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Marshylawl


I am in the making of my first fanfic. So dont hate on the newfag over here.

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After living in a state of depression you realize the only source of happiness is in the show My Little Pony. But sadly, cartoons don't love back. It is a term you have grown to hate. But after a freak accident in Equestria, will your life turn out for the better? All you need is a bundle of joy - or six - to show you the right path.

NOTE: Two things. One, the beautiful cover art was made by Bitter-Knitter. Link to his/her deviantart page: http://bitter-knitter.deviantart.com/
And also, this is my first fanfic, so be wary of that. I will continue my writing only if supported to do so.

EDIT: Ho-ly shi-t. Did not expect in a million years to have this much support ;) THANK YOU!!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 242 )

Tracking for little ponies...:pinkiesad2:

It's good, keep at it
Also at rd sleeping on his chest I must say this: MY DIABETUS!!!

Looks great, keep up the good work :scootangel:

Approve! 20%! :pinkiesmile: Pinkie likes it too...

A nice story =)

But, so far it feels like a my little dashie redo with all the mane 6. Now that's not too bad, I just wanted to give you a heads up.

Now then... :twilightangry2:MOOOOOOAAAR!!!:flutterrage:

P.S: No love for Spike? =<

DAT STORY. It's amazing. Like My Little Dashie, but with Mane 6. I sense a lot of D'awwws and MANLY TEARS. TRACKED! :pinkiehappy: Free to a good home? Okay, thanks! *Le steals off doorstep* >:3

I knew that fact from the beginning, but I digress. Little Dashie's too cute! It should be illegal to be that cute! Actually, they're all adorable, (Grudgingly) even Fluttershy to an extent.

Everyone say it with me now; D'AWWWW!

omg YES!! this neededd to be made :pinkiehappy: i shall track!

and say MMMMMMMMOOOOOOAAAAAARRRR!!!! :flutterrage:

If you do the same thing to the mane six that happened at the end of My Little Dashie, I will never forgive you.

I don't think my heart could take something like that ever again :fluttercry:

Lookin pretty interesting so far. :twilightsmile:

373631 I know I noticed that when I was writing chapter one. I will try to shy away from a remake. Thanks for the support! :pinkiehappy:

374746 I will try to :ajsmug: but we will see DUN dun DUUUN

373631 And another thing, I had no idea how to put in Spike. I thought about it, but I decided to keep it focused on the mane six :raritywink:

But many love for Spikey-wikey :heart:

The coverart does it for me.

GIVE MORE!

He better get another job. He is gonna need it.

Also stop killing me with cuteness :P

Very nice so far, cant wait to see the next chapters, keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

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THE CUTENESS SHALL LIVE ON :flutterrage:

376608
Thanks! It means a lot :pinkiesmile:

Another great chapter!

My only iffy with this though is you (Or... us?) choosing a bowl as the water bearing eatery.:trixieshiftleft:
Yeah, there really isn't any other way I guess, but I just can't help but shake the feeling...

Oh well, other than a more personnal peeve, great work!:twilightsmile:

I just thumbed it up to spite those two that thumbed it down.

And because I really really like the story so far! Very well done.
Still, I have been 'deceived' in the past.

Don't let us down! This story has so darn much potential, and the quality so far is superb.

fiiiiine,

here you can have my soul. The cuteness is too much- keep it up.

(6 daughters?! I cannot begin to think of the madness...)

I need some cure to diabetus now
So cute..
Can't..
Resist......

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG (heart attack because of diabetus and cuteness overload)

THIRD
damnit!Conker, Darkace223 Y U NO WAIT FOR ME TO POST FIRST?!?:twilightangry2:

:ajbemused::applecry::pinkiesick::raritywink::flutterrage:
Now to read the story...

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THE D'AWW LEVELS ARE OFF THE CHARTS!!!

must hold it together.......:pinkiecrazy:

must not break fourth wall!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

Cuteness Levels at Critical repeat Cuteness Levels at Critical "explodes in a rainbow colored mushroom cloud" :twilightsmile::raritywink::pinkiesmile::yay::ajbemused::rainbowkiss::heart: I eagerly await the next chapter.

A good read to brighten my day.

After getting a speeding ticket, fired, and a stalled engine all support your fact.

Wait, I lost my job midsentence without any comment?!!:rainbowhuh:

That doesn't look good for me and my new six charges. They'll need food and toys and shit.:fluttershysad:

Why did I have that book? Had I once planned on being a parent?:derpyderp2:

The cuteness levels, they're OVER 9000!

Ok now that is out of the way, I can say this was a pretty sweet chapter :3

378043 sorry about not going into detail there, I had this all planned out but didnt really work on it. :raritydespair:

378590
It is still eminently readable, I just felt a little too much happened in that sentence. :unsuresweetie:

379033 I'll make note of that for next chapter. I was planning to add that he was fired for being late, due to concentrating on the whole feeling thing earlier, I think chapter one. Thanks for the support! :pinkiehappy:

AH about to upload Chapter Three it's just being proofread so stick around :moustache:

Keep the good work up! :D
Cuteness overload! Hnnnnng...:twilightsmile:

Once again, THE D'AWW LEVELS ARE OFF THE CHARTS!

It is not possible to reach a level of cuteness such as this one.

Teach us more...

My poor hearth...

This is too much cute... I think, oh man.. I'm meeelting...

Are you trying to give me an aneurysm?
Honestly, the levels of cute are too high!

*survives heart attack from last time*
*sees the bed scene*

MY DIABETUS !!!
*fainted again because of cuteness overload*

The cute levels are off the charts! :heart: MUST RESIST DAWWWW ATTACK! :rainbowkiss:

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