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JaydexTheShadowKnight


I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?

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This is a project I've been working on for several years. But only once I saw My Little Pony "Friendship is Magic" did I find the perfect pony group to complete this crossover. Thanks to Lauren Faust I've found the perfect ponies that I think have helped make this idea possible! I know there will be some who do not like it, but hey, ya can't win them all. Now to the summary!

The ponies hold a ceremony opening the magnificent Celebration castle built for their beloved Princess Celestia. However the festivities are cut short when a sinister warlock and his henchmen arrive and begin wreaking havoc on Ponyville! The invader turns out to be a villain Celestia thought she and Luna had defeated centuries ago. Now he has returned and he is seeking revenge and to complete the plans the two princesses thwarted! As the carnage of battle beings to grip the once peaceful town, Twilight Sparkle comes up with a plan to send Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie to Earth. There she hopes they can gain the aid of Goku and his friends.

It has been several years since the kind saiyan and his friends first discovered Equestria. They enjoyed the hospitality of the lovable equines and even helped them defeat a sinister demon who planned to destroy all of Equestria. Now it's Twilight's hope that Goku and his friends will aid them once more. Together will they defeat the warlock, and will he succeed in implementing his plans this time? Read on to find out!

Also some other fun story points! Pinkie Pie can fly without wings! Twilight Sparkle and Trixie are friends!! Have you ever wanted to see the ponies fight some epic battles?! And it seems Fluttershy has the hots for one of their friends from Earth! But who does this shy pegasus pony like? And how will the dragon balls fit in with all this? There's only one way to find out! Read Dragon Ball Pony Z!

Each episode (except episode 1) includes a previous episode paragraph. Great in case you can't read all the chapters at once. And each episode includes a short next episode preview paragraph to keep your appetite wet for more!

If you want to know where this story's events put each character. MLP is near the middle of season two (up to Hearts and Hooves Day). And Dragon Ball Z is around the middle of season 4 (Before they meet cell). The events of this series aren't designed to perfectly parallel with each series. It's sort of like the DBZ movies.

I've done 3 chapters hoping to give you all an idea of where the story is going. Should it be popular, I will gladly continue with the series. And should that happen, there will be a minimum 15 to 20 episodes total!

The cover image is something I whipped up in MS Paint from some cool pics I found on various sites.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 93 )

First Toonami makes an April Fools comeback and now I've got this to read? Oh April Fools day is now officially better than Christmas :pinkiehappy:

This truly is the best day ever. I love you, my good sir and/or madam. Please keep this up!

Warlock does not stand a chance.....

Thank you for all the feedback! I will definitely keep working on this! And I have to tell you all it's only going to get better! :twilightsmile:

its pretty good but confusing at sometimes

Kakarot has only one k in the middle

LordGremlin, I googled Kakarot and found it spelled with one k and two k's so I'll make that correction. :facehoof:

cs95, what about it did you find confusing. I'd be happy to explain any confusing parts. And It will also help me know where to make improvements. Feedback whether good or bad is appreciated.

Thank you! :twilightsmile::

Glad you liked it Danyman258! Sorry I haven't added to it lately. :facehoof: I've been busy working on one of my other fics. The readers keep asking for more updates on it so I haven't had much time for this one. But I hope to add another episode before too long. The good news is I have episode 4 started already! I just need to finish it. :raritywink:

First!!! great story want MORE!!!

I got a question. Based on what I'm looking at, this takes place during the three-year wait for the androids. Am I right?

Btw, this is brilliant, sir.

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Yeah that's the spot in the DBZ timeline I was shooting for or before the battles with Androids 17 & 18. Like the DBZ movies this story isn't designed to 100% parallel either series, but I tried to find a plausible place to fit it in. I'm glad you like it. I'd update this more frequently, but based on it's lack of popularity, and the fact I have other more popular stories I've been working on, it's sadly taken a back seat. But I do plan to continue it. Just not sure when I'll have time to continue with Episode 5. The good news is that i have this planned out clear till the end. And the plot is very true to Dragon Ball Z, if I do say so myself and the addition of the ponies is the icing on the cake!

