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Summary: The Princess of the night falls for her personal guard, and their relationship grows. It also leads, not through the fault of the two love birds, to a revolt, one that shatters the once great Princedom of Equestria. So Rises the NLR in a desperate attempt to protect ponies from what was a benevolent ruler, now turned Tyrant, through a misunderstanding.
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Man dude good beginning hope to see more chapters
nice hook for readers, but i would have some of that as my summary it would help your views.
4200099 care to clarify what you meant please?
4200096 Of course :)
it was good for the first person view and i think you should continue it this way,it is very creative, i would have worded it differently but it was good
Love the story so far. Can't wait to read more! ^_^
so intense and juicy.
This chapter has the approval of NightRider1468
OMG! best one yet!!!!!
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Thank you,
I am already working on the next chapter, but don't expect any naughty fun in it, I am making this story take it's time 
a few kisses here and there, a few subtle innuendo, maybe a couple blatant ones. but no naughty naughty just yet 
I really do hope this story doesn't go wrong. I'm not saying story-wise, I'm saying update-wise. So many of my favourite stories have either been cancelled or put on hiatus. Please don't let that happen.
I am writing the next chapter right now XD
Damn O_O
4244425 What?
I like your story so much
Please, continue ^^
can't wait until the next one XD
Always watching...
4342405 still working on the next chapter, I promise
4342678 always...
I like the idea of celestial going crazy instead of Luna
4361010 I do hope you read the edited prologue ;) it is a bit of a spoiler though
Woah NLR!!!
No?
Just me?
Okay...
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The entirety of the NLR vs SE war will be in this book and then near the end we will discover what caused this and in the next book the fight will no longer be NLR vs SE, but the NLR & SE vs
Sorry no more spoilers 
4377940 oh you tease...
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4378921 no, not at all
*shiffty eyes*
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Who they gonna call?
Ghost busters!
4388469
Maybe, maybe not
When you say hand cannon do you mean 'hand' 'cannon' or something along the lines of a flintlock rifle, maybe a blunderbuss as all were known to miss fire.
4413640 blunderbuss, but they do not call it that, they call it a hand cannon
4414569 please tell there will be a part where they're desperate for ammo and load spoons into them. That just sounds entertaining.
I liked the whole story jumping idea it explained a lot without lots of unnessacery links to different characters.
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Glad you liked it, the next few chapters will probably bring this arc to a close. If so, then so begins book 2
4419420 any hints to the second book?
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There sure are, just look through this book :P
But in all seriousness, not really, I don't want to promise something and then not deliver on said promise
4419437 I guess I'll keep watching..
Always...
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Sorry I couldn't be of more help
4419451 it's all cool just keep doing what you're doing and all will be well in the world.
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:)
The next chapter will not be out for a couple days, real life has gotten hectic once again. But please know that it should be out by the end of the week if not, then by midweek next week
4419521 get everything sorted we'll wait.
Yay. By the way when they were going through the sewers I couldn't help but remember monty python the life of Brian when they do the same to Caesar
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There is going to be a small timeskip between now(the ending of this book) and the next point of the story (the beginning of the next)
but here is a small little spoiler
Shadows protect what you hold dear
May the Sun guide you far
We stand in the shadow protecting our light walking brothers and sisters
We stand in the light a strength for all to see
May you never know our strength. For we are the Evening Armada/For we are the Light of the Solar Empire
4430722 when is the next book?
I do not know, I am still writing it, I will post it as soon as I have the minimum requirements for it to be posted
NLR
New Lunar Republic