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Locked In

One morning, Rarity awoke not feeling like herself.

She couldn't move, she couldn't breath, she couldn't do anything. Yet...she was still alive, somehow.

The only thing that she could do was observe.

And so she did.

Full cover picture right here if you're interested.

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Fluttershy Is Best Pony

Fluttershy Is Best Pony #1 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · ·

Wow...*claps* this is...wow I don't know what to think but its good!
~FiBP

Infinite Evil #2 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · ·

Shit man, I sorta feel bad for leaving all my bind bags just sitting there on the shelf now.

This was well written. /10

Narlepoax III #3 · Apr 5th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This reminds me of those short stories that we were made to read in high school. Those ones that were meant to convey certain psychological aspects of the human mind, at the same time as being examples of good writing.

Very well done.

cloudedguardian

cloudedguardian #4 · Apr 5th, 2014 · · ·

A little rough around the edges, but still an interesting idea that was executed well.

meepify

meepify #5 · Oct 14th, 2014 · · ·

I came the the nearest to tears a fanfiction has ever made me.

ElJorro

ElJorro #6 · Aug 21st, 2021 · · ·

That was dark but quite good.

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