It's rumored that the Everfree Forest has a new inhabitant, but this is no ordinary creature. It's not a pony, or a human, either. No one knows how it made its way into Equestria, or what it wants to do. The behavior of this creature is unpredictable, and no one knows its full potential. News spread like wildfire of this supposed terror, and even Princess Celestia herself is worried, because there's a chance this creature could be her match...
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'Rising the moon' huh? Three times in a row.
Skimmed it and locked onto that. Find an editor.
Damn, the mane 6 actually got their asses kicked for once
I wonder how Celestia and Luna are going to react to the news that the elements didn't worked on Moon Fox.
Oh boy, is Fluttershy going to confront Moon Fox. Or does she have another reason to go into the Everfree forest? Can't wait to find out. ![]()
Oh man, Twilight and Spike using each other as meat shields made me laugh so much. You would think they would try to protect each other. And Celestia is pissed.
I can't help but feel she is going to do something stupid and get her ass kicked in the future.
is it me or the rivalry between the dua resembles that between goku and vegeta
>>656774 Y'know, you can use that word whether you think it's proper or not, but personally, I don't like it. And which one are you talking about? There's 4 girls in the group: Celestia, Luna, Corvus, and Moon Fox. The OC's are more like foreigners that come from a world that does not have as many humans in it.
I mainly don't like using the word 'furry' because 1) I do not consider myself part of the fandom, I just like the idea of non-human characters, 2) Whenever I hear it, I feel like it's an instant link to pornography, and I'm not a huge fan of rule 34
, 3) I feel like the word is not proper in this situation. It's about the characters' behavior rather than looks.
He used a lighting bolt to cut a building just for them to good publicity..
Victor has now reached the pinnicle of Bad Assery
Party!
Thats what you do.
Your story was good and I hope you well on your future projects







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