Confounded adorable fillies being adorable. That was definitely one of the better stories I've read.

That was sooooo cute!

I always did like that comic, it was so adorable. I loved the sweet but simple story told here, but did I detect a hint of Star Wars there? :)

You just made my day, made everything so much better. You took a meme and turned in such a well written and heart warming story just made made my day, and not just because you added Star Wars and Star Fox. Thank you ~Celestia's Paladin

This story was cute, good work!

I may have to read this everyday, for it is one of the sweetest and most adorable things I have ever read. This made my day

Nice... bet you can't do a comic base on this!

http://csimadmax.deviantart.com/art/Big-Mac-Origins-255205815

Eee! I remember first seeing that comic, it gave me such a cutegasm! X3 Nice story, it did quite a good job matching the cuteness of the comic.

D'awwwwwwwww.......

Absolutely loved it!

Well done. Well done.

This story was so well written, I could literally feel the nostalgia. Sometimes nostalgia makes me want to shed a tear for some reason... even if it is someone or somepony else....

....I think my heart just stopped....nope there it is.  Anyways, great job making a platinum story from a golden picture.  I highly recommend that you try to get this posted on EQD if you haven't already. The sheer volume of adorable-ness that this story exudes should net 6 stars instantly.

excellent!, there is a lack of good short fics recently, this was a good one though.

That was absolutely amazing! You took an adorable comic and made it into an adorable story, and it worked great!

Short, sweet, and I loved it. Absolutely perfect!

Wow, what a great, fun little story, and so heartwarming!

I WANT THAT PICTURE, GIMMIE! *STEALS*

Oh dear, this story is delightful! The flashback is adorable and the story afterward is delightfully sweet. You've hit a homerun with this one, well done. I'd recommend this to EqD.

That was funny. The dialogue seemed a bit forced, though, but overall I loved it.

Nice "do a barrel roll" in there.

I loved this story. It's a shame that the ED pre-readers didn't like it. Oh well, their loss.

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

great, you broke my d'aw-o-meter i hope you are happy now

D'aaaaaaaawwww... That was such a sweet little story, and you did a fantastic job creating an entire event out of such a short little comic. Everything feels true to the show (hey, it's not like fanfics are the only ones dropping Star Wars references now, right?) and very well written.

Every popular pony picture needs a fabulous fan-written fic.

I approve of this.

ME GUSTA MUCHO

D'aaaaaaaaaaw.

I just died from an overdose of "D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"

Do a barrel roll!

Awwwwwww.... So cute. BUT DAFFODIL SANDWICH SHOULD BE A CHARACTER TOO1!!1!

Everything they said.  But twice as much d'awww and general adorableness.

That expression on Twilight..o u o..... So much squee in this story!

Frankly, I'd like to read that book they were reading. I wonder how would ponies write space operas.

Anyway, that story itself is a 5-star material. Short, sweet, D'aaawww inducing, and the characters are 'in character'.

So much D'awwwwwwww!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!

Heh, I saw that Haruhi reference there. Nice little touch to the story.

As for the comic if you haven't found the source: http://dreatos.deviantart.com/art/Book-Fort-Twilight-258153548

The comic is in the description where it says B-B-B-Bonus!

Such a nice little story, it's so adorable!!

We need more gems like this, so keep up the amazing work!

......dude, that is a golden story! THIS is why I LOVE PONIES!

I will be faving this, no doubt about that, FTW

so adorable!

*throws up rainbows of cuteness*

Awesome, I like it.

Any more cuteness today and I'll probably die.

D'aww.... Wait. Someone beat me to that.

...

D'awwwwwww

SOOOO CUTE

I say, I really like your stories. Imagining the two fillies playing was so funny. I've had the whole "would you ever want to be young and carefree again?" question in my head so many times, but I agree, nothing is better than now. I wouldn't want to go through my boring, lonely childhood again.

I think I'm gonna go find a bunch of fics about filly Twilight and d'aww all over them. You should write some!

Funny and cute... and a clever take on that meme-comic, too. Very well done.

I want a mini Twilight! Cuteness explosion in my heart

Daaaww   That was really cute

What a gem this is

cute and adorable.

There is a gaping hole in my chest where my exploded. Twice.

So much cute!!!

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

Speaking of which... where is my copy of the Book of Squee... for this must be added...

There really isn't a response more appropriate than D'awww.

This was beautiful. And I gotta ask did you purposefully reference Yuki Nagato in there? I know there were other obvious references in there but I loved that one. Twilight is a perfect character for a Yuki reference

Adorable comic inspires heartwarming and adorable ficlet?

