Xenolance, a devious villain, had been cornered by the Mane six, and soon his villainous ways will be brought to an end!
... If the six heroines can stay on topic, that is.
Just a quick one-shot. Had this idea for a day or two, and couldn't keep a serious face for the life of me.
Due to vague death threats popular demand, additional shorts in this series will be added. The story will remain 'Complete', as the additional shorts will be mostly self contained.
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I like.
This is worth nothing less than a like and fav.
very amusing. This is simply a fun way of doing satire for the type of story. I approve of this.
Good show. Here, have moar Fluttershy.
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Damn hes gooooood.
Fascinating...
Huh. Didn't expect people to enjoy this story so much...
Why do I get the feeling that my life depends on making a sequel?
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It might do.
*Twirls sword in hand*
4092291 Not really. But It would be nice though.
I will gladly go to Equestria and be this bad guy, just to see what they would do afterwards.
IT WAS ALL IN HER HEAD...
can NEVER have enough intelligent bad guys in Equestria
even if it was a dedtime story
You know, this story is so random and funny, I can't help myself enjoying it.
Have a moustache for your efforts.
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It wasn't too difficult to follow, was it? This chapter does have quite the jolt, after all...
4098520 Hehe, nah, I followed it quite easily. Just the roundabout way that Xeno went about getting food was really funny.
Oh, 'Twas most amusing.
Now,If i wasn't dead tired,Id put in that one james bond theme everyone associates with the uberstealth and death defying jumps...You know,The one from goldeneye 64?
Risk is Risky
Get the trombones and drums! We need badum tish's and Wa wa waaa's!
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That bad, huh?
4110938 What makes you think that needing them is a BAD thing?
Interesting...
Neat.
That Pinkie and the Brain reference.
This is how you stop the happy-go-lucky type heroes or you make the hero monologue, that's always fun.
no calling him George?
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George is a human name. Figured it didn't fit.
Edit: Actually, thinking about it more, perhaps it does...
ducktaped to teh ceiling.
Welp, that's ONE way to end a prank war...
4548099 are you suggesting him making a Cyberchase reference
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I end pranks directed towards me by scaling my payback so much "overkill" don't do justice
HA! I love the cultural clashes in this chapter!
This is great! Been a while since I laughed so much.
Dying
Wait, what?
-SYA, The Horse
This is quite possiably the dumbest thing I have ever read. I love it.
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Thanks for informing me!
Fixed, and tried to add some additional clarification.
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You're welcome?
The asme thing we do every night
, try to take over the world!
This story is one of the best literary things in literature, literally. You should write some more!
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I appreciate the compliment (and the alliteration), but I'm not really that good, to be honest.
If I kept writing for a year or two straight, perhaps I could consider myself half as good as Pen Stroke. Maybe. With some luck.
So we got a Men in Black reference, Star Trek, and Doctor who as well. What is the guy in black with things in his head supposed to reference?
5456946 same here, but the way I see it, I think you are better than you give yourself credit for. We all have an instinct that says 'don't look stupid!' and it makes us doubt ourselves, hide our school pictures from our classmates and say silly things like what you just said.
So let me put this another way, I hereby declare you to be amazing and that all contrary opinions are invalid.
Now I can't be disagreed with! My logic is undeniable!
...
Maybe I just liked your story enough to go nuts.
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Scorpius and his obsession to get wormhole tech out of the head of John Crichton.
Its a Farscape reference. Classic Sci-fi, but a bit dated.
... And now I feel old...
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Fixed the mass murder. :P
As for what Twilight looked like, I just started with the idea of Solar Flare (Nightmare Celestia), and added more Twilight.
Yes, I will admit that the end is rather anti-climatic. I couldn't think of a better (read: funnier) way to end it, though, so I just went with it.
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Ok, yeah, I should have noticed that. Thanks for pointing it out. I really need to go over these with a fine tooth comb at some point...
This fan-fiction is brilliant. islandeditions.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/two-thumbs-up.jpg
A Farscape, Doctor Who, Men in Black, and Star Trek reference all in one go. Well done, sir. *applause*