What the fuck happened to Pony ville????

This is quite interesting... I shall look forward to more.

>>387941387941

Seems like some sort of zombie-like apocalypse. Tracking.

Tracking

I like that you didn't go right for shock value and kill all but one of the mane 6.

COMING SOON TO YOUR NEAREST FIMFICTION...

I AM LEGEND

STARTING: Twilight Sparkle

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really cool i do want to see what u did with spike did he go crazy, stay same or does he do like nonstop pushups to protect rarity and the rest

This is sad but cool

Now only one question remains... Cupcakes anyone?

DIS IZ WUNDERBAR!!!

I can't wait to read more.

Wow, very intriguing. Curious to see where this goes.

this is awsome i love your work keep it coming

Holy jeebus....they're like....giant evil moths attracted to the light or something  

WTF is going on here, man?!  

This is some brilliant stuff, and reading it at 2 AM makes it all that much creepier!

MORE!!  

*faves*

i like it, it comes of as kind of a 28 weeks later spinoff.... BUT WITH PONIES

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Sex tag. Gore tag. Okay, I'm in.

Whoa...what the hell happened here? *Tracked*

Looking forward to more, more, more. :D

Have a good one.

In the town of the forsaken, nopony can hear you scream.

Good start, will be keeping track of this one

Applejack, keeping ponyville safe.

Its interestring story and I wona see where it goes.

I'd expect Celestia to arrive near the end of the story, when some way to.. deal with, the inflicted comes about.  Thought I have a feeling there is plenty of tragedy left for Twilight to deal with.  Here's hoping Celestia's rescue comes on time and she doesn't end up simply "recovering" the body of her prized student.

"She tried not to think about it...tried not to imagine the gleam that the knives, spears, and swords gave off in the sun."

Huh, this is interesting. So whatever this infection is not only does it drive them to brutally attack anything not-infected but it allows them to create and use weapons; definitely getting Star Wars Deathtroopers vibes here. One has to wonder how long it'll be before the infected learn how to create battering rams or something that'll let them take down the barricaded doors.

I'll also say its safe to assume that there aren't any infected pegasi since they could've just flown away from any ground based infected.

Excellent work, keep it up.

Great. Celestia has created the smart t-virus and Resident evil one is happening.

Hm.

I can imagine a few possible scenarios for the story, and I think I can explain a few things too but there is something I don't understand.

Why those 'zombies' affraid of dark? Why the dark?

This concept... Affraid of dark instead of light... This makes the story special.

Instant track and like!

So, how did Gen 1 names get into the story?

>>390949390949

It's an April Fools thing I think, just got to wait for it to be over

>>390966390966 Aaaaand now my hyperactive imagination has cause the story to be thus "Virus wipes out everything so Generation 4 can arrive." Or something like that. X3

>>390966390966 Ah. Thank goodness for this event only being temporary. Heavy will no longer freak out now :3c

28 days later type story. Keep going

Bravo

Some nice explanation of what's going on and a little bit of action. Although, "she concluded that her basement was far enough underground that the noise would not be audible to those above. Unless somepony screamed or made hot, bodacious love on her table..." this is probably going to come up REAL soon.

Hurray for the brave hearted!

I hope after all this misery and death there will be a happy ending... even thought I doubt it...

Nice plot development and all of that mumbo, I haven't found a grammatical error, yet, and it is just the right amount of Dark to be a good story

Happy writing!

     -smith,smith

Zompony Apocalypse Good

Although I can see Twilight saying fuckasses, I can't see her saying "OI."  Seems weird.

Twilight saying OI! FUCKASSES reminds me of something from somewhere but I can see soemone saying that in a zombie appocolypse.

I love it too.

only if they had diamond dogs with them, just dig a tunnel out.

Twilight gets bored and goes outside to save a small child....

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Badass Twilight is FUCKING BADASS! Nice there. Good for Twilight going insane and save a filly :D

I like what you did in this chapter to explain what was going on and how it all started, it was well done and didn't stick out like a sore thumb or anything, actually it reminded me of I Am Legend in a way when whatshisface would record his findings and make a log out of it.

Well, we know where Rarity, Applejack, Spike, and Fluttershy are. What about Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie? Also, why haven't they tried digging tunnels underground? There hasn't been a mention about it. I mean the basket system is clever, but I was surprised that Twilight didn't elaborate on the tunnel idea. Scared that the noise would attract The Afflicted I guess?

All in all, a nice chapter with a nice development at the end with Twilight saving the filly. It's nice that she now has some company in that lonely tree house :D. Also, I think that the mention of having to have your leg chopped off to escape becoming affected  it going to come up later and I'm not going to like who it happens to :c

Have a good one.

