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Whirring Gears 459120

Joined October 2011
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    Whirring Gears's Stories (4)

    • Room 213
      [2nd POV] You wake up in a strange bed next to a certain cello player you've come to admire.

      39,027 words · 8,609 views · 1,205 likes · 19 dislikes
    • Number One
      [2nd Person Perspective] A tough pony from the city moves to Ponyville.
      37,803 words · 8,072 views · 685 likes · 10 dislikes
    • No Need For Words
      [Second Person Perspective] A strange club goer meets a certain DJ.
      7,084 words · 7,401 views · 575 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Shylock
      [2nd POV] After getting abandoned in the forest, you wind up at a kind animal caretaker's house. However, you soon aren't the only thing that winds up there...
      5,631 words · 877 views · 94 likes · 4 dislikes

    [2nd Person Perspective]

    "Look out for number one."

    That was the way of life back in Clopton. A city where survival was a daily battle.

    Having made a few too many enemies, you move to Ponyville with only a bag of bits, the tools of your trade, and a couple jackets to cover the scars you've accumulated in the past. You don't trust anypony as far as you can throw them, but can you mesh well enough into the little country town to support yourself?

    It'd probably be easier without that colorful maned pegasus bothering you.

    First Published
    24th Oct 2011
    Last Modified
    12th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 278 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 86w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wow. I never knew I was such a jerk.

    #2 · Chapter 4 · 86w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Sweet. Been following the story since you posted it on Ponychan, now I can just track it here :rainbowkiss:

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 86w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 86w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'm already liking where this is going...

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 86w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Great Job Smartass,I Mean Me Not You

    Anyway,This Is Now My Favorite Fanfic Great Job

    PS:I Agree With Soulsilver.

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 86w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ha ha ha ha hah hahhahaha! WIN!

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 86w, 2d ago · · ·
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    bahaaha

    #8 · Chapter 4 · 86w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Love it, already one of my favourites.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 86w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Ditto.

    #10 · Chapter 5 · 86w, 4h ago · · ·
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    I was waiting for this! :pinkiehappy:

    I hope to see more from you.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 86w, 2h ago · · ·
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    An amazing story that makes me lmao. Keep being AWESOME

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 86w, 2h ago · · ·
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    Lmao

    "just wanted to say you can all buck yourselves"

    #13 · Chapter 5 · 86w, 2h ago · · ·
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    Omg can't wait for Part 5

    :twilightsmile:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 85w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Man am I an asshole.

    #15 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 6d ago · · ·
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    dun dun duuuhhnnnnn!  :pinkiegasp:

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 85w, 6d ago · · ·
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    good story

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 85w, 6d ago · · ·
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    wow...he appology will be hard for him

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 85w, 6d ago · · ·
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    goooood ...one

    #19 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #20 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>20826

    Then go stick your head in an anthill. Nobody's forcing you to read anything.

    #21 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 4d ago · · ·
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    YOU ARE A FUCKING TEASE. It puts it on the front page as 'updated' if you edit something. Asshole.

    #22 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>20851

    Sorry, I didn't know that. I'll be more careful about it and let people know when things are just editing mistakes.

    #23 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>21034

    Lol, take it as a compliment that I'm that pissed you didn't continue the story yet xD

    #24 · Chapter 5 · 85w, 4h ago · · ·
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    I'm going mad and my good friend McCall 12 is going mad also. We need this like a cancer patient needs to get a tumour removed. samething happens. we don't get story soon we are gonna die and turn into zombie ponies confirmings spikes fear:pinkiesick:

    #25 · Chapter 3 · 83w, 6d ago · · ·
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    wow, i am a complete asshole!

    #26 · Chapter 3 · 83w, 4d ago · · ·
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    “...you can all go buck yourselves.”  - I can just imagine :rainbowderp: saying "oh no you di'int" in an American accent :p

    #27 · Chapter 5 · 83w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Hows part 5 coming along :scootangel:

    #28 · Chapter 5 · 83w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>32490

    It's... well, some parts are kind of, sort of, halfway, maybe, a little written. Real life has my free time on lockdown (12 hour days) so writing has been a little slow and I've also been working on a few other projects.

    I've decided that I'm not going to wait to write two stories before the next part though and just write what I feel like at the time. I do have a break coming up and if I don't get anything posted by the end of next week, I'll write a short fic about me eating my hat.

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 82w, 5d ago · · ·
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    yup this guy lost all confidence on friendly ponies

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 82w, 5d ago · · ·
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    well if you lived in i town with no friendly ponies yeah eventuly you lose

    trust on everpony

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh: yup i'll do the same if i was pissed but at the whole town well i better start packing

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·
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    yeah i must be crazy:pinkiecrazy: to say that at the town

    but at one pony it's diffrent

    #33 · Chapter 4 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·
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    great story realy unexpected and i like a unexpected thing

    except when i get attacked all the sudden

    #34 · Chapter 5 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·
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    WE DEMAND UPDATES if it's ok with you

    #35 · Chapter 5 · 82w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Um..... WHERE ARE UPDATES?!

    #36 · Chapter 5 · 82w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>37716

    They'll be here by the end of the week.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Lol I read this story with a Spanish Accent, Gotta admit, it was pretty fucking hilarious

    #38 · Chapter 5 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I hope you haven't abandoned this story cause its great so far.

    #39 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Thank you all for your patience. I hope that next chapter can come out in less time.

    I cannot promise anything, though. I apologize.

    #40 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    That was awesome! If anything, be rest assured that this chapter was DEFINITELY worth the wait! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out, keep up the great work gears!

    P.S. I laughed my ass off at the "...fuck." XD

    #41 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowkiss: is all I can really comment with

    #42 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Worth the wait..

    Although a shorter wait would be appreciated eheh.. :twilightsheepish:

    #43 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Brilliant. Just brilliant. I'm, thoroughly enjoying this story, and I can't wait to see how it ends - although, I can guess there's going to be a twist of some sort between then and now.

    Keep going!

    #44 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·
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    fuck...FUUUCK. the term in mlp is horseapples

    #46 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Loved it! So glad you didn't drop this story.

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·
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    lol that was surprisingly awesome :D :rainbowlaugh:

    #48 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·
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    awesome! :rainbowlaugh:

    #49 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh my god, haha, 'fuck' :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: this story is probably in the top three I've ever read, no one pulls off good OC's, and this is the most detailed, creative, and well written stories on this website!

    #50 · Chapter 6 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "Do you know how I got these scars?"

    "No, but I know how you got these."

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