You do not know where you are, all you know is there is a pegasus standing over you constantly telling you to not move as he pins you down.
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- Member Since 11th Mar, 2014
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Just a guy from Australia who likes to write when he's bored, updates are rare but I usually deliver good work.
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Sorry I didn't get back to you. I like it, though. I didn't see any mistakes. Interesting idea, as well. All in all...
9/10 Mustaches.
4391777 Thanks Hothead!
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No problem! I view it as my duty to tell the truth.
4392126 I just hope people other than you like it.
Pretty intreasting, but since it's a one-shot you should mark it as complete unless you intend on extending it.
4392411 Thanks for the reminder, I'm a bit scatterbrained due to it being my first story I've actually put up on a site for all to see.
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No prob, and good luck on your future endeavors.
4392430 Unlike many writers, I don't get many ideas and by the way, shadows are evil, trust me...
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Y̭̩͎̤ͩ͌̐ͮ̅ͩ̏̐Ó̴̢̗̬̑͌͑̐̔̊͝U̸̸̴̺̬̅̒̄͛́ ̖̝̅̿͒̿̔̀K̡͓̲̜̠̍͌N̼̝̗̂ͯ̀ͪͅO̷͉̙̓W̲̦͍̰̜͍̳ͩ͝ ̵̺̜̲̳͔̬̇ͮ̒̓ͯ̚͝ͅT̯͇̹̝̬ͭͪ́̈́ͬ̍̕ͅÓ̶̢͍͓͈̦̰͍̲̯̌ͥ͗̆̎̍O̬̹ͣ̾͒͆͛͗͠ ͖͈̱̹ͮ͛͘M̴̨̛̹̝̘̲̄̓ͥ̆̽̑͛͋Ų͖̫̙̠̪̖̈́̐͞C̷͓͍̉͛͊̅͌͜͞H͖̝̞̲̫̞̳̐ͥ͒̀̾̾!̂͛ͫ̎ͬ̈̀҉̻̻͉̺
4392451 A shadow! You killed Shatterwing, I will get my revenge!
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Ẃ͖͈i̛͚͖͓L̩͙̀̅l̹̬̹̭͚ͣ̅ ̯y̲̦͚̰͉̽ͬ̈͋Ō͇̩̖̍͌͝ͅuͤ̍̅ͦ ̜̭͙͖ͭ͛ͮ͞Ņ̤͓o̓̿ͨͣẆ̷͛̊͒?̫͙͎̯̒̅ͅ
̧̜̯͗
̸̲͙̺̜͉̺̞͛K͚͎̘̄̅̌ͨ͘ȋ̛͖̦̹͈̹̪̌̾L̜͓͎̝ͫ͛ͭl͓̲ͥͨͬI͔̙̭̲͕̠̻ͭͧ̀̍̂̑̏n̜̘̹̰̝͈ͮͥͬ͐ͭ̋G̬̯͔̬̬̰͂ͧ͗ͬ̈́ͣ͜ ̦̮̳̰̪̩̦͂͋̅̏͊Mͪͩ̈́̍̚͝ȅ̤͌ ̤̬͇̯ͧ͗̌̓ͬ͟ͅS̥̮̤̭̪̤̀h̡̙̪̭̞͉A̬͡l̪̺͔̲̃͒ͪḺ͡ ̱͉͇̙͐ͭ̕ͅn̹̟͈͍̳͍̋O̡̦̼̺͈̯͒t͈̪̠̳̹ͮ̍̒ ̶̮͓̗̠̻̳̯̔ͩ̉B̷̲̻̮̊r̶̗̩̰ͪĨ̞̭̳̭͔͕͝ͅn̫̝͓̹̬̦̊̑̌ͫͥ̀G̱͔̳̽̽̍̎̔͐ͫ ͎͂ͫ͛̍̒͋͆ͅb͎̻̜͕̙̓̇A̪̭̥̙̱̖͗̃͌͂ͨͮ͛c͒ͨ͏K̹̮̜̬͓͚̩ͬ̅͝ ̹̝͍̝̤̓̃́ͫ̅̀t̪̤ͯͫ̅́̐H̬̼̬̙͈͎͇̎ͯ͒̃̆́ȅ̞͔̙ ̩̜͍̳͇̑D̪̞͉͉͡ê̗̝̬̼̰̑Ȧ̿ͧ̌̄̑̍d̪͎̤̝̎̊͋̐ͦ.̸͎̘̳̣̣͍̮͌̓̌̂
̹̦̟̹̺̂̃͒ͧ
͆̔ͮ̈́̆͟Y̫̱̹̦̊̍̐o̶̪̭̱͔͍̣̞Ů̶̩̳̱̯̹̈̽ ̛͔̫̺̦͉̫̿ͪ͐ẖ͖͍̙̰̃̓ͬ̂̃̏̆A͍̣͚͓̅͑͐ͪͣv͖̱ͅE͙̦ͤͪ̾͛ͅ ͕̺̯͎̩̋̏̊̍͗͗̌͡y͚͓̝̮͖̬ͅO̻͚̝͈̊̏̀ͅu̎́R͚̮̖ͬ́͒͊ ̸̘̘͉͍̪͔̈͋ḻ̘̝̲̯͞Ị͔͕͔̞̼̖͜f̜̣͕̘͚̝̭ͤ̅̈́̎̚E,̟̦̻̓ͪͥ ̟̩̻̱̙̏͌ͪ̎̀n̻͇̙͇̤̿̅̇ͪ̓̀O̩ͫ͟ŵͨ͂̐ͯ̆̀ ̮̬͓̳̩̰͂ͧ̀F̨̲ͥͮͣͤͪľ͙ͪ̐̄̕E̳͖ͫͭ͌͂̎ͫe̖͐̄͐̓̄ ͈̲͖̠̤W̧͚̩̺̟̞̝͊i̜̜ͪ͑̍ͪ̔͂T̠̞̩̃͒̎͛̓̆h̩̻̼̣ͪ͒ͤ ̖͙̗̥͈̲̔̆̈́̓Į͙͔t̛ͭͪ̎̓̓.̨̤̯͉̞̣̭͐ͣ̉́ͬͤ ̆͛ͧͣ
̰̆̂͡
̘͈̽ͥ̀Ṡ̶͕̰͇̜̅ͯͥͥ͌h͎͓͖͚͉͕A̫͓͇̮͑̌́̀̆͘d̺̖͈͊̑̌̈͐̄̋O͌ͣ҉̩̣w̤͖͙̬ͧͯ͑͘ ̺͔͇̜̙̤ͦ͘I͇̟͕ͭ̆̈́̍ș̘̇̃͒̈́ ̻̰̃ͪ̍ͣ͜L̦͌̐͂e̩͓͉̝̯͍͍̊̉̈́I̦̞͑ģ̼̩̹̮̪ͅI̛͇̠̣͎̪ͥ̎ͥơ̙̊̓N͔͙̘͓ͨ̄ͯ͐ͦ.̙̻͚ͮ̀̓
4392471 I hope you know I have unlocked my inner light and can fight off the evil that you are!
Nice!
Do I see a bit of Alan Wake in there? Or was that just my impression?
Nice story though, might even be a Headcanon for the beginning of the Apocalypse, but still nice.
4393061 Thanks Raven and no, there was not Alan Wake meant to be seen in this. It is just my somewhat creepy take on the childhood fear of the shadows at night, turning them into motherbucking monsters!
Well, that was interesting.
Almost like a rant.
Almost manic.
