After coming home from school, Apple Bloom finds her brother Big Mac, talking to Granny Smith. He wants to buy some land and build a house for him and Miss Cheerilee to live in.
Apple Bloom is not sure how she feels about this.
I am Russell Dickson. I live and work in Maysville, KY with my family at Magee's Bakery. I like to write stories form time to time and thought I would try MLP
After coming home from school, Apple Bloom finds her brother Big Mac, talking to Granny Smith. He wants to buy some land and build a house for him and Miss Cheerilee to live in.
Apple Bloom is not sure how she feels about this.
The typos and tense inconsistences are too distracting. I wasn't able to finish because of them.