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Hard worikng Writer. Likes to read stories and Impove his skills. Has a strange sences of humor, don't hold it against me.

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This story is a sequel to The Peach Boy; A Tale of a Blessed Birth


It starts after, The Peach Boy; Tale of a Blessed Birth. This story then continues to take place between the different Storyteller stories.
The only Human in Ponyville a.k.a. The Storyteller of Ponyville is visited by Spike, Twilight's number one assistant, after a storytelling festival Spike is feeling pretty low because all the stories about dragons were about the bad kind. It's a good thing he know a few stories about dragon to help lift the little drake's spirits.
Come listen to them.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

Friend, if you waant anyone to read your stories, the very first thing you have to get right is the title. It's a decisive element and the first bit of advertising for your story. The word you are looking for is "from," not "form." The title of the story should read Stories for Spike: Tales From the Storyteller, okay?

4259369 Thanks for pointing that out I do that all the time it part of my, hang up.
Thanks for the help. Hope you liked it. :twilightsmile:

Update soon please.

7587352 I'll try, I'm looking for the right story to be the next chapter.

What about the story of the Emperor's Four Dragons and the Birth of the Heart Of Kandrakar? Also, you should really get an editor...

Doesn't that story end when someone actually does love her, who turns out to not be a knight at all, or something, and she turns back into a human, but there's a small streak of green in her hair left over as proof that she was once a dragon, or something like that?

9230099 I know about the editing and proof reading, I know what many different versions or the story. I chose the oldest of the stories.

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Actually, that's not entirely true, I mean, the part about Kandrakar was made up for the cartoon, as far as I can tell, but the four dragons isn't, I know it's some kind of folktale, probably Chinese, and it also has many versions, like the part where the Four Long Dragons become the Four Great Rivers Of China to protect its people from invaders, and keep the land irrigated so that the people can continue to prosper, and it has connotations with the four or five Great Sovereigns/Harmony of gods: The Black Turtle Of The North, sometimes combined with a Green Serpent, The Blue/Azure Dragon Of the East, sometimes also considered the Green Serpent, The Red/Vermillion Bird of The South, The White Tiger of the West, and/or The Yellow Kirin/Qilin Of the Center....

9231813 Well thanks for telling me, I had no idea.

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Hey, found two new stories about dragons that Spike would definitely find interesting, "The Tale Of Fire Dragon, Ice Phoenix and the beautiful Pearl; A Tale Of The First Marriage" and "The Carp that jumped over the Heavenly/Dragon's Gate".... maybe you could have the storyteller tell them at the storyteller fair, when little colts and fillies get scared of Spike for being a dragon, because they think that all dragons are evil, from all the stories they heard from all the other storytellers..... it might also make a great comparison, if he tells them the story of the "Four Great Dragons" where the dragons are the heroes and the Emperor, or princess, in this case, is the villain, like with Nightmare Moon and so on.... Oh, there's also the story of Urashima Taro who went to the Dragon King's palace for 300 years....

Oh, by the way, if you want some help writing the story of the Four Great Dragons for Spike, or just some editing or proofreading, let me know, I'd love to help, if that's okay with you.....

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That sounds good. Just give me some time I'm trying to up date a story called Loving Mother. You can PM me with the details, but today I'll be a little out of reach because of the holiday.

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