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Masterweaver


Just an average insane brony, doing average insane things. Professional Fanfiction Writer and Purveyor, relevant links are on my profile page.

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Once upon a time, one pony asked another out. The other pony accepted.

This is not their story.

This is the story of how everypony else started freaking out when they really, really shouldn't have.







Cover image by PonyLegacy.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 29 )

....now you have my attention

I'm guessing you're intentionally employing some questionable stylistic choices, including Fluttershy's... well, I suppose it isn't that out of character. It makes sense that she'd be defensive of Dash. Still, she seems awfully active in that defense.

In any case, I'm certainly intrigued. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

5316015 Fluttershy has often shown that she becomes very active and protective of her friends when something threatens them. She stared down a dragon in Dragon Shy, and out flew Rainbow Dash in Return to Harmony, while dragging Twilight's balloon. This is very, very in character for her.

Anyway, this intrigues me. I look forward to reading more.

Neat, good start.

Ponies for Orientation Irrelevant Nuptial Traditions or P.O.I.N.T.
Twilight's castle name is now called the Friendship Rainbow Kingdom.

I'd love it just for the title alone. but this sounds like it should be a lot of fun.

And then Pinkie Pie was my spirit animal. Well, with the talking to herself and brain that refuses to shut up. Not so much the vast shipping conspiracy that doubtlessly goes all the way up to the Crystal Empire.

Glad to see this delightful pile of absurdity update. I look forward to more, whenever it may come.

DF

Oh God, I dread whatever it is that Pinkie's unleashing.

If Pinkie's bored then why not ask Cheese Sandwich?

5868726 Because he was banished from Ponyville after the "Bathwater Incident".

*Grins* The soap opera distraction never fails.

This gunna get even BETTER!

Fate is a tricksy one, isn't she? And she needs to learn the fine art of capital letters. You aren't e. e. cummings, dear, and I'm sure Destiny agrees with—

Ow. Okay, that I had coming.

Also, Rarity has been enlightened. Now to see where she goes with it.

'oh weave dammit!' Fate cried. 'i cooked up this popcorn for nothing?! you are the lamest dragon ever spike.' She sighed, jumping into the wind. 'maybe i should go watch blueblood again, he's always good for a laugh...'

'Oh weave dammit!' Fate cried. 'I cooked up this popcorn for nothing?! You are the lamest dragon ever, Spike.' She sighed, jumping into the wind. 'Maybe I should go watch Blueblood again; he's always good for a laugh...'

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Fate has a very specific way of talking.

Oh dear. You know, my first thought is that Rarity actually had a thing for Twillight, and was just now figuring out that she might have a chance to get that royal connection after all. But now...this is going to get really, really complicated, really, really fast. I can't wait!

*Grins* Oh dear... this should be an interesting thread.

And so the avalanche continues down the mountain, building up ever more and larger debris.

Also, way to make me ship Twilight and Time Turner even more than I did before.

Yeah, it's not like Discord has much emotional investment in those two. He has other chaos to incite.

Also, Button inventing the Joy Boy? Never heard that one before. Interesting idea.

Hah! Looks like Discord, at least, isn't blowing the romance out of proportion. Didn't see that one coming.

That was unexpectedly good for a so low amount of likes. I mean, wow, such a suspense with all that jazz characters been thinking and throwing thru. Totally agreed with FanOfMostEverything here.

And so the avalanche continues down the mountain, building up ever more and larger debris.

And that some avalanche, boy!

Beside the damn good pacing of the story there was… Characters. And hey, they were good just as the story, probly even better in comparison! I’m sure Fluttershy (after all that season of the show) would be overprotective of her friend, especially Dashie, who’s been like a big sis for Shy since ages. Similar nice stuff could be said for everyone participating here. I love it.

Then comes the sad part. Ofc i’m a little disappointed that the story was cut off. But, well, that decision was made by author and I could only respect it.

Still, I tip my hat for making at least this much. I enjoyed it, no less.

This is fantastic, any plans to continue?(I doubt but just thought I ask)

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