That's actually pretty brilliant. Although it would have been awesome to have this take after the Kid Buu Saga (since that would me we'd get to see Super Saiyan 3, which is THE best transformation ever), placing it in that timeline is just as brilliant, since, hopefully, that means we'd get to see Super Saiyan. You, my friend, are still awesome. Very, very AWESOME!!!!:raritystarry::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile: And even if you don't make Goku transform into a Super Saiyan, who cares? Goku's still awesome without that transformation.

Oh, before I stop talking, in the story, Goku and the others know the ponies because they fought an enemy that was in Equestria a long time ago. Was that also in the Android Saga? Because, as I can recall, there was no other time for the Z Fighters to fight an enemy in Dragon Ball Z before the Android Saga.

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If I ever do a prequel to this series, the time Goku and his friends first visit Equestria, will be fall in the DBZ timeline after Frieza's defeat. Most likely after the Trunks Saga. (If you note in the story, Goku and ponies remark that it's been nearly 3 years since they were last in Equestria). In fact this series is taking place at almost the end of the 3 years before the arrival of the androids. And hey you know Goku, he loves to cut things close. It's what makes him so awesome! And as for Super Saiyan transformations, don't worry. I've got this all planned out. And while it takes place before the incredible SSj3 transformation, I have something really special in mind that will work nicely in the crossing over of Dragon Ball Z and My Little Pony FIM! Gee I may have to continue this soon than planned, if nothing else, for you and the other two who have been enjoying this. And perhaps the other few who have fav'd this, but just haven't commented. :pinkiehappy:

Sweet! I'm gonna be so happy when Episode 5 comes out. If you need me for something, I'll be doing other things. Have a good day, my friend.

711229 Yep, it just makes even the manliest of men cry manly tears. It's just beautiful.

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Thank you for those comments! I was just in a bit of a slump tonight. I wasn't sure what I wanted to work on tonight. Thanks to your words I found new fuel to work on this story! I've just gotten a good start to Episode 5 now. And I'm up to the part I've wanted to work on for a while now. And once episode 5 is done. The rest of the series will just keep getting more eventful! Oh the battles you will see...Ponies and Z warriors alike with be going to town! Keep in mind Sarabrek has been designed with traditional DBZ villains in mind, not mention some of the cleverness of the pony villains as well.. So I don't think you'll be disappointed by him! :raritywink:

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No probe dude, always here to give credit to bronies that deserve it.
Keep up the epicly awesome story :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I'm not the only dbz/pony crossover guy anymore YAY!!!!

749630 You never were fellow dbz/mlp fic maker! Many Dbz/Mlp crossover makers are in the Group: Equestrian Saiyans

Including our good friend here, way to go jaydex! excellent chapter, can't wait to read more! :rainbowdetermined2:

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Thank you! I'm glad this series is starting to get some attention. And like I said in earlier comments, it's only going to get better! :pinkiehappy:

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Hey guys have you two checked out the new episode?

This chapter was awesome. It was great to see this chapter up. I can't wait for the next chapter. Moar, please?
Btw, fluttershy :heart: jayden... take the chance, Jayden! Date her! (i'd say more, but i'm too lazy.)

Please don't yell at me for asking, but what would the power levels be?

Here's my guess:

Goku (Base form): 20-30 million
Vegeta (Base): 20 million
Piccolo: 15 million
Gohan: 10 million
Jayden: 10 million
The Mane Six's average power level: 1 million
Sarabrek: 30 million
These are my power levels but I have no idea. Please forgive me for starting a war on the internet.

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ROFL! Sorry I'm not laughing at you, just the shear irony of a fellow DBZ fan. And I would never yell at you. I'm touched by your level of enthusiasm! It's easily over ONE MILLION! (It's way over 9000! :raritywink:) Anyway...I have a word doc with a complete power level chart. It's one of the things I made before I even finished episode 1. I guess I should add a chapter with the power levels. The only reason I haven't posted it yet. Is the power level list contains story spoilers. So with that in mind, I may either post an abridged list, or wait till more characters have been revealed. I so don't want to spoil the plot for you guys. Unless the advent of a power level chart with the new chars will only make you want to read more. :pinkiehappy:

775263 Sweet!

On a side note, I think waiting until the right time to post the power levels is a good idea. Anyways, I can't wait to see what's up on the next chapter.

