......fuck...

>>668662668662

-Jorofrarie

P.S. x2...

>>668690668690Can we expect a new chapter today?

>>668696668696 Soon. This may come as a major surprise, but I do have other things that I need to deal with first...

I know right?! That's how I feel.

Expect another chapter over the next couple of days, I have to do things first... Vague I know...

-Jorofrarie

>>668699668699OTHER THINGS TO DO?MADNESS.Ponies are ALWAYS number uno priority before anything!!!

>>668703668703 It's true!!!!!!

But still, I'm having some trouble getting the motivation to make the chapter, and have it in character, which is the most important, so if you wait the chapter will be better. (And be filled with cuteness... )

-Jorofrarie

Also, have a moustache

the beautiful glow O.O

I SEE WHAT YOU DID DER!

Cuz light is lighter than air and its made of energy so it's light :3 (Wut?)

>>718251718251 Lolwut?

My reaction entirely...

-Jorofrarie

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW SHIT SON!

>>718358718358

glerd te bu serviss

Nice, just wished your chapters were longer.

>>794779794779 I try to make them a decent length, especially considering that most fictions out there have chapters with less than 1000 words each, soo... Yeah...

Potato, cause I feel like it.

-Jorofrarie

>>416117416117

>>416757416757

i think its a misunderstanding, the main 6 (minus Shy) saw shy unconscious near what they thought was a monster, so they jumped to the (wrong) conclusion that Light attacked her. when Celestia and Luna showed up, they did the same thing.

>>11008601100860 SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS?! WHAT MADNESS IS THIS?!

Also, have a caps lock, completely free of charge.

-Jorofrarie

Im not hating on the dark tag......IM HATING ON THE ABRUPT ABSENCE OF THE DAM ROMANCE TAG.

>>11280571128057

lol

Also, is it just me or is there a random copy of my story in the feature box...

...

...

That is all...

-Jorofrarie

Edit. The romance tag may come back, I'm still trying to see where this story will go. Sry...

when he landed he probably was like

Ah fuck my face

And fluttershy is worst spy

Ah he is a smart one. If they saw fluttershy unconcious and him around before he could explain then things would get very real.

And so misunderstandings abound

Mother of god. Someone protect the bear.

I know your feeling sir. I am fighting an epic battle of grand proportions to try and get ahead of a chapter that should have been out weeks ago. Unfortuantely i have writers block tag teaming with him. Need some help

Give physics about 5 minutes of rest and then pinkie and light team up.

>>11284611128461 I'm looking at all of these comments from the title and my face is just:

'...What is this I don't even...'

And I'm writing this while listening to This Day Aria, so I'm trying not to be super dramatic...

-Jorofrarie

>>11283961128396 Someone gets it! Finally!

-Jorofrarie

>>11284771128477

Believe me I do get it. I also have to battle him with a collab and  reading stories that are pinned in my browser. Not fun but im finally gaining ground.

>>11284881128488 It's funny because it's true...

And yeah, the chapter I put out today was the first in, what, 2 months?

Seriously, 'Cras can be such an idiot sometimes...

-Jorofrarie

>>11284931128493

It doesnt get any easier dealing with him. By the way if you need something let me know. Like someone to bounce ideas or some such off of.

>>11284961128496 Will do, always helps to have a second opinion.

-Jorofrarie

And so the day is screwed thanks too, The princess of the sun

>>11285121128512 Btw, did you get linked here by the magical box that hangs in the top-right of the screen?

If so, (Prepare yourself)

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT WASN'T MY IMAGINATION!

*Ahem*

-Jor- Well, you know what I'm going to write...

^ Nothing else needs to be said.

>>11285391128539 <(*)

Penguin.

'Nuff said.

-Jorofrarie

And i see that Celestia finally figures out that Light can feel. Really want to walk up to her and smack her right now.

Nice. And get order off of your back.

And then god walked in and said " Wat the BUCK IS DIS. I leave for 5 seconds and in that time light gained sentience? And Celestia is trying to fight it even though he is normally peaceful. Looks like Gods gonna have to smite something or someone."

Now this is interesting. How did you get a look inside my head while i was angry. Only difference is i use I instead of we. But good job and i shall await the next chapter my friend also good job on getting featured.

Poor potted flowers. At least he isn't about to die this time. Nice Hitchhikers' Guide reference.

>>11286381128638 :D

Also, which chapter is this again? I've forgotten.

And for those hardcore diehard fans of the Guide, Agrajag.

That is all.

-Jorofrarie

>>11286621128662 Dude, just make sure my sister never sees this. She'll have some words for the 'Director', and trust me, it won't be pretty if she ever gets her hands on him...

>>11287071128707...

Lolwut?

Hater of the dark tag? Or something personal...

Nah, whatever, although I would be more worried for you, as you are the one reading the story...

-Jorofrarie

>>11286341128634 You might wanna re-read chapter 14, I've added some stuff just now, so check it out quickly.

-Jorofrarie

>>11287171128717 Oh no, I have nothing against dark. I'm just saying my sister will have something to say about the director being played as invincible. After all, that's her job...

>>11287251128725

There is one force he has no mastery of. And the Director just angered it by killing 2 of its "children"