1. Member Since 27th Jul, 2011
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Longtime fic author for other series, father of two, and I enjoy MLP:FiM with my whole family.

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What started as a normal friendly visit ends up taking two ponies on a trip down memory lane that leads them both to realize their friendship began even before Rainbow Dash's first sonic rainboom.

First Published
24th Oct 2011
Last Modified
24th Oct 2011
#1 · 193w, 16h ago · · ·

Confounded adorable fillies being adorable. That was definitely one of the better stories I've read.

#2 · 193w, 16h ago · · ·

That was sooooo cute! :pinkiehappy:

#3 · 193w, 16h ago · · ·

I always did like that comic, it was so adorable. I loved the sweet but simple story told here, but did I detect a hint of Star Wars there? :)

#4 · 193w, 15h ago · · ·

You just made my day, made everything so much better. You took a meme and turned in such a well written and heart warming story just made made my day, and not just because you added Star Wars and Star Fox. Thank you ~Celestia's Paladin

#5 · 193w, 15h ago · · ·

This story was cute, good work!

#6 · 193w, 15h ago · · ·

I may have to read this everyday, for it is one of the sweetest and most adorable things I have ever read.:heart: This made my day

#7 · 193w, 15h ago · · ·

Nice... bet you can't do a comic base on this!

http://csimadmax.deviantart.com/art/Big-Mac-Origins-255205815

#8 · 193w, 14h ago · · ·

Eee! I remember first seeing that comic, it gave me such a cutegasm! X3 Nice story, it did quite a good job matching the cuteness of the comic. :twilightsmile:

#9 · 193w, 13h ago · · ·

D'awwwwwwwww.......

#10 · 193w, 11h ago · · ·

Absolutely loved it!

#11 · 193w, 10h ago · · ·

Well done. Well done. :pinkiehappy:

#12 · 193w, 8h ago · · ·

This story was so well written, I could literally feel the nostalgia. Sometimes nostalgia makes me want to shed a tear for some reason... even if it is someone or somepony else....

#13 · 193w, 7h ago · · ·

....I think my heart just stopped....nope there it is.  Anyways, great job making a platinum story from a golden picture.  I highly recommend that you try to get this posted on EQD if you haven't already. The sheer volume of adorable-ness that this story exudes should net 6 stars instantly.

#14 · 193w, 7h ago · · ·

excellent!, there is a lack of good short fics recently, this was a good one though.

#15 · 193w, 5h ago · · ·

That was absolutely amazing! You took an adorable comic and made it into an adorable story, and it worked great!

Short, sweet, and I loved it. Absolutely perfect!

#16 · 193w, 4h ago · · ·

Wow, what a great, fun little story, and so heartwarming! :heart:

#17 · 193w, 4h ago · · ·

I WANT THAT PICTURE, GIMMIE! *STEALS*

#18 · 193w, 2h ago · · ·

Oh dear, this story is delightful! The flashback is adorable and the story afterward is delightfully sweet. You've hit a homerun with this one, well done. I'd recommend this to EqD.

#19 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

That was funny. The dialogue seemed a bit forced, though, but overall I loved it.

Nice "do a barrel roll" in there.

#20 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

I loved this story. It's a shame that the ED pre-readers didn't like it. Oh well, their loss.

#21 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

great, you broke my d'aw-o-meter i hope you are happy now

#22 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

D'aaaaaaaawwww...:twilightsmile: That was such a sweet little story, and you did a fantastic job creating an entire event out of such a short little comic. Everything feels true to the show (hey, it's not like fanfics are the only ones dropping Star Wars references now, right?) and very well written.

#23 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

Every popular pony picture needs a fabulous fan-written fic. :twilightsmile:

#24 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

I approve of this.

ME GUSTA MUCHO :yay:

#25 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

D'aaaaaaaaaaw. :rainbowkiss:

#26 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

I just died from an overdose of "D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"

#27 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

Do a barrel roll! :duck:

#28 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

Awwwwwww.... So cute. BUT DAFFODIL SANDWICH SHOULD BE A CHARACTER TOO1!!1!:rainbowkiss:

#29 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

Everything they said.  But twice as much d'awww and general adorableness. :rainbowkiss:

#30 · 192w, 6d ago · · ·

That expression on Twilight..o u o..... So much squee in this story! :heart:

#31 · 192w, 4d ago · · ·

Frankly, I'd like to read that book they were reading. I wonder how would ponies write space operas.

Anyway, that story itself is a 5-star material. Short, sweet, D'aaawww inducing, and the characters are 'in character'.

#32 · 192w, 3d ago · · ·

So much D'awwwwwwww!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!

#33 · 190w, 1d ago · · ·

Heh, I saw that Haruhi reference there. Nice little touch to the story.

As for the comic if you haven't found the source: http://dreatos.deviantart.com/art/Book-Fort-Twilight-258153548

The comic is in the description where it says B-B-B-Bonus!

#34 · 187w, 6d ago · · ·

Such a nice little story, it's so adorable!! :yay:

We need more gems like this, so keep up the amazing work! :rainbowdetermined2:

#35 · 187w, 6d ago · · ·

:derpyderp1: ......dude, that is a golden story! :twilightsmile: :raritystarry: THIS is why I LOVE PONIES! :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy:

#36 · 187w, 1d ago · · ·

I will be faving this, no doubt about that, FTW:pinkiehappy:

#37 · 186w, 4d ago · · ·

so adorable!

*throws up rainbows of cuteness*:rainbowkiss:

#38 · 185w, 4d ago · · ·

Awesome, I like it.

#39 · 185w, 3d ago · · ·

Any more cuteness today and I'll probably die.

#40 · 185w, 1d ago · · ·

D'aww.... Wait. Someone beat me to that.

...

D'awwwwwww

#41 · 183w, 21h ago · · ·

SOOOO CUTE :twilightsmile:

I say, I really like your stories. Imagining the two fillies playing was so funny. I've had the whole "would you ever want to be young and carefree again?" question in my head so many times, but I agree, nothing is better than now. I wouldn't want to go through my boring, lonely childhood again.

I think I'm gonna go find a bunch of fics about filly Twilight and d'aww all over them. You should write some! :pinkiehappy:

#42 · 181w, 5d ago · · ·

Funny and cute... and a clever take on that meme-comic, too. Very well done.

#43 · 180w, 2d ago · · ·

I want a mini Twilight! Cuteness explosion in my heart:heart::rainbowkiss::heart:

#44 · 179w, 1d ago · · ·

Daaaww :pinkiesad2:  That was really cute

#45 · 178w, 1d ago · · ·

What a gem this is :twilightsmile:

#46 · 176w, 4d ago · · ·

cute and adorable.

#47 · 175w, 6d ago · · ·

There is a gaping hole in my chest where my exploded. Twice.:pinkiehappy::yay::twilightsmile::raritywink::rainbowkiss::ajsmug:

So much cute!!!

#48 · 175w, 2d ago · · ·

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

Speaking of which... where is my copy of the Book of Squee... for this must be added... :yay:

#49 · 172w, 6d ago · · ·

There really isn't a response more appropriate than D'awww.

#50 · 170w, 5d ago · · ·

This was beautiful. And I gotta ask did you purposefully reference Yuki Nagato in there? I know there were other obvious references in there but I loved that one. Twilight is a perfect character for a Yuki reference :pinkiehappy:

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