The "Great and Powerful" Trixie has headed out to Appleloosa for a new start and a clean slate, but can she really leave behind a lifetime of bragging and showmareship?
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Very cute story; quite enjoyable.
Although I kept imagining the male lead as a pony version of Nigel West Dickens from Red Dead Redemption, ha ha
This story pleases Trixie, though she finds it far too short
Quite an interesting take on Trixie after fleeing Ponyville; I laughed out loud at Braeburn's charges, so kudos for that.
Solid four stars.
Oh Trixie, when will you learn.
Hmmm... I believe hijinks are about to ensue in the next chapter.
Hmm... this story is very interesting.
My interest has been doubled. Good work.
This was good.
Deserves more love, from what i've seen thus far. Good work!
To be honest, that line seemed a bit unecessery, more like one of those things you put in there to stave of criticism like "he's a horse, can't he just eat grass?" The way I look at it, it's kinda like saying "can't you just live on a bowl of gruel a day?", well, I CAN, but I wouldnt exactly like it very much. Definently mention that finding good grazing spots is hard to come by, I just thought the line came across as a bit defensive, that' all.
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It probably was, to be honest. Although it could be argued the defensiveness is in-keeping with the character, there.
Delightful.
I liked this story a lot. But I do wish that they decided to, uh, you know... stop scamming ponies. Still a very nice story.
Is this going to get reposted every day?
The heck did Trixie eat?!
Trixie, don't you know never to eat foods you don't know?
I liked the story a lot but I have to say it was short
Aaaawwwww, cute
History.
Oh, this is gonna be good.
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Not true, I'm afraid; Sethisto's The Greatest Equine Who has Ever Lived! was published on July 8, 2011 (10 years ago today!), predating this fic by two days.
Don't get me wrong, it's still a good story; it's just not the first.
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But that one is unfinished