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Basic Rules of Rap studying, by Lil Wayne. An Equestrian on Earth fic where the master himself educates these plebs on how to rap. The cover art is a pinkie pie vector on Deviant Art. My first ever fic.

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"Houston, this is sides, we are currently leaving the milky way, over."
"Sides, can you repeat that transmission, we have currently lost our ability to even."
"Sir! We just lost all communication to sides, his last transmission reads as such: "Top kek""
"Damnit man! We can't afford to lose Sides! Not like this!"

But yeah lel worthy fic, completely rediculous :rainbowlaugh:

I don't even...What?

4190423 E....Exa.....ctly. I can't......just......no. :pinkiesick:

You get a like because you managed to get a chuckle out of me...but I still just...can't even understand what I just read.

Colonel Blue Waffle.:facehoof::moustache:

My professional review:

Pros:
I found this story to presents a rather original technique since I have never seen a story of the likes of this before.
This story is a trollfic that presented a new level no, a revolution in the art that is writing trollfics.
It presented a familiar scenario with an unconventional development that concluded in a bizarre way. That why I like to call this a brilliant piece of artistic genius that clearly devoted an unprecedented amount of creativity.

Cons:
One thing I didn't like, is that the description on the character of Wayne is too brief to the point that there is no way to picture how he looks like so is difficult to picture his actions, and because we barely know anything about him it takes a while to figure out where he fits into all this.

Other than that marvelous work! Is rare to see trollfics which comedy flows as smoothly as this one.

The description could be improved vastly though; that's why I unfortunately don't expect this to get very popular.:ajsleepy:

I truly enjoyed this I really did it made me laugh repetitively and finish the reading with a smile.

Final verdict: four out of five mustaches for originality.:twilightsmile:
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

~Leonzilla

PS: I was able to understand this perfectly, so if the readers found it difficult to follow is likely because they are not used to this style of writing. It is not the writers fault.

This story made no sense!
:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:
*fav & like*

Truly a work of art. The level of swag in this story isn't even measurable.

DA FUCK NIGGA!!

I think a part of me just became complete...

... wait, this is rated teen?:unsuresweetie:

A sequel with 2 chains is needed

4190601 I'm not sure if your aware of this but lil wayne is an actual person. An actual rapper who just got the shit lampooned out of him.

I'm assuming you don't think lil wayne is a talented rapper so do you just dislike him or do you have a problem with a rap as a whole. Cause a thought you were going for a clever parody of what rap has become.

Someone needs to really, actually rap that and post it. Please?

4204326 Agreed. My lyrical genius has that effect on people.

4204950
:rainbowlaugh: I would attempt it but... no.

4197896 No I am completely unfamiliar with this character Wayne. I think the story should have provided at least a brief physical description of him for those people like me whom, as I said, are not familiar with him. :coolphoto:

~Leonzilla

Needs more big booty'd bitches.. other than that, it was glorious.

I don't understand anything... anymore

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