There on a small grassy hill lies five headstones, each inscribed with a different mark. Four immortals watch over their peaceful slumber. It is a sad day, but for whom? And what remains?
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I CAN'T HOLD MY FEELS.
Just...so beautiful. Please, take all of my mustashes!
The Wisdom of the last paragraphs is breath-taking.
Stories like this make it hard to be an atheist sometimes.
4245942 That's one of the great things about stories, they give new meaning and reveal wisdom. This story is not about religion, it's about having hope and the incomprehensible power of love.
4246128 My disbelief in an afterlife is more because there's no proof of one, not just because I reject religion.
4247836 I can understand that. I too struggle with the seeming lack of proof and facts sometimes. I'm afraid I'm not here to debate the nature of the universe, but it is my belief that there is God and heaven. I cannot truly convey nor justify my faith in a mere Internet post however, and for that I am sorry. I respect your decision and I am not here to "preach," I wrote this originally to honor a friend who has died in an accident, not to bring up the subject of God and heaven. I am sorry if this story offends or pressures you, that was not my intent, if you have felt that then I apologize deeply, it would be wrong of me to purposely make others feel uncomfortable or slighted with my beliefs. Have a good day.
4248067 It doesn't and I wasn't taking it as preaching. I was mainly commenting on the fact that even though I don't believe in the afterlife, it would be nice to be able to see some of the people I've lost again.
4248153 I think that is a hope everyone shares.
4248168 I couldn't agree more.
beautiful
Touching.
I don't think cancer would be deadly in Equestria where they can do miracles with magic.
This is simply beautiful... it's been quite some time that a story brought tears to my eyes, but this one did. Happy tears, tho!
thank you for writing this you'll never know how much it helped me
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That last part was really brave of you.
Lots of props.
God Bless.