Shady Eclipse, an alicorn created for greatness, lived his life preparing for something that will change the world. However one night after his birthday he had a dream visited by the one and only Princess Luna. Luna then showed Shady that he was living a lie and his parents are not what they are. After being shown of his true self Shady now prepares for the worst, with all he can carry he runs from the family he assumed and tries to make it to Canterlot to now alert the Princesses the horrors of what this family plans to do while being pursued by his henchmen.
Chapters (9)
Im allready liking this!
Hope next chapters comming soon.
4266741 Thank you for that nice comment, I plan to go all out with this story.
I look forward to reading it!
Hmmmm. Im guessing that by the time they search fluttershys house he will have gone.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Why is a majority disliking this story?
I think its great! But what will happen with the bad and good news?
4273060 I'm not sure why, either the fact that its another alicorn story or they just don't know yet. The story is going to get better throughout.the chapters. I thought about this story in my head and the ending of it made me cry (i'm not joking) but I don't care. All I want is to finish my first public story, regardless of what others say.
My first ones allready a failure. Its called cursed if you want to know. Hopefully this story will become popular though.
4273519 Hey I forgot to say this but, Thanks for sticking with me along this story.
I like this story. I will allways stick with this story. Its great!
I wish the best for this story.
I do look forward to see how this story goes and what you write next. I personaly think you will do much better than me so far.
4273856 Come on, I'm sure you can create another story or improve on a story better. I don't want to consider myself better than anyone else.
Ok. I'll try.
So, a spear whent through his side and he doesnt pull it out until after using it to knock his enemie unconscious. Sounds, angry.
4284075 Would you kinda do the same thing when you have a spear in you in the middle of the battle? I mean you wouldn't have time to take the spear off during combat.
Id probably just get comfortable and wait to bleed out.
maybe attempt atacking
I just noticed.does he have a cutie mark yet?
4284121 That's his personal side, you see he lived his entire life just trying different stuff not focused on one thing so he lived his life with no Cutie Mark.
This is interesting. I look forward to the other characters realising this. Cant wait for next chapter!
4284319 hey how do I put up a link showing I have a deviant art account?
I dont know. If I find out I will inform you.
4284515 Thank you, insure that the next chapter will either be tonight or maybe tomorrow night!
Could get awkward if they are found in bed together.
Flutter + shady? I think I know whats going to happen.
4336542 Or do you...
It will either go well or fluttershy will say no
Hmmmmmm.
strange potion+evil/crazy king=over powered crazy/evil king?
this is very good so far. Cant wait for next chapter!
4341503 The last chapter is soon to come, this will be my ultimate challenge on creating the ending.
Poorly written, but oddly entertaining.
4426223 I appreciate you honesty. I'm trying really its my first story. I'm currently on the last chapter and i'm developing the last encounter.
4426223 Hey... I guess I kinda need help. I'm starting to feel a little down about the likes/dislikes and the dislikes just hit 10 over 9 likes. Is there anyway that I could make it better?
4469909 Not much I could help you with, but just try to flesh-out your writing style.
4471597 It doesn't matter now...
FUCK YOOOOOOUUUUUU!U!!!!!!
4474345 Say that as you may, but my decision is final. Just please respect my wishes and to be fair this was a hit and miss.