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    What does it take to write the perfect HiE?  One author interviews non-bronies to find out what would actually happen if a person found themselves in a land of magical ponies.

    While this is fiction, there weren't enough ponies to pass moderation.  I'm just going to leave it be, though, and let this story fade into obscurity as a quirky little experiment.

    Last Modified
    17th Apr 2012

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    #1 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    First.

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was a fucking brilliant idea!

    HOW COME NO ONE HAS EVER THOUGHT OF THIS BEFORE!?

    #4 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well, that was pretty awesome!

    Do continue with this. Like Wasteland up there, I really would like to see more!

    #5 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I think this is brilliant. :twilightsmile:

    #6 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I like it

    #7 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Very nice. The prologue was beautifully simple. I also love the interviews. The one problem is the handwriting on the pages at the beginning is hard to read. But it doesn't take much out of the story.

    #8 · Chapter 9 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    OOOO Called out. lol.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>453542

    What, writing a HiE story?

    Or taking advantage of poor, unknowing friends and family?

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I think it'd be a good idea to type out what it says on the paper. Although I didn't have any problem reading it, I'm sure other people will.

    "Well, they aren't people." :twilightangry2: PONIES ARE PEOPLE. Try "human" instead of "people"

    >>464960 Taking advantage of poor, unknowing friends and family :twilightsmile:

    #11 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #12 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiesmile:

    #13 · Chapter 6 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dat façade

    "The memebers range from the likes of Jaclyn, who staunchly only writes slashfics." - See this page :twilightsmile:

    #14 · Chapter 11 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #15 · Chapter 11 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #16 · Chapter 11 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, I totally missed that fiction thing... whoops. Oh well. Offer still stands.

    #17 · Chapter 11 · 56w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I may have finally pushed the mods over the edge.  This blog post about how to get a story approved appeared about two hours after this story was failed.

    #18 · Chapter 11 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Interesting.

    Not bad, not bad at all.

    Not the best, but intriguing none the less.

    Keep writing. I am a large/medium fan of your works.

    Cool story bro.

    A HEEEEERRP FOR DERP SIR!

    translates: A Salute for you Sir!

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>464973 I don't know,  I think that the term people applies to all sentient beings, but alot of people think it means humans. I have no idea.

    #21 · Chapter 11 · 51w, 3d ago · · ·
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    cool story bro...

    ...ny

    #22 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I also heard of "emblems". Just saying.

    #23 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>640754

    I would certainly prefer that to "cutie mark"

    #24 · Chapter 4 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm going to remember this, and if I ever get the chance, I'm going to use some of these lines and comments. They're too damn funny for me not to!:rainbowlaugh:

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