Celestia insisted that human and pony shouldn't be together. But why? What made the princess so certain that this was how things had to be? Well, whatever her motivations, when it becomes clear that Rainbow Dash's connection to her 'father' is so strong that Twilight's spell isn't going to keep her memories blocked out forever something has to be done. Will Dash be allowed to return 'home?' And what will she find when she gets there?
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Okay, I'm a huge fan of My Little Dashie. I love the completed Sequel, Threequel, and Forth. All of them told a wonderful story that was beyond amazing. I loved the idea of Brian giving up everything, moving to Equestria, and living out the remainder of his days with his adopted daughter. I enjoyed those stories, and I still do. That said I want to give this a chance. I want to because you're presenting something new to the mythos. Consider the story liked, favorited, and a follow for you.
Interesting
....keep up the good work 
I'm loving this story. Though sometimes, its hard for me to read (but that's just because English is my second langauge, and whenever I hear 'My Little Dashie' I'm all but bawling like little girl.) But, this is still my altime favorite book.
My Little Slowpoke: Twenty Percent Later
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Lol
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lol Fair enough.... It is an older story after all. In my defense I'm new to this particular fandom.
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More to the point, it has over 9000 sequels already.
Hey I just wanted to say that I loved the story!
Took forever to find it again because there is like 10,000 sequels to this story!
I was confused at the end.
what a surprise
Awwwwwww... That's sweet. Thanks for the update to the story.
Is Comedy a primary element of this story? Is the intention of the story to make people laugh?
"Comedy stories are thick with jokes, or at least based on some very silly basic concept." ~FiMFiction Writing Guide
I'm just a little bit confused because the description doesn't seem to match up with the tag.
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Fair question about the comedy tag. I put it in primarily due to the Pinkie Pie scenes. I'm open to reader suggestions and if enough of you think I should remove the tag I will. I do ask, though, wait until chapter thirteen (Major Pinkie scene) to judge on this. Thanks!
4282862 Okay. Just trying to help a little in my own special way...
I love this!!
Gotta fav this story
Okay... it's just pinkie right nothings gonna happen to her... right?
Twlight gonna gawk man
I always love the idea of Pinkie as MDW using Darkwing Duck as inspiration. bravo
lol giving Pi as her serial number. clever.
4342712 awesome pic.
4346256 would you happen to play Baulders Gate?
and yeah, that is clever.
4348738 awesome band.and their newest album, is worth the money!
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Yea I have played Baldur's Gate 1 and 2. They are old favorites of mine. If this is about the avatar technically I took that due to Dungeons and Dragons in general (and a rather famous comedy sketch involving it) which is related to Baldur's Gate.
And just as some fanfics are proven wrong, some are proven right. Wonder if Lyra will freak out...
I LOVE IT, i mean i loved my little dashie the sequel, the threequeel and fourth times the charm and im really trying to like "fiver years", anyway. YOURS IS PRETTY GOOD, its another point of view, im really looking forward to it. KEEP IT THE GOOD WORK.
4349627 oh.well, Baulders Gate is still a very good game. i have yet to play D&D though.
Ramada?really? all that makes me think of is the Ramada Hotel/Inn. (its called both where i live)
New chapter? FUCK YEAH! Definitely worth the wait.
pienkie an old one? well that would explain a lot
she just re-shattered the 4th wall. GO PINKIE!
Pinkie you are SO Random
Serves you right D.T.
I feel bad though.
Yay!
Adopt scootaloo!!!
Sweet
pinkie pie is the other watcher
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Great story so far! I should look at most recently updated more often.
Also, Pinkie is best fourth wall breaker.
Deadpool: What about me?
Well... wait, how did you get here?
Magnets.
Of course.
Man, that Don punk just can't take a hint and stop while he is massively behind. And seriously, Nightmare, you decided to possessed him of all humans...do you even have standard or shame?!
There is a few errors here, but nothing much that need a seriously need rushing to be edited. There is one error, however, that I felt that need to be squash before it get bad: the possessive of "it", which is actually "its". "It's" is a contraction for "it is" or "it has". Surprisingly, however, it isn't a contraction for 'it was'.
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Well, I guess some cosmic entities have a stake in this, apparently.
I thought this chapter was kinda meh... Best part was the scene in the RV imo. The "action" scenes just seem... out of place to me.
Just finished this unofficial sequel of probably one of the most heart-wrenching fanfics I've ever read (or watched, considering I saw the mini-movie on youtube) and I'd say that despite a couple flaws it is a worthy continuation of the story. One issue I have is that I have a hard time seeing the father-daughter relationship between Dashie and her adoptive father. Their behavior fits them more along the "close friends" side of the shipping spectrum. Another thing... In my own opinion, this story had a bit too much action. It distracted from the focus of the relationships between the characters, assuming that was the focus of the story.
This was a good read, and honestly one of the few stories I can actually call a faithful sequel to the original My Little Dashie. This last chapter sets up some interesting things later, such as how the nations of the world will deal with Celestia, the ponies, and Equestria in general.
This was a good start to what will hopefully be an amazing series. I can't wait to see what you got in store for the sequel.
I think that at this point in the comment sequence I'm meant to say that this is a pretty good sequel out of the 11 000 of them available.
Next commenter, mention the 12 000 sequels. It is your duty.
I'm just starting to read this brand of stories but with 12000 sequels I have a long ways to go.
Don't break the chain. Next Commentor... DON'T DO IT!
I do not think anyone would think the album is fake if they thought about it. Even the best drawing wouldn't stand muster for photorealism. The tone of the light mixed with sharpness and depth of field would say to any professional that the photo is the real McCoy. Times this by many photos and it would take countless hours to casually fool the layman and still could be proven that the photos are real to an in depth analysis.
I'm going to be dead before I read the 13000 sequels this story has.
Nest comment has to mention 14000 sequels. If you don't, I will track you down, I will find you, and I will edit your comment and make it say 14000 sequels.
Who is Rainbow's favorite driver? Just from attitude and sheer skill, probably Kyle Busch.