Holy Celestia...it's all gone wrong

>>394938394938  Shawn of the Dead?

Twilight...you crazy, brave, wonderful pony!

I do wonder though...it says they're attracted to magic....why doesn't Twilight just grab them with her magic and crunch their heads in or toss them away or something...then again, there'd probably be too many to deal with

Jeez, what a story you got yourself here!

Very nice. Please continue. Somehow I can picture one or more ponies getting fed up, grabbing anything they can use as a weapon, running outside and yelling, "Here I am! Come and get me!"

Awesome chapter and a very well written chasing'n'saving scene, congrats man, good job!

Damn this is good, but I agree with V-pony, unless they shoot pure antimagic or something I think a rage mode Twilight would be able to take on quite a few zombies.

I have to admit my adrenaline was indeed going by the time she got into the alleyway, well done.

Those pictures also scared the shit out of me after reading that.

Rule #10: Check any survivors for cuts and bruises just in case they are a time bomb.

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Rule #34: If it exists...

Maybe Celestia is one of "them" as well

this story is very good

Very nice.

But please, no more pictures, they shouldn't be needed for a writer of your caliber...

Now I'm excited for the next chapter.

Man, what happened to Catie's parents, that just sucks man T_T

Pinkie made it out with the Cake's babies :D (well, that's what I'm hoping anyways)

Whew, when The Afflicted broke into Twilight's house, you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see if they made it out. Genius using the basket system to get over to where Big Mac(?) and possibly others are :D. That was quite badass with Twilight manipulating the knifes and using them to defend herself and Catie from The Afflicted. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

Have a good one.

HEAVY LOVES DIS NEW STORY! ;3 He cannot wait for moar updates!!

Oh shit man... I'm out of breath... I was on a fucking adrenaline rush... This was insane dude... This had me more on edge than Leap of Faith: Twilight vs. The Great and Powerful... I mean holy shit... This story, kicks hardcore ass. Nothing I've read can come even close to anything I've ever read. I mean even published books by people who made a lot of money on their books. You better not stop writing this story, or I swear by Terrato's beard I will hunt you down. Seriously, I will hunt your ass down. o.o  You rule, in all honesty. This story man.... I don't know what else to say.  

If this is any baseline as to how impressive your writing skills usually are, you could seriously make a living off this quality of stuff. Not that I'm complaining that you're writing fan fiction, but with your skills you could, in all honesty, publish some world class horror stories; stories that I would totally buy.

tracking this story and checking up on it every day, some things are inevitable (I.E.) at some point they are going to most likely end up in a large scale combat situation (Possibly featuring the inflicted using some mannerism of weaponry and/or Projectile vomit?)

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in the words of some random guy at a theater "Dis Gun'Be Gud"

>>409752409752

this

>>396944396944 Condescending Discord?

Awesome chapter, sir you deserve an internet!

That one almost gave me a heart attack. Update soon.

yes big mac saving Twilight and Catie!

Boss, Don't you dare stop writing this.

-Had to pull the poor dear off of you after her fell asleep on your belly.-

'he'

Wohoo, Dashie saves the day!

Or something like that...

Uhm..

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This story is now an 11 on the epicness scale.

Enough said.

excellent choice of music it flows perfectly with the reading and the imagery enhancing all of it perfectly and as usual amazing writing edge of the seat and eyes glued to the text! Can't wait for more.

I have a feeling not all of them will make it to the town hall

Heh..Heavy would not survive in a situation like that. Without my daily intake of Sandvich, I'd lose my mind,

u sir write storys

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oo i hope u make spike a little badass latter on. zombies tough him up a bit.  sorry spike fan.Anyways heres something special

Do you infuse some drug in your writing or something? I'm hooked man.

Magnificent choice of music for that dream scene, this story has got me curious, 'cause this doesn't quite feel like the atypical zombie outbreak. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Things are starting to heat up. Please continue.

That AJ nightmare got me thinking. If AJ is the one that keeps sending the apples to the survivors then why hasn't Twilight sent a letter asking her how she survives?

I'm really loving this development. Dis cliffhanger.

I just realized.... Katie was the name of the daughter from DR2, and Catie is the name of this filly... coincidence?

That was nice... for some reason I'm getting L4D vibes (Blood harvest I mean)

That is SOOOOOO D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW worthy. I like the Twi/Mac /

And the mystery is almost solved... I can't wait to read the next part!

While i must admit was hoping for some spike and rarity romance and i usualy hate when people use big mac because hes not really the dynamic charcter that they make him out to be but your doing him justice and the storys just amazing can't wait for more.

P.S. lesson learned don't cross applejack

No...what I regret is the fact that I agreed to this project...I shouldn't have volunteered this particular subject...

