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Maud Pie just seemed so...bland. She liked rocks. She ate rocks. She had a pet rock. Even her fur was a reflection of the color of a gray rock.

At least, that is what Pinkie and her friends see.

Now, the mystery of just who Maud Pie is will be revealed. Who can move so fast and break rocks with their bare hoof? Surely, she has a reason for being so strong. And anyway, how can ANYPONY be so bland having grown up with Pinkie? And no doubt, she has a secret that no pony will see coming. Questions arise but will there be answers to them?

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It was a nice story. I liked the plot-twists and the fighting scenes. And the other plot-twists. You may want to do a re-read for grammar though.

I liked this very much the secret life of Maud. Had a good pace was entertaining and made me smile. Keep up the good work! You are on my follow list! Good luck in your future fics! :twilightsmile:

4116417 Do you mind exlaining a bit?

4116494 Explaining the grammar? Well it's mostly small things like to, too, and two. I think you also once referred to Maud as a "Pinkie" when she is a "Pie"

So much plot twists!
And I love it how most of the story is just these ponies >>>> :applejackconfused::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::rainbowkiss::raritydespair::twilightangry2:
having a headcanon.
That was pretty funny. :trollestia:

4116770 I am soooo embarrassd. Two, to, too. There and their. Honors English has failed me.....

Thankd got the feedback! Glad you liked it

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