• Member Since 27th Apr, 2012
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JaketheGinger


There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.

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One day outside Ponyville, a huge bouncy castle appeared. Nopony knows why, but it didn't seem to be causing any harm at all.

That is, until the Cutie Mark Crusaders end up getting lost in its bouncy halls. So it falls to Pinkie Pie to venture into the rubbery lair and save the day!

Lyra also tags along for some reason. She's not the hero type.

(A 400 follower special my followers wanted me to do, and I'm stupid enough to do it.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

Have all my yes. Pls, take them.

I swear, there is nothing about this absolutely absurd story that I don't like.

It's some horrid creation spawned of the Cthulhu Mythos after a rubber factory exploded. And then Pinkie Pie, because Pinkie Pie.

Hooray for silly premises played straight! :pinkiehappy:

This fic is pure awesome.

Your short description:

Pinkie, joined by Scootaloo and Lyra tagging along, confront a huge bouncy castle, all in an daring rescue mission to save the other Crusaders! Traps, tricks and treats await them inside! Can they survive its bouncy halls and save the day?

>This is superfluous. You already said she was joined by them, no need to say that they tagged along right afterwards.
>It's "a", not "an".
Sorry. Saw it on the homepage and it made my eye twitch. :twilightblush:

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I'm glad I didn't have to see that. :heart:

Calling it now. Next chapter will involve a ball pit, closing walls, and an inflatable serpent lurking beneath our protagonists,

Just like the trash compactor scene from A New Hope.

*Grins* This is a beautiful thing.

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Hopefully the author continues this and doesn't cancel it with how it's been four ears since their last update

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