needs to be longer,tho its ok. there needs to be more... sadness...

the longer it is the longer it makes the reader sadder and might make them cry if long enough.

Funny thing, I always assumed Twilight would end up as an alicorn (or discover whatever it is that makes Luna and Celestia "ageless")

>>381816381816

actually, there not ageless, celestias life span is as long a the sun. once it burns out she dies... or at lease it think. if not, im sure you cant live without a sun...

Nice "Back to the Future" reference towards the end there, sir

I don't really know what to say. It didn't affect as some others have but it was good.

>>381818381818 What about luna?

>>381861381861 when the sun turns into a red giant it will engulf the moon... so you get it right or the moon gets hit by a large asteroid and exploded, if the moon brakes/gets destroyed and Luna dies.

>>381871381871 i knew that

>>381875381875 or did you >.> <.<

>>381877381877 I did.

>>381878381878 ok......

>>381881381881 yep.........

bored nao BAI

>>381884381884 bye.

what to do now

>>381818381818

Applejack notices too much of fancy science. She is not pleased.

>>381956381956

physics FTW!!!!!

Loved it. You are very talented! Gave me a good tug on the heartstrings, you did. Thanks for writing

>>381958381958

While I agree to a certain degree, with Rainbow's tricks there's no place for physics.

>>381977381977 yes there is, only pinkie pie screws physics.

>>381987381987

Twilight Sparkle disagrees.

>>381993381993 with what? pinkie pie screwing physics?? or rainbow dash having physics?

>>381813381813 Thats a good thing, right??

>>382029382029

well if you want it to pull heartstrings then yes... im guess that's what this story is trying so yes.

All things come to death.

Good day.

That is such a touching story.

"all good things..." but why this thing. Why? If celestia and luna are linked to the age of the sun and moon shouldnt twilight be linked to the age of magic?

>>382084382084

no, she just has a strong connection to it, its like saying rarity should be linked to fashion.

>>381818381818

I sincerely doubt thats how it works. Plus, that would make Celestia far, far older than she is portrayed to be in the show. (Luna too) i am of the personal opinion that Alicorns, while not immortal, are ageless after a certain point.

>>382170382170

what i think is that they somehow managed to "link" them self's to objects and live as long as that object is existent

Ah wow. Thanks for the comments and other stuff. I was quite surprised this morning waking up. This started as an idea, a sad idea that I felt needed to be explored and to get out of my own head. Looking at Celestia's reaction to Twilight's death and a possible time paradox from using the time traveling spell.

If people really do want to see it continued there are only one of two ways that I could think of at the moment to continue it, but it would only be a two parter.

>>381813381813>>382076382076>>381963381963>>381926381926>>381833381833>>381813381813

>>382227382227

you put my name twice

>>382269382269 I'm not used to editing and using this reply system

>>382283382283

i feel so..... special ... i got put twice.

>>398631398631 Heart Attack?

>>399572399572

From how touching the story is.

>>399872399872 Ah! Thanks.