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While going heading into town to help Twiley get ready for her first day of school, but for some reason, Ponyville seems strangely empty. After discovering everypony is hiding from a mysterious visitor from The Everfree Forest, Shining Armor tries to get to the truth... or he would if certain fillies had not run off to get into who knows what.
Part of the Shiny-verse series.
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Oh yay, new Shiny story. Now I just need to go back and figure out what's happened in this story so far.
I'm back for more, my friend, truth be told: Shining Armor is My Favorite Pony/Character, and I'm glad that your starting this again!
You totally captured twilight's character right then. Great job. Best of luck with the next chapter, but what do you want the poison joke to do to Shining. "I suggest he becomes a colt the same age as the cutie mark crusaders and Twilight become the big sister, but it is your choice."
A new FiS story after all this time? Well of course I can't say no, let's see where this one goes.
You should have a group for the FiS series.
Shining Armor and Zecora... ship worthy? I mean technically, Shining is not WITH Cadence here.
Sweet, more Shinyverse!
Twiley is best filly.
... Don't tell Mini-Trixie I said that... 
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Now lets see what the poison joke does. Good chapter.
I suppose the usuals for the mares. As for Shining Armor...
Take away his shield spell and change it into a fireworks spell. If not, then a gender change can happen....
Tracker Bloom? I spy a Hunger Games refernece.
There aren't suppose to be two "The's" now are there?
Flutterguy and Gleaming Shield are back~
PRICELESS!!!!!
Interesting turn of events.
Nice chapter, though there is one thing you may want to edit.
I think that period should be either an ellipsis or a dash to better indicate that Shining Armor is being cut off by Rainbow Dash.
No Applejack threatening to tell Big Macintosh about what Apple Bloom did? I kind of like that line.
Shining should be grateful that the rest all think Zecora's cursed them. It means they're focused on that, instead of the rule of gender-bending stories where a male-turned-female must be subjected to a makeover by his female friends and family.
I like how Shining Armor didn't jump to conclusons like Twilight did.
Nice chapter, but there is something you may want to edit.
That should be "through".
Good job with this chapter. I hope that the final chapter turns out alright. Best of luck.
So, thanks to "Gleaming Shield's" level head, they've corrected the misunderstanding with relatively little fuss...
Don't say it!
What could go wrong now?
I'll bet she's in the same class with Dinky.
Great chapter. Nice way to end this story. Best of luck with the next story in the series.
Nice chapter, though I found something you may want to edit.
I think that should be "known".
And then Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie gave Shining Armor another bad encounter with poison joke. The end
Saddle sores
Ah, Calvin and Hobbes. Inspiring children everywhere no matter if they're human or pony
Or a magic pond in the Everfree Forest
Shining Amare? maybe?
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Kind of awkward. Maybe ....the others all think approaching me
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IMO you had paid heed is better
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