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This is femmeslash fic, obviously. It's your own fault if you've read it and hate girl/girl.

This is my first MLP fanfic, so it really isn't that great. But I do love Twilight/Rainbow since it's the first ship I've seen any mention of. (Nerd/Jock FTW!)

Thank you VeroMoonlight for the cover image by the way!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

wait ... this is Complete? sry it seems to me there is something missing, something like ... the end?
I mean all we have is RD realizing her feelings, but we don't know what she does with them ....

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I just felt like ending it that way ^^; Sorry if it confused you.

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it doesn't confuse me. It just feels like i read chapter 1 of a longer Story.

A good begining which will never end ...:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

One thing I disagree with, is that TwiDash needs more love.

I'm a fan of TwiDash, but there are tons of stories about TwiDash, and more pictures. It has a steady flow of love :P
You know what I think needs more love? TwiShy.

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Hmm, I will agree TwiShy needs more love.

You felt like ending it there? Cruel april fools joke man.

Edit: and it was going to be such a good story too. . .
Thumbed up and favorited. I hope you continue this.

I don't know if you want to keep going but I think you could do a lot more with this story.

In my honest opinion, I think the story had a great flow going for it. I t also raised the suspense with the cliffhanger ending. I know a lot of people hate cliffhangers, but I particularly enjoy a story that leaves me with just my imagination to find out what happens next. Keep making great stories.:scootangel:

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Aw thank you very much :yay: You're like the first person happy with it the way it is. I like cliffhangers that allow interpretation afterwards, and I wanted the story to focus more on discovering the feelings rather than start dating :)

I think you should write more, but it was still a cute story on it's own. :yay:

.....So many.... Sparkle puns....Can't take it.....Go On Without...ME........
Altogether it was pretty good though:twilightblush:

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Hahahaha! I couldn't resist xD

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Eh buck it I liked this despite.

One does not simply finish a good story after the first chapter. :flutterrage:

393548 the author wanted you to fill in the blanks.

393599 O.O i have one in progress!

393599 Pah, a pairing that needs some love is TwiJack.

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That is true, considering I've only seen 1 or two TwiJack stories. I said TwiShy because that's a pairing I'm a big fan of, but there's not a large amount of content, significantly lower then most. While TwiJack is significantly lower then "lower then most", it's not really my favorite.

Perfect start.

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I'll let you imply what would happen next :pinkiehappy:

you leave us in suspense... plz continue this at least one more chapter pretty please ::pinkiehappy:

Here I'm reading it at my normal quick pace just for it to end even quicker than I expected :fluttershysad:

But it was still very good. Great ideas were in place, and I think more would be a good idea if you ever get bored.
Good job! Have a stache! :moustache:

What an adorable one shot! Story will love this one!

Ugh, not even adorable one-shots could make the sadness of what I'd just read go away.

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