Good story, aaaaaaaaaand...

Image: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-_TkbcIBMy1Y/T2Ioh3r-T_I/AAAAAAAABGA/BAJcgUhFm7c/s1600/firstpost.jpg

Btw maybe fix the grammar?

A rainbowdash ship that is straight?

The horror, the horror!

Nice story.

I would like to request that if you leave a down vote that you at least have the tenacity to explain why you left a down vote. Also some watchers would be nice if you Favorited.

>>447328447328

The grammar is mostly fine, I seriously lack pre-readers and editors however.

Must invent that candy!

>>447367447367

oh ok then i downvote because i want to

this is all

Hmm, this looks ne-*sees third chapter*

NOPE

NOPE

NOPE

I lost it when Luna's name was said....

>>449973449973

As George Tekei would say "OH MY!"

I seriously want to give this candy to a random person

LEVEL UP!

Rainbow Dash has been promoted to WONDERBOLT RESERVE

Awesomeness: +20

Flight: +5

Ego: +25

Intelligence: +15

>>449997449997 DAMN IT TEKEI!!!

That should be

Intelligence -15

Needs about fifty commas, but the sex itself is great. I'd say this is a good improvement over the last one. Keep it up, and get a pre-reader.

Was...okay.  The sex was good to a point.  Though that latex suit really made me laugh and confused me.  It was like an symbote suit, kinda stretching realistically.  You could counter that easily, but eh.  Oh course it needs grammar and punctuation fixes and capitalization of words.  Not big on the SoarinDash ship but I came here for orgy and somewhat orgy I got.  Though in my mind it was more gangbang then a orgy.  

Anyway, still good job.    

>>449997449997

OH GOD YES, DO MOAR PLEASE, this is bucking awesome, but I want to see the aftermath of it though, just to see what happens with spitfire after having 15 orgasims in 2 hours., and I'm serious, I VANT TO SEE VAT HAPPENZS

This story has one hundred percent driven me crazy. I haven't ever clopped before, but yep. But I bucking love the concept of the suit. Ugh, that suit just makes me wanna ASIFJHDJFKDJSDNSDJFCVMDFNBJSDHMVNBZSMD.

I can't stop going on about it. I'm just going to end up keep blabbering off about it because I want it so bad and stuff like that.

This is one of the greatest stories I've read because it makes me sdhjhxsjzakhdkksfahsdgjkh

Um...

Also, I'd love to see what Dashie would look like in that suit...

Also, I'd like to see the "initiation" she has to go through for the wonderbolts if you would.

>>486587486587 agreed

I got one thing to say...  

loved it! And I though this was going to be a sappy relationship thing. Good story and even better clopfic!

>>449997449997 are you gonna do another chapter?

>>17808231780823

No, this story is currently complete. However I do have other stories that run on the same universe as this one, some of them at the same time frame as this one. I also have a story called "Jungle Fever" Which is currently 60+k words long if you're into something big to sink your teeth into.

ummm. DAT ENDING!!

edit:

also, If you don't mind, I like to be able to use the backstory you gave the Wonderbolts.

"Oh Luna, big sis has a very special surprise for you."

     Sequel JUST for that ending please!  Great job with the story.  I enjoyed the back story for the Wonderbolts and the more creative elements that went into this.  I look forward to reading more from you in the future.  Keep up the great writing!

PRINCESS CELESTIA TESTED THAT CANDY!??