I walk away with one disappointment, not knowing more. What the cause is, how it ended, how it was in the middle.
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That was deliberate, it's to let ponies speculate about how it happened and why.
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Yeah, I know.
I do it myself.
Horrible thing to do to people!
4393852 Yet so tempting...
Totally worth the read!
4393881 Do you understand the meaning behind the shadows?
4393883 Perhaps... But maybe not... They to me could be a darkness within the hearts of all ponies. Or they could be a creature that slowly obsorbs from ponies until they finely take over their bodies and minds.
You really did do an excellent job on this story. Cant wait to see what you have in store for us next :)
4393955 The shadows are your childhood fears my feline equine crossbreed.
4395181 Oh snap... This story just got 120% cooler!
my feline equine crossbreed.
And I like how you said this... I wish Foxes where feline...... >.> But they are canine....
OH! Shadows are killing ponies now?
Very interesting indeed. I like it.
4395268 I'm tired okay? That was a six AM for me.
4395475 That they are, and if you do not unlock your inner light, they'll get you too.
4395484 thou art forgiven...
4395517 Danke. I hate waking up earlier than I should.
4395524 i know this feelll.....
4395524 I just wish my editers where not busy... I have a new chapter that needs a once over and edited... XD... I mostly do all the work but they point out things... busy week lol
4395539 Well if you ever need help I can do it :3
4395567 That... Sounds very welcome lol... You should check out my story thus far if you'd like.....
4395586 Sure! Mail me the link but I'll have to check it at school.
Beautiful piece here, buddy.
Sorry, I never commented. 
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A big thank you to all of you and you will now know, there is a sequel coming.
4417105 KNEW IT!
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YES!
4417217 Happy?
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Very. This was a great story, and I'm glad to hear that there's going to be more.
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WHOOP!
Hmm, nice and interesting story you have here.
that was pretty good.
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4428431 Thank you both!
Hey, not bad! It's a bit short, so it feels kind of rushed, but it's not bad at all. :3
And look! Your story's doing better than mine is xD
4429008 It kinda helps Slendermare has endorsed it twice now
And kudzuhaiku has endorsed it too, that kinda helps a beginning fic.
Here's what I like to say; shoot for the moon and land among the stars motherbucker!
I shot to get it out there and get it loved by all, so far I have not landed!
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Exactly as I told you~! ^^ Good work, man~!
Hmm.
Stumbled across this.
This is actually a pretty good short story!
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This was the first thing I ever wrote, I thank you for giving a young writer's story a look!