Twilight enters the Everfree in hopes of getting help from Zacora. However, fate had other plans and soon Twilight finds herself lost. After loosing her nerve, she becomes injured. Luckily, she manages to come across an abandoned town nearby. But this town is not as abandoned as Twilight might think. Nothing in this place is as it seems. Darkness inhabits the town and Twilight will soon find herself trapped within it.
(A Silent Hill inspired story. No prior knowledge of the games needed.)
Chapters (1)
Pretty good so far. Haven't read a Silent Hill cross-over in a long time, so I'm glad I noticed this one
Hope this is as good as I hope, will read later.
Need sleep now...
Good so far! I hope to read more of this soon...
The only problem was that I was not pulled into the story like others I have read. .. But most likely because I am in a moving vehicle lol
Keep up the good work!
4295044 Thanks, I am trying something new so the immersion may not be my best. I had originally intended it to be first person but I have very little practice in it. This is all just one big practice session for me with a bit of fun added in. Hopefully, I'll learn a bit from this because horror is my favorite kind of genre.
4295514 I'll be reading this one way or another! I'm quite sure it was because I was in a moving vehicle though. Looks good and I do love anything silent hill inspired. It's not a big thing but when you made the monster stand on 2 legs just seemed odd to me, not bad just odd. Trying to figure out why 2 legs, what does it represent? Bound/no arms = servitude? The tentacles = the whips to control said slave? And is this town the town of old where the sisters once ruled in their old castle? Is this where nightmare moon came from? I have more questions and thoughts on this but for now this will do... I'm still in that moving vehicle... going home... and hopefully not to silent hill!
4296949 Ooh, I can tell you so much about this story... but I won't
Now I know how it feels to purposely withhold information from readers
Or I can outright lie about parts but you'll never know
Okay, I need to stop being an evil jerkass now...
4308555 oh I see how it is... lucky for me I'm more than willing to wait for a good story, expecially a silent hill based one!
Oh please continue! I'm a big fan of Silent Hill and this story really felt like the games. The monster was absolutely terrifying! The atmosphere of the story is nothing different from Silent Hill! I think Pyramid Head will come and kill that monster than chase Twilight? I don't know, but it seemed a good idea. Please continue!
6086940 This is one of two stories that I am currently looking at going back to later this summer. Thanks for leaving a comment, it means that people are still very interested in this story so I might come back to this one soon.
6090011 *Sighs in relief*. I'm so glad to hear that
I'm looking forward for the nest chapter. Keep up the good job. And just a little question, is Twilight an Alicorn in this story? I don't hate the Alicorn Twilight, I'm just curious.
6091033 I'd have to go back and read my old notes. In all honesty, I can't remember.
This is good, i do hope you make more