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Part of the Equestria's Crazies Universe

Sometimes the truth stings and sometimes it's more funny than the original lie. What Twilights about to learn is that even though her teacher lied to her, it was probably for the best, because really, who is going to believe the fall of Discord and the rise of the royal sisters all started with a brick to the head?

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Comments ( 59 )

Oh god I've been thumbs downed.

THIS IS HOW I DIE

lolwut? and first :pinkiehappy:

That was honestly both hilarious and interesting. good story.

...what.

That last bit; I'm really not sure what happened.

Did Discord rape Twilight or something?

"Fetch me the lube."

oh my god damnit. i don't want to know what they did to his ass. or his face, or anypart of him really.:pinkiecrazy:

looks intresting, i'll track and read later.

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Hence the shovel to the back of Luna's head

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He more or less just made her feel extremely uncomfortable. Nothing serious, but maybe they could take it to next level. That is if you want them to :trollestia:

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This is what happen when I do my thing.

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still I'm glad you stopped the damn fic right there.

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So I'm guessing you disliked it?


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I regret only a minor number of things

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i just didn't want to know.
once lube got involved i was prepared to skip straight past it.

also i gave it a like

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I was going for a shock value joke assuming one would expect. How I guess I should have thought the after shocks through :P I'll change it ladder so they Lube him up going sledding or something.

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its fine as is. it leaves a lot open the the reader imagination which could be taken either way

The Twilight Zone....

You really did that... I don't know whether to scream my approval or to send a pack of flaming internet dogs after you:pinkiecrazy:

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I have to go replay oblivion now
I miss Sheogorath :l

383017.... And now I miss Sheogorath.
Fuck

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It's gonna hurt to replay Oblivion after so much time spent in skyrim
BUT I DO IT FOR HIM

You grand sir are pretty awesome, I loved this. I want more.
And to play oblivion.:pinkiehappy:

Equestria was made... with lube.
Btw, how do you have sex with a statue??? I wanna try it.

And then luniscelight, because win.

i.imgur.com/MWc9i.png

The entire thing. Wat.
This is just awesomely funny :rainbowlaugh:

Overall, I liked the story, but I felt it could have used some grammatical and punctuatuion corrections. Some bits were hard to read, like you just forgot to use punctuation or just had poor word choices. The sections where Celestia explains things needed dividers to separate it from the 'present', to make it easier to read. And I liked the tangents that Celestia told, but it kinds felt rushed. Maybe you could practice writing things a little more 'naturally', like how people really talk? Unless that was done on purpose and I just missed the joke. :rainbowhuh:
But it was an original concept, and I did like it.

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Poor choice most likely
If I have time I'll go through and try and fix it up. My pre-reader/Editor has disappeared so I had to work on it alone and guess when it seemed good enough to upload.

-Written from IPod so no good grammars or Punctuation

Oh Discord :rainbowwild:

Freaking awesume! :pinkiehappy: I am gonna get some lube and head to mount rushmore. Thank you for the idea! Mwhahhahahah!

Congratulations, you successfully made me spit my chips out and reread some parts of the story! Thumbs up to you. :rainbowlaugh:

I love this story, I can't say anything else.

Five mustaches of approval. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I am so confused, but I like it. :rainbowhuh::twilightsmile:

This, my friend, is a masterful work of comedic literature. :derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2: 5 Derps out of five.
I nearly died at "Fetch me the lube." You have sucessfully earned a favorite and an upvote.

I face palmed so many times....

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Good face palm or bad face palm?

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I guess good cause i was laughing my ass off XD

SO. MANY. RUN-ONS. :raritydespair:

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DON'T READ THIS, THIS IS A BAD STORY!
SO VERY BAD, I THINK I MIGHT HAVE BEEN A LITTLE DRUNK WHEN I WROTE IT.

If anything I would read something newer (IE Equestria's Crazies) This is one of the earliest things I've written.

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I got through it. I feel proud. :pinkiehappy:

Alright, I'll go read Equestria's Crazies, then :twilightsmile:

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It starts out rock but as it goes along everything gets better

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Hm, yeah, rocky would be a good word for it :derpytongue2: You might want to get an editor to look over that first chapter (and any others that are particularly rocky - I just finished that one, so I'm not sure yet), so it doesn't put off readers who might otherwise be interested in the story.

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When I have the time I plan to go through these, several of my chapters are months old (I believe the first 2 - 4 of Equestria's Crazies are at least 4 - 6 months old.)

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Alright. And if you want another pair of eyes, I'm here :twilightsmile:

the rise and fall of the chaos reich

Ha, ha, ha,...What did I just read?

Oh well, I'll just give it a thumbs up.

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Honestly, I don't know.
I've completely forgotten what's in this story. I'll have to come back at some point and re-read it.

I generally like Equestrian creation stories, but the way you told it made it funny and entertaining. Have a mustache. :moustache:

Re-read this and the Twilight Zone pun still gets me laughing. :rainbowlaugh:

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