... along with Twilight's memories gives me the thought that Twilight is probably the 'subject'.  And is unwittingly tied up in the project somehow.

Interesting story, and I really want to know what happens.

WOOHO! Go Applejack! If Big Mac is infected its gona take a lot to take him down.

Applejack the Impaler. Nice ring to it. Update soon.

Well, I have a few gripes with the lack of descriptive wording, but I believe you're using that to show Twilight's near defeated mindset, taking in less and less as time goes on. Otherwise, I find this to be a really epic story-line. The afflicted are for once in a zombie fic actually haunting, legitimately scary if you know what I mean. The 28 days later 'OH FUCK OH FUCK!' kind of thing where if you see one, you shit bricks and hope dearly you're faster or that they're injured by some description on the legs instead of the normal zombie thing of just having enough supplies to sustain walking around for weeks on end, casually putting down a stray one here and there that got too close before getting to a quarantine zone and escaping.

I legitimately care about the story line behind this, do continue you epic writer you.

Damn, another excellent chapter my good man. Once again you had me at the edge of my seat when they were running to Town Hall. I'm real sad that Carrot Top died T_T she was so close to being safe and sound.

The whole Twi/Mac thing seemed to come out of nowhere though. It made me go wtf The shipping doesn't bother me, it just seemed kinda sudden and cheesy. Meh.

Well, I'm guessing that Twilight was involved with this project that Celestia started up. I think there's more to this than Celestia simply running away. Oh, and woo, it's the tunnel idea! Figured this would come into play at some point.

Applejack sure is one tough pony. Heh, I thought it was kinda funny how there's all these bodies just hanging on spears and she says hi to her friends like nothing xD. I know she's used to it and all, but I still had a chuckle.

Looking forward to that confrontation with Celestia! Can't wait!

Have a good one.

>>429463429463

My first comment on my own story, but this had to be addressed my dear Nightcore.

The shipping seems sudden does it...oh Nightcore, you should know me after all these months....

You should know there's a method to my madness MUAHAHAHAHAHAH!

This is basically resident evil 2 with minor WOLOKAI tweaks. the tweaks make it awesome. GOOOOOO WOLOKAI!

Applejack and Rarity are a little perverted...Good chapter though. I look forward for more.

What? No sexy time? Haha, Applejack and Rarity are such pervs xD.

Welp, now we know for sure that Twilight was there with Celestia when this virus was created, I'm just wondering now what part she had in the making of it. Poor Twi, having that guilt tugging at her :c

Next chapter! Looks like shit will be going down soon! Mwahahaha....*ahem*. Curse this story making me late for the things that I should be doing. Laters.

Have a good one.

AAAAnnnnnd the plot thickens!

awww no twilight dont chase Celestia in the forest no one can hear u scream out there

Very nice. i thought spike would have done something heroic by now. idk i just feel spike would do something like that. he did with the dogs. anyways very good chapter let me explan better with this.

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>>436275436275 dude theres 28 days later werid zombie type ponies applejacks killed ponies and stuff so what you exspect she just listerned in not watched tho ;)

should of, could of

wrong.

should have, could have

Furthermore, you consistently wrote then instead of than.

Aside that, I like the way this is going.

>>438242438242

I've been thinking of getting a pre-reader so I can avoid these ._.

But who...? I'll post a blog about it and see who all would be willing.

>>438278438278

I'd be willing, but only as a second proofreader, since I hate to take full responsibilities.

Great googlie mooglie!  I should NOT have read this at 2am.

I was so excited about this fic I wrote the next chapter a few days early Enjoy this two for one day special!!!!

Woo i love this fic. keep up the good work

Whoa....

Have a good one.

P.S. Listen to Bioshock 2 Main Theme when the video starts, perfect.

"I have not... come this far... to die now!"  -- Nick, L4D2

"I have not...come this far...to stop now,"  -- Twilight Sparkle, Don't Go Outside...

Awesome.

...

Wait, if she is a carrier... and the virus spreads with body-fluids...

Big Mac. He and Twilight...

O_O

Celestia. Will. PAY!

Now Twilight will feel sad and will not know what to do because she is the one who somewhat caused the outbreak.

Also you would think that they would stop her from using magic in there it would seem logical.

>>440191440191

As Twilight explained, those Afflicted lose the ability to use magic, and she was sedated anyway so they didn't expect her to use it.

They didn't realize that Carriers could still use magic, and with the virus and length of time, the sedation wore off, and thus, magic.

>>440332440332 ......

oh.....

Wow, this chapter got me with one hell of a right hook. Well done.

Is Big Mac gona become afflicted now, sort of like how the dad in 28 weeks later gets infected.

That was insane. Update soon.