When a long thought dead volcano erupts and bring back Mystics creature call Wendigos, no not the ones that make coldness cover the area when Ponies are fighting each other, these ones stole every apple from Equestria. Princess Celestia and Luna had deal with them with the help of two Ponies with Apples in their names. Now, 10,000 years later, they escape and steal all the apples from Equestria again. Unknowing that two sisters stands up to them. Their names are Applejack and Apple Bloom.
Applejack as Donkey Kong
Apple Bloom as Diddy Kong
Base off of Donkey Kong Country Returns which I do not own. I came up with this story over a year ago but never got around to finishing it. Any help would be nice.
Chapters (4)
I might have some advice. Looka at the video walkthroughs on YouTube and you can write down the stages that you liked the most from each world. You don't have to write down every stage because it would take too long, and you don't really have to finish every stage in each world to finish it, you just have to beat the boss. I hope I helped.
4081783 Good too see you again, touileasaso. Yeah was just thinking about that. I already have the boss plan out but I'm getting the levels first.
Pretty good crossover, but you might want to go back over this and correct the noticeable spelling mistakes. You seem to shift perspectives with your words very often.
4081872 I know and I just did, but if I miss any please let me know.
I would say that swamp town area from "Somepony to Watch Over" could work. The beach level has a pirate theme to it. One thing that Donkey Kong Country did right was get rid of the water levels, they weren't bad, but they got annoying really fast. Also, is Granny Smith gonna make an appearance as Cranky Kong?
4086662 Well, since I'm behind on Season four, (I stop watching it after Power Ponies, but I been trying to keep up with shows) I could give it a shot. I will have Granny Smith show, but I don't think I'm going to have a shop. And I found the sound track to DKC Returns so I'll be using music from there. What did you think of the boss? And what can you tell me about the place?
4087277 It's a simple backwoods town with cajun ponies. Sort of like a ponyfied New Orleans.
4087794 My story, my choice! Plus they don't freeze things like the ones from the show and I got plans to do Tropical Freeze after this.
4087730 What the town name? Or does it even have one?
4089518 It doesn't have one.
4090280 Hey SuperPinkBrony12, I just saw on one of your early reviews that you dislike this story. Back when you told me about the Water levels, any reason why?
4091130 I never said I don't like the story. I mearly said that the water levels, while they weren't bad, quickly became an annoying part of the original Donkey Kong Country Triology, largely due to the controls. Whereas on land the Kongs controlled very well, in water you add to take into account the effects of current, and the water levels often tended to be stuffed with enemies and traps that were difficult to overcome.
4091149 I'm going to have the water levels but I never said I was going to have them go in the water and I said I might have them go swimming. I already pick the levels I want to use, I just need a name for the chapter. Just know when you dislike one thing I believe it counts for the whole story.
You are always free to use your imagination. You can just make stuff up, it doesn't have to be directly from the show. I can help you with the name for the beach:Horseshoe Bay.
4091362 Horseshoe Bay, sounds fitting. I'll go with that. All you got to do now is buy me time to write out the World.
As "Daring Don't" showed Equestria has its fair share of anicent American temple ruins. I don't recall there being a name for them though.
4110019 I saw that one. Well that get the ruins partly out of the way. Levels are still being pick on and the name is left. What did you think about this chapter?
4110161 It was good. I'd forgotten about the rocket barrel. Those levels were always the most challenging.
4110233 Well, I want to throw in the barrels that DK uses in his games, what a game that base of off DKCR without the Rocket Barrel and the Barrel Cannons?
Because, nostalgia. They just don't make games like this anymore.
4111086 I play the SNES version before. Never beating it, but play it.
4111695 I had a cousin who owned the highly acclaimed Donkey Kong Country 2 on the SNES. Me and my younger brother use to play it when we were younger.
4111751 I play all three Donkey Kong Country games. Never beat any of them. Got anything that can help me with the ruins?
4111779 Nope.
4111781 That fine. I still haven't pick the levels yet, got the music I want to use but no levels.
4111810 You could probably use some of the ruins from "Daring Don't" and "Read It and Weep". Ahuizotl could probably be the boss.
4111830 Well you notices I been using Applejack's and Apple Bloom friends, right? I'm sticking with that but I will have him as a boss in Tropical Freeze. Maybe I will use the Ruins from the show.
4111855 Well then, perhaps Fluttershy or Goldie Delicious would be a good choice for the boss. Or maybe even Zecora.
4111864 I'm saving Fluttershy for the forest level and who Golden Delicious again?
4111879 Goldie Delicious is the Apple Family member introduced in "Pinkie Apple Pie" who has access to the geneology records of the entire Apple Family.
4113321 That the same episode that has the song "Apples to the Core" that she appear right? If so I miss the Episode but heard the song. The Ruins levels are still being thought on. I got to get back to YouTube and see what levels there are for me to pick. Still nothing on a name yet.
How about Sharpbeak Ruins as the name, deriving from the griffons?
4115929 That sound like a good name. Thanks, don't worry about the next few levels. I got them cover.
If memory serves after the caves comes the jungle.
4204127 You mean forest. The jungle was the first level in DKC returns.
4204224 Oh, right. The comes I believe the mountains, then the factory, and finally the volcano, and the unlockable extra levels.
4204582 Right, That the plan for them. Forest which is the Everfree Forest, only this time they go in the trees, Cliff, as the game calls it, is going to be that place where Rainbow race through in 'May the Best pet win', Factory is going to be Cloudsdale, don't worry I got a plan for that one and Volcano is the only level left that will have a make up name. It going to take some time but hopeful I can get them done.
I think you need to get an editor and add more description and details. The gramme rand lack of description is the only thing I find wrong, though, the story itself is great!
4204824 Thanks for liking my story and you got no idea how many times I hear that, 'Get a editor' sorry for the lack description and details, but I can't keep up with my brain sometimes.
4204866 I can get that. Your brain runs so far ahead of your fingers that you actually have to stop and try to remember what you were writing, which causes you to loose even more. That's pretty much the main problems, grammar and lack of description.
4204884 I try my best no matter how bad I am, I do go over my chapters sometimes and fix anything I miss, but for now I going to rest.
4204905 k. there's nothing wrong with the story itself, just the grammar and description.
4204958 I understand, thanks.
4204999 no prob
Good to hear that you got the game. I hope you enjoy playing it.
4209491 I did, beat it with in a few days but still got lot to get.
This is getting pretty interesting. I'm guessing the next boss is gonna be Rarity then? These Wendigoes are pretty stupid to mess with AJ & AB'S friends. They're gonna regret that at the end.
4437779 Heh, yep Rarity is next and that chapter is taking longer then I thought.
4437817 I see.
This is a good story, but you might want to do whatever you did with this one with the rest of your stories. Or you might want a editor.