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    The Moon Fox's Stories (1)

    • The Black Eyes of the Nightmare
      The are other worlds out there, and sometimes it takes one individual to introduce them...

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    It's rumored that the Everfree Forest has a new inhabitant, but this is no ordinary creature. It's not a pony, or a human, either. No one knows how it made its way into Equestria, or what it wants to do. The behavior of this creature is unpredictable, and no one knows its full potential. News spread like wildfire of this supposed terror, and even Princess Celestia herself is worried, because there's a chance this creature could be her match...

    First Published
    1st Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    7th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 30 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 1d ago · · ·
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    First fanfic, so critique is widely accepted.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Seems interesting. But who are Suprise and Firefly?

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #4 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>391931Huh? What are you talking about? I never mentioned those in the story :(

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>392904 Sorry apparnetly when i read this fim fiction was having an april fools thing where they change the names of the ponies to there G1 counterparts. So rainbow dash became firefly and pinkie pie became suprise. Sorry about that

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 58w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>395881yeh, figured that out, too >.>

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 58w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hrrrm...Heavy will look into dis story.. He is interested...

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    'Rising the moon' huh? Three times in a row.

    Skimmed it and locked onto that. Find an editor.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>407077 5 times, actually. No need, fixed it myself. Thanks for pointing it out.

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Damn, the mane 6 actually got their asses kicked for once :rainbowlaugh: I wonder how Celestia and Luna are going to react to the news that the elements didn't worked on Moon Fox.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh boy, is Fluttershy going to confront Moon Fox. Or does she have another reason to go into the Everfree forest? Can't wait to find out. :pinkiehappy:

    #12 · Chapter 5 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh man, Twilight and Spike using each other as meat shields made me laugh so much. You would think they would try to protect each other. And Celestia is pissed. :rainbowderp: I can't help but feel she is going to do something stupid and get her ass kicked in the future.

    #13 · Chapter 5 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>417902 tbh, I come up with the material as I go. I don't have a detailed outline for this, but just scattered thoughts and ideas

    #14 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :moustache:

    #15 · Chapter 7 · 53w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Hrrrm.....

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    Although I'm not quite sure Celestia would act that way,

    But Hay, it's your story.

    #16 · Chapter 8 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Huh.

    #17 · Chapter 8 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Okay, I'm confused

    #18 · Chapter 8 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    is it me or the rivalry between the dua resembles that between goku and vegeta

    #19 · Chapter 8 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>601106 Huh, now that you mention it, it kinda does. And do you mean "duo"?

    #20 · Chapter 8 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>602954

    I wrote a hurry

    #21 · Chapter 9 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>594442 That's what cliffhangers are for :twilightsmile:

    #22 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Is she a furry??

    #23 · Chapter 15 · 51w, 2h ago · · ·
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    ........Faust

    #24 · Chapter 15 · 50w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>656774 Y'know, you can use that word whether you think it's proper or not, but personally, I don't like it. And which one are you talking about? There's 4 girls in the group: Celestia, Luna, Corvus, and Moon Fox. The OC's are more like foreigners that come from a world that does not have as many humans in it.

    I mainly don't like using the word 'furry' because 1) I do not consider myself part of the fandom, I just like the idea of non-human characters, 2) Whenever I hear it, I feel like it's an instant link to pornography, and I'm not a huge fan of rule 34 :flutterrage:, 3) I feel like the word is not proper in this situation. It's about the characters' behavior rather than looks.

    #25 · Chapter 16 · 50w, 5d ago · · ·
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    He used a lighting bolt to cut a building just for them to good publicity..

    Victor has now reached the pinnicle of Bad Assery

    #26 · Chapter 16 · 50w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>666527 Interesting choice of words. Victor's not really badass material if you ask me :rainbowlaugh:. He's more of a touchy, emotional person.

    #27 · Chapter 17 · 50w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pretty awesom if i do say so myself

    #28 · Chapter 17 · 50w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>672627 Thank you. It means a lot to me what you said :pinkiehappy:

    #29 · Chapter 18 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wow I didnt expect that to happen..

    Good show sir!

    #30 · Chapter 23 · 45w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Party!

    Thats what you do.

    Your story was good and I hope you well on your future projects

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