Sometimes, even Pinkie Pie has a bad day. Luckily, although she is known as the mare that brings smiles to everypony else, she has someone ready to do the same for her.
Being called away to her rock farm for an emergency, Pinkie Pie asks Rainbow Dash to watch Sugarcube Corner and alligator-sit Gummy for a couple of days. It's all going so well, until Dash sits down... and hears a squelchy noise underneath her. Oops.
Gummy is such an amazing pet! The best pet in the world actually! Yet Mr. and Mrs. Cake, and even my friends are acting like big worrywarts. I don't know why they're being such party poopers all of a sudden!
Vast VRMMO game world, danger, comedy. Once you log on you can never be the same. Can you ascend to Royalty? The clock is ticking and everypony is fare game.
Magical filly Scootaloo!? dressed in fru fru clothed?! with a magicl duty to save her friends?! Noo way, Rough and blunt Scootaloo wouldn't do that... would she? well if this is the only way to save everypony from the dangerous beasts...she has
Ehhh... It's not that bad, but you may need to hire an additional proofreader. Your current one missed quite a bit. Also, you may wanna spellcheck the title and descriptions.
Other than that, decent little read. Nice mix of funny and sweet moments, all wrapped up in that epicness and charm that is Pinkie Pie.
Are Mr. and Mrs cake and their foals, Pound and Pumpkin cake going to be in the story, like Pinkie has to foal sit for the cakes while helping customers or having Rainbow dash and Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity stop by for snacks?
Why of course Little, they will interact with Pinkie on a case to case bases. Having the twins cause trouble for Pinkie and her customers sounds splendid. Mr. And Mrs Cake will show up periodicly.
A friendly get together is also on the list, hehe her source of smiles for everyday activities.
Woah! Woah! Okay, I'm a very forgetful person, so don't blame me. Uh for some reason, I thought this was a one-shot or something, and I never received the second chapter you sent me, so I forgot! I shall read it now!
Update! A little weird, but nice chapter! Oh, and btw, I saw that you want OC's to be customers. I got one you can use. Should I drop it in the comments or PM you?
Ehhh... It's not that bad, but you may need to hire an additional proofreader. Your current one missed quite a bit. Also, you may wanna spellcheck the title and descriptions.
Other than that, decent little read. Nice mix of funny and sweet moments, all wrapped up in that epicness and charm that is Pinkie Pie.
*le thumbs up*
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Glad it could provide some entertainment.
I'll see what I can do about pre-readers and such at a later time.
4302199 What'd I miss? That was my first time proof-reading, so I'd lie to improve! Well, if you can improve at proof reading, that is
This. Is. Great!
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Ohhh sweet,
I'm glad you liked it keam.
I have more Days about Pinkie pies antics in the stop to jot down.
Hopefully those Normal days will interest you.
An leave you with a smile.
Great story. I wonder how a Triple Sour Apple Milk Shake complete tastes now.
Are Mr. and Mrs cake and their foals, Pound and Pumpkin cake going to be in the story, like Pinkie has to foal sit for the cakes while helping customers or having Rainbow dash and Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity stop by for snacks?
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Why of course Little, they will interact with Pinkie on a case to case bases.
Having the twins cause trouble for Pinkie and her customers sounds splendid.
Mr. And Mrs Cake will show up periodicly.
A friendly get together is also on the list, hehe her source of smiles for everyday activities.
Of course it's going be fantastically awesome.
Seemed kinda rushed, still enjoyed it though.
She turned her head quizzically, "was that the Ice-cream Colt? If it was I should of ask him for Rocky Road, Maud was coming over in a few days."
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Ah, well I'm glad you have enjoyed the read.
*Types away at keyboard*
Let's see how this next one comes out.
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That Treat must be legendary in Mauds book.
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True!
4393332 not rushed as in the chapter was put out quickly, but that the pacing seemed kinda fast to me.
Woah! Woah! Okay, I'm a very forgetful person, so don't blame me. Uh for some reason, I thought this was a one-shot or something, and I never received the second chapter you sent me, so I forgot! I shall read it now!
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Hehe, no worrys Derpy.
It's all fun and games with Pinkie Pie.
Have a extra muffin, Just don't tell them that if they fall into icing... They lose their identity.
4577651 Oh, I won't!
Update!
A little weird, but nice chapter!
Oh, and btw, I saw that you want OC's to be customers. I got one you can use. Should I drop it in the comments or PM you?
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Send me a pm and let me know all about em.
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I'll send you a PM
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Heh, just think. These are regular days.
Nothing crayz....
*cough*
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Ah yes, the power of muffins,
Hey, eat this. Your a beast when your hungry.
Sweet un identified beings. It let's you make a guess and happiness for a correct answer! Fun!
Can my Oc be a customer?
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What's a pm?