Discord is bored. He decides to fake his own death and see how everyone reacts. The reactions he recives, however, are not the ones he was expacting.
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Umm..I think this has been recently done. Like in the last week or two.
Just letting you know, this story's going to get a lot of hate for its grammar.
4328272 YAY! Can't wait.
That was perfect
The Rainbow Dash bit was kind of predictable the moment you mentioned the sunglasses and there were numerous spelling errors, but still, I absolutely loved it.
4328270 Really? I haven't seen anyhing like that.
terrible grammar and spelling issues.use spellcheck dude.
4328318 All part of my evil plan...
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4328306 Wow... Thank you!
This was great!
But as some other people said, fix up the spelling and grammar.
Alright. I guess this is a perfect example of why I usually feel reluctant to read fanfiction. Mixed feelings everywhere
Let me say; the premise was really promising. It was something that Discord is likely to do, and would have served as a perfect tragic/comedic story. However, I fear you didn´t exploit it as well as you could have. In the moment Applejack started talking I sensed it, when Rainbow Dash declared I perfectly saw it, but that absurd black humored ending was ridiculous. If you had taken it a little bit more seriously you could have done a great job. Watch out, I am not saying this is bad; I actually laughed a little, but it is not what it could have been. The redaction contains a few mistakes, not only in the spelling or grammar, but in the narration, and I say that as an habitual reader.That is just an opinion. And I consider those little puns of "Rarity is best pony" unnecessary. But if that is your style I am cool with that. In fact, you can simply ignore this comment and continue living your life without caring about what I am saying. But, well, we are supposed to improve through mistakes, right?
4329097 Yeah, the ending was pretty ridiculous, wasn't it... Honestly, I just had no idea how to end the story, so I just wrote the silliest, darkest thing that came to my mind.
Thank you for the criticism, I new the story wasn't that good, it's my first comedy and I'm not so good with those
so obviously this one was going to suck (or just have wasted potential, as you say). I really appreciate you telling me what's wrong with the story without being a dick about it.
Actually, I don't think any of my stories had any rude comment yet... I love this website!
ok this started off good and pretty funny but the ending bombed XD
This... Was the greatest thing I've ever read in my entire life...
4329130 Well, the comment section was intended to constructive criticism
Well this story got...really random at the end
I'd say it fits in it's genres...
The end seemed a bit rushed though and there were some major spelling mistakes that even I couldn't ignore...
story itself was still readable though and I had fun doing so ^^
Keep going
Well I cant say I expected any of that.
wow.................................................
^-^ Fantastic story.
Anyone who makes pinkie cry is deserving of the fields of punishment in Tartarus
No! Please just kill me now!!!!!!!!
Ha! Ha! Ha! What a way to end it!!!!