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Tonwhirler


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Work has been slow. Rarity hasn't had a real client since she started her career as a private investigator a month ago. When she's handed a high-paying, high-stakes case, Rarity wonders if she can figure it out in time.

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He held a pistol in his right hand...

Rarity seems a little out of character. Sure, this is alt universe, but I don't see many indications that it's still her.

Other than that, very interesting. I'd like to see where this goes.

4189212 Fixed, and duly noted. Thanks for the feedback!

You should write more of this.

Nice, nice, some more perspective.

Things just got real!

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