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Deshamable


Bringing you everything you don't want others seeing since 1824. Warning: I have no shame.

Comments ( 12 )

Oh my

Well, I would recommend that you put some kind of hint that there will be scat in the description; it will save you from a lot of people raging at your story for not being to their taste. As it's one of the few things that I just can't go for, I can't really judge how good this is. Up to as far as I got it all seemed competently written, so no like or dislike from me. :rainbowhuh:

*NOPE DRIVES HAVE REACHED FULL POWER. BUGGING OUT*

4097804 My mistake; somehow the thought didn't really cross my mind. I'll update it immediately.

This was beautiful. I'm actually working on a Octavia / Vinyl Scratch clopfic. Great minds, huh? :ajsmug:

I really liked this story, so a Fav and an upvote to you for a job well done.

Awesome! I'm very glad to see some blatant scat action. No sillyness, no trolling, no diapers, no torture, just pure fetishistic porn — that's the way I like it! :heart:

Sweat, scent, fluids, dirtyness — mmmm! :yay:

Octavia was going to pay for every drop of liquor on her.

Seems like you meant "Vinyl."

Their passion lied not in studies

"lay" See: http://www.chompchomp.com/rules/irregularrules02.htm

The increase in her haste

a bit awkward

at least three minutes of pure urination

Only three minutes? Man, that's not even enough to satisfy a breezie. :rainbowlaugh:

Awesome sauce. Well written and hot. I personally would prefer Vinyl take it all reluctantly or maybe have magical assistance to to motivate her, but this ain't my fantasy.

4113619 Thank you very much~! Wow, I suck at proofreading.
The responses this is getting aren't nearly as negative as I first predicted; thank you all. :heart:
Edit: Proper edits were made~

....before I post something, I must ask: what is scat?

4402317 well, this is super late, but assuming you still want to know, scat is
1.) A series of syllables used by jazz artists when singing improv.
Or
2.) A fetish involving poop, or pee. (Often paired with S/M, bondage, or mind-breaking fetishes)

4113619 "Only three minutes? Man, that's not even enough to satisfy a breezie."

Ponies, as quadrupedal mammals, obey the law of urination, and therefore should take 21 seconds to empty their bladders.

What kind of animal can pee for three minutes straight?!?!?
Let alone FIVE!!!

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