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LightningBass94


Dying. Funny thing, that. It never happens how you expect it.

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Rainbow Dash has challenged Twilight to a drinking contest on Casks and Clovers Day. Cute Twidash follows.

This is a short side-story to my good friend Surry's story, Princess Luna's Far-Out Casks And Clovers Day. I wrote this with explicit permission from him.

...I swear, writing descriptions is harder than writing the actual story!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 156 )

Dude, this is SO AMAZING!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

4154455 You really think so? :rainbowkiss:

Btw, do you get the reference?

4154467 Which one, exactly? :twilightsheepish:

4154481 Hmm... can't say I do. Maybe I'm having a dumb fit right now. :fluttershysad:

4154486 It's not anything canon. I'll reveal it once a couple other people get a shot at it. Lol. :pinkiehappy:

4154500 Sure, I get ya! :rainbowdetermined2:

Excellent work :rainbowlaugh:
I agree with Surry, this was amazing.

Great story, love it.

aww man! i'm so wishing this was more than a one-shot! it's so awesome!

4157633 Sorry. :twilightsheepish: Eventually, I'll make a multi-chapter twidash, but this isn't it.

Your Twidash is in another castle.
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4157655 different castle? no problem!

4157801 Lol. Give it time, and I'll deliver. :raritywink:

Twilight doesn't strike me as a pony who can hold her alcohol (or hell, even drinks very much to begin with) this well. You'd think she'd be phased by the amount she apparently drank a little more than a little slur in her speech the night of.

Then again, I didn't read the original fic, so I'm probably missing some context here.

4157966 That's just me. Episode 1, she saw all those ponies in her house and immediately went to get a drink. :rainbowlaugh: In my opinion, she has an alcohol cabinet that sees responsible, yet regular use.

I enjoyed both storys very much....!!! This is a good oneshot... could be turned into a good two parter... *Cough, Cough*

4157996 I'm not sure it would be right for a spin-off to be longer than the original. I'd feel like I would be piggy-backing off someone else's success too much. :twilightsheepish:

4154467 Read it and I laughed at the end javascript:smilie(':rainbowlaugh:'); Gave me some inspiration to try out for Monday when I get back from school (god damnit) and is it possible for you to help me?

Maybe you could PM me and edit it or proof read once I write one?

that

was

sooooooooooooooooooooooo much fun to read!:pinkiehappy:

4158436 I do intend to write a multi-chapter Twidash at some point though. :pinkiehappy:
4158583 Thank you. :heart:

the only reason I have not faved is I only fav ones that are not done or deserves to be in a book store

example: My little Dashie

4157978 Interesting. Everyone has their own little headcanons I guess! :rainbowkiss:

4158774 Have any thoughts of your own on the subject? :duck:

4159046 Well, I like the concept. I dunno what else to say about it...

4159060 Fair enough. Any thoughts on RD's tolerance, though? :rainbowderp: I'm just curious what others think.

4154500
That chapter title is a reference to, "Epic Wub Time: Musicians of Ponyville."
I read the chapter title in the same voice that he said it in!:rainbowlaugh:

4159615 DING DING DING DING! Someone got it! Yay! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:
4154507

4159646 Wow, I didn't expect this story to get triple the likes of the original. :applejackunsure:

4159665
Oi, don't worry too much! If there are other people out there like me that read this, then they will read your story, cause I am going to right now! :pinkiehappy:

4159693 You really should. It's terrific! :pinkiehappy:

4159894 You have no idea how hard I just laughed :rainbowlaugh:....Or maybe you do! :rainbowderp:

Haha nice read especially the ending

4160019 Lol. Thanks. If you want to know the truth, Surry wrote the first two lines for me, I wrote up to the paragraph after the flashback, then I started having trouble. While I was talking to Surry, however, I thought up and wrote down the last scene before anything else. :rainbowlaugh:

4160041

Haha either way tho it was still a good story and that ending was gold "i slept with twilight sparkle!" Lol

Comment posted by LightningBass94 deleted Mar 31st, 2014

4160054 That's my favorite line too. I wanted Twilight to react with, "But we didn't...well, I mean, technically, but not-!" but I couldn't fit it in naturally. :rainbowlaugh:

4160071

Lol that wouldve been perfect, but i wonder what happens next?

4160094 That is to be left squarely upon your imagination. :twilightsmile:

4160122
Hmmmm seems legit haha and who knows someone might just make a story about it (who knows might be me if i can get to a computer lol)

4160141 Lol. A side story to a side story to a one-shot? Dude! Surry is starting a revolution! :rainbowlaugh:

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