What's not to like?

If I could favorite this ten times I would. This is what I read when I'm sad - works every time.

As if the comic wasn't cute enough, you had to go break the Adorable Meter.

The pacing on the story is great and I really enjoyed the story. Your fic is fluid and great, while also being short, which is completely acceptable. :3

There was some nice references and it was very, very adorable... I think it could actually breathe/stay on the moon with the sheer force of all the D'aaw it contains.

Short and delicious, like a cookie. And you even managed to sneak in an aesop or two while making it very worthwhile, which is quite an accomplishment.

Take my , dammit!

>>1763317633

Image: http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/248/018/a71.png

i wouldnt be surprised if this became an actual episode

Finding this story was the highlight of my weekend. Thank you so much for such a simple, honest, and endearing work.

Thank you,

For the sunshine that's brightened up my day

Thank you,

For the smile that's here to stay.

Thank you,

For a story written for joy's sake,

Thank you,

For leaving a warm glow in its wake.

oh gosh, do a barrel roll

:3

Book Fort out

Yuki Sparkle?

I'm okay with this.

>>484829484829 It should be... it's the perfect vein of spirit for an MLP episode.

I think I suffered near fatal levels of kawaii toxicity. I wanted to cry so badly at how heartwarming this was... I still do. We need more fics like this. Fics of the childhoods of the mane 6, how they met before they even knew it, and things related to their powers, like that comic of how fluttershy found angel and got her stare ability. We need stories like those... stories like this.

yup my heart is stopped from how great and nostalgic and touching this is

HNNNNNNNNNNGH! * falls down*

R.I.P. Madam Axe'm.

Died of Cuteness Heart Attack.

All my d'aaaawwws

Very adorable

The only way it could be cuter is if you had twilight using her magic to pick up toys and chase Rarity around while going "pew pew!"

This was so cute!

I loved this story! It reminded me of this kid I knew back in second grade that I was friends with, and we ended up becoming friends again in middle school after four years of separation and staying friends to this day. You get five out of five Twilight Smilies!

Aaaawwwww!

This is such a sweet story.

You have yourself a favourite.

Well done capturing the comic in the story

the picture is so cute :D and the story was awsome :P

This SHOULD be an episode.

>>738434738434YES IT SHOULD! Also, HHHNNNNNNNNNNNNG

So many feels from this story...

Image: http://static.fjcdn.com/comments/3448993+_fe105a351a0e866973562e739cf29186.jpg

My heart exploded. Thanks.

SO MUCH WUB IT HURTTTTSSSSSS.......

Oh God... TOO MUCH HNNNNNNGH

This was the cutest thing I've ever read. And that comic/ picture is possibly the greatest thing I've ever seen.

Image: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-RS_ioauEOQk/TylvaNkkwdI/AAAAAAAAJa0/fDV4gCDBoWQ/s1600/cute%2Bmeme.png

"Books are fun,"

"They tell stories or teach me things, and they don't laugh at me or make fun of me for being different."

Thumbs

I had seen the comic, but never could I have imagined the genius of this fic. Brilliantly done

Also, HNNNNNNGGGGGHH

No-one has said it yet, and I'm almost ashamed to say it myself but... I must.

DO A BARREL ROLL!

C'mon Hasbro, MAKE THIS AN EPISODE!

>>765924765924

It'd be awesome if Hasbro actually read these fics, but of course they only know EqD.

D'aaaawwww!

EEEEEEEEE It's cute and I'm crying just a little

I remember this :P

This is delightfully retarded.

aww! that was such a sweet story!!!!!!!!

that was so damn cute

Congrats on EqD. Took them long enough, eh?

HNNNNNNNNNGGGG!!!!!!!

I love reading these kinds of fics that show the ponies as fillies. It makes it all the more adaw'able.

Also, the line "In the meantime, do a barrel roll!"?

Silly Rarity, you didn't need Twilight's help with that last fighter. You just needed to TRY. A. SOMERSAULT!

Book Fort and Red Lobster are best fillies.

That comic was so much cute, and the story was the same. Well done, sir

>>788144788144

Get out of here.

Wonderful story really is deserves the EQD Feature for sure. What a wonderful reminder of not living in the past.

The d'aww levels are to the max!

Is it just me, or was this featured on EqD twice

Anyway, still love it! Finished reading it a few days ago and saw it on EqD today.

Congrats

Oh, I found this one back when I was new to this site, and I believe it was my first, or at least one of my first favorites, so I am very pleased to find it featured on EqD My only complain is the time it took them to do so

Read this so long ago. Glad to see it on EQD!