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Glad to hear it! I have to say thanks to you and a few others, like 749966, I finally have the drive to work on this again. Though I am working on a few other stories, so it may be a little while till I get episode 6 completed. But it's in the works and I have started it. And I will wait till the right time to post the power level charts. BTW I just updated it. I discovered I forgot to list one of the ponies. :twilightsheepish:


Who is jayden? I dont remember him from dbz.

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He isn't a normal character from Dragonball Z - he's a character I made up. I wanted to add a character like Teen Trunks, but didn't want to actually use Teen Trunks, so I created Jayden. He's sort of a composite character. I'd go more into detail, but I might end up spoiling some of the story if I did.

y u no take off hiatus and write chapter:raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

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The main reasons are lack of time and there just doesn't seem to be a lot of interest in this story. I do plan on continuing this, I'm just not sure when that will be. That's why I put in on Hiatus for now. :fluttershysad: I do apologize, but I have stories that are vastly more popular than this one, and I have to stick with what inspires me most and what my fans are demanding the most. If this story starts drawing more interest and followers, then I'll be happy to move it back into the project queue, but for now, I'm afraid I can't say when the next episode will be out. :applejackunsure:

Your improvement is over 9000!

Also :rainbowhuh: self insert?

Vegeta always struck me as noble, in a back handed kind of way.

:flutterrage: how dare he lay even one breathe upon her most glorious highness!

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Good, you hate the villain, then I did my job. :moustache: Don't worry, help was at hand and as the story progresses, you'll see just how interesting things get. Plus Celestia is far from finished! :raritywink:

1990359 I quit following 'Human' because Celestia got killed. With a shotgun. That is an unpretty way to go.

Can't wait until Piccolo takes off his weighted gear.

Fluttershy is best pony Jayden! There's your answer.

Celestia is best princess.

I see what your doing there, good job... good job :yay:

-Kiryu :moustache:

There was a story and I didn't know? Are you kidding me? You cannot be serious. :twilightangry2:

YES!! Chapter six is in business!

*a while later*

This... is so beautiful. And EPIC.

6 out of 5 stars.

The music adds excitement. KEEP IT.

Now to wait for chapter 7.

All I can say is amazing job well done
An the suspense is going to kill me while I wait for the next part :)

Good chapter. I will eagerly looking for the next one!!! Really worth the time waiting for it, Dragon Ball Z was one of my favorite anime series that I used to watch in my younger days... ty for bring it back :heart::heart::heart:

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Thank you for the awesome rating! And have no fear, I'll keep the music. As I think of tracks, I search for them on YouTube and then bookmark them for use in this series. I think I've got close to 30 bookmarked already! I'll be sure to put episode 7 in the project queue and keep this story alive!! Besides, I'm finally to the part where things get really good! The fun part is, this should read just like a saga of DBZ. Even the plot twists and how the battles will keep going back and froth between who's on top and who's eating dirt! :pinkiehappy:



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Thanks to you actively commenting on this story, and from the feedback of others, I know this story isn't falling on blind eyes, it has an audience!! :yay: So I will do my best to make sure I update it more regularly. Depending on my other stories, I should be able to update this once every 1-2 months. I'll try not to let it slip past two months at the longest. Thankfully I've got plenty of the long term episodes planned, because the action just gets even better. :eeyup:

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I know how you feel. Every time I see pics of the Z characters or listen to the music, I still feel the thrill form when each episode was new. And after mulling over this idea for a long time, I'm glad it's finally coming together. Now I just need to keep this updated on a regular basis. Your support means a lot! :yay:


HERE my friends! Have fun DBZ pic of Goku! I hope I can depict a scene similar to this, later in this series! :raritystarry:
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